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I like your imagery and the way that your poetry flows. Your poems tend to have a cool shape to them, and you always seem to have your writing directed towards the reader, which is cool.

-- Sara

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I really liked your second poem. I like how it started just simply about colors but also had meaning behind it. Great Job
-Michaela

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I really liked your second poem and how you said that color is the spice of life. That is something that I really enjoyed.

-Arthur

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I really liked your ode poem it was very descriptive and I think the picture you added made everything go together really well.
-Mads

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I really enjoy your What Is A Dream To Me Poem, I think your use of similes and emotions creates a very personal and relatable poem. Great job!
- Grace

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Excellent work on your poem Raised by Women! The rhythm and imagery captivated me

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I really liked your poem, "Because you asked about the line between when your memorizing or actually understanding the information." The way that you explain the differences between memorizing and understand the information are really straight forward, nice job!
- Nhu

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I liked your poem because I thought it displayed a lot of emotion as well as having really good flow.

Jack

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Your poem is very descriptive! I loved the imagery it made me picture gifts in the wind by a boat - Lando

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I like how all of your poems have a lot of adjectives.

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Raised by the Ocean was a really nice poem. I liked how the first few lines started with a  W

-Kyla

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I really appreciate the line breaks in "Ode to My Comfy Bed." You did a really nice job of emphasizing the important parts of the poem, and the imagery was also really lovely.

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Your poem "Its not your body" was really powerful and had a great structure too it. It flowed really well and was really pleasant to read.
-Sal

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I really like your dreams poem. You use some really interesting and uncommon metaphors and have some deep self-reflections.

--Sara

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For Those That Want Your Name To Show Up

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For Those That Want Your Name To Show Up

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When you click sign up you can click a button that says Sign-in with google. You click on your sla email account then boom just like that.

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I could tell that your youth advocacy poem was very personal and I really enjoyed it.

-Arthur

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Your poems are beautiful with amazing description, that really cause the reader to feel at home in your poems.
-Alorae

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I love your poem "Instructions for Staying Asleep." You did make the reading feel vivid. Nice job!
-Asnain

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I really like your Grotesque Five poem. The structure is unique, and you keep it short and sweet (sort of). I also like the way you use a bird to symbolize hope in your artwork.

--Sara

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I really like your first poem that was based off of "Raised by Women. " I like your use of allusions, it makes it all real
-Michaela

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I really like the way your first poem was descriptive you was when describing being around the ocean. It felt like I was there.

-Chloe

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I really liked "ode to golden rays." I found that it was a very descriptive poem that showed a special day for you.

-Arthur

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your poem,  "Because you asked about the line between when your memorizing or actually understanding the information."

had a really nice rhyming scheme too it. It was short, but relatable and easy to understand. Good job!
-Sal

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Loved your poem, Ode to the golden sun rays. It's simple and I get a sense of hope when I'm reading it!
- Nasya

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your poem "some peoples dreams" is a wonderful take on that poem with your very literal sense of the world.
-Alorae

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I like you described  how curiosity drives you to learn while growing uo

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Your poem about snow is beautiful! I love the imagery, and your oxymoronic description of the snow as a warm blanket reminds me that winter can be a time that feels warm when you are surrounded by family, and memories. The way you personified snow creates a connection from the reader to your topic that is strong and emotional, and makes it a poem I could read again and again.

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Bro great insight on colors. you made the way I look at my righting more clear and vibrant
-Jayden

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I like your poem "im only 12" because I also think that forced marriage that young is disgusting
-abe

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I like the way that you bring a piece of your culture to each poem you write, whether through food or through the language itself. Your imagery is really really nice. I also really like your artwork.

--Sara

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Your poem I Am Only TWELVE is really powerful and I think this issue is very important and should be talked about more.
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Your line between poem is absolutely gorgeous, your use of metaphors and vivid descriptions builds a beautifully weaved and paced poem.
The line "Her eyes take pride

In finding new sides to this

Dancing creature" is haunting and so descriptive in a fascinating way.

Much love!
- Grace

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I liked your poem because I liked how you acknowledged the usefulness of making mistakes . I also really liked the line "A mistake won't be mistaken again

Jack

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"Ode to the beach"

Has a calming tone to it which somewhat made me feel relaxed. The way you made it very continuous created a story.

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Your "dear makeup" poem is very beautiful. I like your metaphor of makeup being a mask but it doesn't hide who you are instead it makes you stronger.
-Amira

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Your poem "Instructions on how to manage your time" is very lovely. I love the metaphors. They fit in very well. Great job!
-Asnain

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Looking Away from what 🤬 our children is beautiful. It has such a nice shape to it. I really think you utilized line breaks well

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I really enjoy your descriptions in the dreams poem. It really brings it to life.

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Instructions on how to manage your time

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I really like your poem, "Raised by Heroes." I like your word choice because the verbs you used apply to actual superheroes and they are also metaphoric to your parents.

