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There are three main places that can be found where people waste food the most. Those are houses, restaurants and schools

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Hannah Le: what does place waste food the most?

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Hannah Le: what does place waste food the most?

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There are 3 main places contribute to the food waste problem the most which are houses, restaurants and schools

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Julie (re-post)

Food donation programs help solve the problem of edible or reusable food waste because the programs can reduce food waste, help food insecure people and solve an environmental problem.

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Judy
What should people do in order to reduce clothing waste?

People should avoid following trends, buying poor quality clothes, and changing shopping habits. Can you include your topic in this thesis statement?

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Pawan
What causes of paper waste?
Thesis statement: There are many causes of paper waste such as at home, at school, at work and if we follow rules then we reduce paper waste.

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How can we reduce food waste ?
Anyone can make a difference by shopping smartly, storing food suitably and limiting oversized portions. Can you include your topic in your thesis statement?

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(How waste food can be reduced ?) Check you question structure.
Food waste is very serious problem and it is really important to reduce as soon as possible. People should choose these three ways for reducing food waste that are shop smart, preserve food and need to check expiry date before buy.

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Why should people reduce food waste at home? Alphonse

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Why should people reduce food waste at home? Alphonse

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Everyone should reduce food waste at home because it benefits children, it advances individuals doing it, and it is easy to do. Good - I am not 100% clear about subtopic #2

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Omar

Unfortunately, solid waste which generated from hospitals target the public health by spreading diseases, affecting the environment, and threatening the future .
Omar, this sounds like an effects essay, but the verb 'target' makes it unclear. Do you mean 'affects' our even 'negatively affects'? Check your verb form at the beginning. Subtopic 3 seems very broad. The future of what? Just a caution:rRemember that this essay is YOUR interpretation of this situation with support from research. I am a little worried that you may just write other people's ideas, not your own experiences and thoughts.

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Food waste is very serious problem in these days. People throw lots of food and it give open invitation to many diseases. It is really need to recycle and recycling give very benefits.
Anmol, Good effort! This is  more than a thesis - it has points that could go in your introduction. Can you write ONLY a concise clear thesis statement with your topic, point of view and 3 subtopics? Can you identify the benefits you will talk about? These will be your 3 subtopics.

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Pawan
(What causes paper waste? How can we reduce paper waste?)
Thesis: There are many causes about paper waste such as at home, at school, and at work

"and if we follow rules then we reduce paper waste." (since this is about a solution, save it for your conclusion)
Pawan, this is a good. I am curious to see your supporting ideas. Can you use the correct preposition after "There are many causes..."

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Are 3R rules enough for dealing with plastic waste?

To deal with the overflowing plastic waste 3R rules are not enough, and people should pay, refuse, promote to save the globe.
Good work, Lee. Can you focus this a little more? E.g. "In order to reduce plastic waste, people should'''.. You will need to state what you mean by the 3R rules. Don't assume people understand your abbreviation. Can you use phrases or clauses to make subtopics 2 and 3 clearer?

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Why is clothing waste a serious problem?

The causes of serious clothing waste are that manufacturers are obsessed with profits, recycling technology is immature and government policies are not sound enough.
Excellent work, Eva!

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Julie
Food donation program helps solve the problem of edible food waste because the program can reduce food waste, help the food insure (?) and solve the environmental problem.
Good work, Julie. There are many different food donation programs, but I am sure you will clarify what kind of program you are referring to in your introduction. With a little more work on the grammar details, this will be great!

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How can we reduce clothing wastes? (Judy)
We should avoid following trends, buying poor quality clothes, and changing shopping habits.
Good work Judy! Can you make this universal by avoiding 'we'? If you change your research question to What should people do in order to reduce clothing waste?, then it will lead you to including your actual topic in your thesis.

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Mia-what are the benefits of ecotourism?

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Mia-what are the benefits of ecotourism?

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With the growing development of ecotourism can bring many benefits to the environment, human health and the economy.
Good Mia, you are on your way!

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HannahT- Thesis Statement
Topic: effects of plastic waste recycling
When plastic waste is recycled, there are three main positive effects to environment, finances and human health.
Great job, Hannah! Can you clarify your second subtopic?

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10 (wastewater is neccessary to be treated)
Wastewater should be treated by three ways including agriculture wastewater treatment wetland, industry wastewater treatment system and family sewage treatment.

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There are many effects of too much clothing waste including spending a lot of money, polluting the environment, and catching and killing animals for skin.
Good work so far, Harley. Using 'obviously' suggests, that there is no need to discuss this! What is your third subtopic?

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Joey - Medicine waste - re-post
Is medicine waste a serious phenomenon? How does MW affect people?

Medicine waste at home has is definitely a serious fact those days by many significant effects including on the enviroment, human’s health and nation’s economy.

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Reducing waste is better than recycling it because it is cost effective, it is good for the environment, and it reduces landfill waste. good

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What are the causes of clothing  waste? (Ivan)

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What are the causes of clothing  waste? (Ivan)

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Three causes of clothing waste are fast fashion, greedy companies wanting to make more profits and people's desire to gain more confidence. good

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Jeremy( How does ocean waste affects people’s lives)

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Jeremy( How does ocean waste affects people’s lives)

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Ocean waste has become a serious problem because of its odor, the loss of marine resources, and the effect on tourism.
Jeremy, you are getting closer and clearer - good for you! I focused your statement even more. What is the correct word form to replace 'affection'?