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I love the way you personified procrastination in your poem! That was a clever way to address something we can all relate to

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I really like you first poem. It was clear how the metaphor related to the title and I feel you put it together well.

-Chloe

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I like your use of personification and imagery. Along with the picture to go along.
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-Michaela

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Your poems written in two languages make such a beautiful reading, the description from the poem is beautiful and your art work on the last poem that shows grey skies turned blue is wonderful and inventive
-Alorae

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I like your poem, "What is a dream?" I like the way you makes it rhyme and I love your metaphor that you turned everyone who's a dream to a fool, also your descriptions is amazing.
- Nhu

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The ode poem was amazing. Your descriptions brought the house to life, and it was like I was looking right at it.

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Your poem "In My Blood" is so good and I love how you incorporated your culture.

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Your poem "The street that raised me" has a lot of detailed description that really helps you understand the setting. I think it's also something a lot of people can relate to, and I think your first stanza is really strong.
-Your pal, Sal

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Your poem "An Ode to my Forever Graying Home," was beautiful. I love the first line "you sit pretty," because it fantastically sets the tone, and personifies the house. I love your use of sound tools and descriptive language; for example in "Piles of delicate dirt and dust
clumping together in cold corners," your use of sound tools is so intelligent and contributes to the immersion of the poem. I also love the line "woodwind concerto" because it is genius.

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Your poem "Life can be too short or too long" is beautiful, I love the way you paint a picture with your words, and present a powerful message
- Grace

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You all did an amazing job. I'm proud of y'all. Keep up the great work.
-Asnain

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I appreciate that you chose a topic that not a lot of people would talk about. Keep up the good work!

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I love how you take advantage of the Spanish language. It makes poetry more meaningful due to the fact that Spanish is a romance language

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I like your first poem, and the way that you wrote it from different perspectives.

--Sara

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I like the line where you say the "The words that tells me I’ve made a mistake,

Are the ones that are never spoken,

The stinging silence speaks 1000 words."" This lines hit home. Like I looked at my own mistakes and noticed that the ones that really bother me are the ones I point out myself without any help.
Great work
-Jayden

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I like your Dreams poems and how you pointed the things that are missing from the dreams.
-Madison

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"Because You Asked About The Difference Between Listening and Hearing" is a simple poem and it has such a good rhythm to it! Also the imagery fits so perfectly. Good job!! <3
- Nasya

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I really like your Instructions For... poem. I feel like your imagery was great and your metaphor worked well. Extended metaphors be hard bro.

--Sara

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Your "Raised by Tiger" poem is very beautiful. You did a good job on the metaphors and I really like the meaning behind it.
-Amira

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Somethings that I liked about your poems is that they really express how you are as a person. GOOD JOB
~key

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I like the creativity in your poems e
-A p

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I like your ode to pencil. The way you breaks the line up and your metaphor for the pencil is really interesting.
- Nhu

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I really liked your dark imagery! It was beautiful.

-Kyla

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I really like your "The Grotesque Five" and how you broke up each line with a different painful emotion. Noice going!
- Grace

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I really like your last poem. It was nice how you made procrastination a person. It was enjoyable to read.

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I like your introduction! It was funny and like you.

-Kyla

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Bro ya poem on the Line between Hate and Jealousy was good. As I was reading it created an image in my mind. I could see the shadowy figures of Hate and jealousy. It gave me chills.
-Jayden

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Your poem "Raised by curiosity" overall has the most enjoyable cadence. I love your use of repetition, and that "I was raised by curiosity," ultimately turned into "curiosity raised me." This poem feels textured, and beautiful and descriptive. I also love the line "forced me from shelter," because it fits so well in your poem, and makes this personification of curiosity so much more vivid. Overall I love your poetry you know that.

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Your poem "Dreams" is very nice. That's what I think about dreams as well.

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I really love the line "The moon stabilized / The stars." The imagery is just very beautiful, and it creates a whole picture in my head of nighttime. I also like the general tone of importance you write with.

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I like your poem about make up. It had a perspective that I loved good job!

Madison

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I like the way that you sett the voice of your seedling poem

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I really like your "Dreams" poem. It's very beautiful and I love the leather flower metaphor.
-Amira

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DAVID! DUDE! As I said before when we passed out notes. You're poem was really the only thing that took my back to a place/scene in middle school that my friends can't even do. Awesome job all together.

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I just reread "raised unschooling" and the lines you added are profound. I loved the line "hands raised, brains trained to..." because that's bars. Additionally your addition to the concept of school being foreign to you adds so much to the poem, and I love it so much. I would write more I ran out of time.

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I love your found poem Francesca! It is so personal, sad and happy all at once. It brings me that great joy and sorrow. Love you legend!
- Grace

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Orlando- Does this make me less American?

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Orlando- Does this make me less American?

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I really liked the message behind this poem and all of the different aspects that you talked about.

Jack