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1. Original:I'm quite intertested in wing chun,and would love to ask him if he would accept me as his apprentice.

A ccepting me as his apprentice,I would love to ask.

2.Original:Sadly he was taken from us too soon and died at the age of 28.

Dying at the age of 28,he was taken from us too soon.

3.Original:Helen Keller is my favourite writer and also my idol.

Being my favourite writer,Helen Keller is also my idol.

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Hearing Lam's voice, people think of the adorable blue robot cat.

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Correction:
original: I’m quite interested in wing chun, and would love to ask him if he would accept me as his apprentice.
Answer: Being interested in wing chun, I would love to ask Bruce Lee if he would accept me as his apprentice

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Correction:
Original: Steve Jobs. He didn’t graduate from university but still managed to invent a number of Apple products with his partner.
Answer: Not graduating from university, Steve Jobs still managed to invent a number of Apple products with his partner.

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Correction:Original: Although she was blind and deaf, she was still optimistic and travelled around the world spreading positive messages that encouraged others
Answer:Being blind and deaf, she was still optimistic and travelled around the world spreading positive messages that encouraged others

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1.Although she was blind and deaf , she was still optimistic and travelled around the world spreading positive massages that encouraged others.
Ans: Being blind and deaf , she was still optimistic and travelled around the world spreading positive massages that encouraged others.

2.He didn't graduate from university but still managed to invent a number of Apple products with his partner.
Ans: Not graduating from university ,Steve Jobs still managed to invent a number of Apple products with his partner.

3.Sadly he was taken from us too soon and died at the age of 28.
Ans: Dying at the age of 28,he was taken from us too soon.

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If I could bring him back from the dead,you can bet that I and all his fan and family would be at his grave for his grand return

Bring him back from the dead,you can bet that I and all of his fan and family would be at his grave for his grand return

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I would bring Jobs back to life so he could make better and stronger apps or devices we could use

Bring Jobs back to life so he could make better and stronger apps or devices we could use

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I’m quite interested in wing chun,and would love to ask him if he would accept me as his apprentice

Interesting in wing chun,I would love to ask him if he would accept me as his apprentice

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1. Original: Sadly he was taken from us too soon and died at the age of 28.
ANSWER :Being taken from us too soon, he died sadly at the age of 28.
2. Original :Apart from being the greatest scientist of the 21st century, he was also a living miracle, being an ALS patient who lived for 76 years.
ANSWER: ... being an ALS patient , he has lived for 76 years.
3. Original: Although she was blind and deaf , she was still optimistic and travelled around the world spreading positive messages that encouraged other...
ANSWER: Being blind and deaf, she was still optimistic and travelled around the world...

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1)She is my favourite writer and also my idol
ans)Being my favourite writer,she is my idol

2)His first track,levels,a remix of Fli Rida's Good Feeling,made this man a DJ God

ans)Making the man a DJ God,his His first track,levels,a remix of Fli Rida's Good Feeling

3)She is my favourite write and also my idol

Although she was blind and deaf

ans)Being blind and deaf,She is my favourite write and also my idol

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Original:Sadly he was taken from us too soon and died at the age of 28.
Dying at the age of 28,Avicii was taken from us too soon.

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1.Question:Although she was blind and deaf , she was still optimistic and travelled around the world spreading positive massages that encouraged others.
Answer : Although being blind and deaf , she was still optimistic and travelled around the world spreading positive massages that encouraged others.
Corrections:Being blind and deaf, she was still optimistic and travelled around the world spreading positive messages that encouraged others

Correction 2)Question  : Sadly he was taken from us too soon and died at the age of 28.

Correction:Dying at the age of 28,he was taken from us too soon.

3.Question:If I could bring him back from the dead,you can bet that I and all his fan and family would be at his grave for his grand return
Answer :Bringing him back from the dead,you can bet that I and all of his fan and family would be at his grave for his grand return

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Original:Although she was blind and deaf , she was still optimistic and travelled around the world spreading positive massages that encouraged others
Ans:Being blind and deaf ,but Helen Keller was still optimistic and travelled around the world spreading positive massage that encouraged others.
2.
Original:I'm quite interested in wing chun, and would love to ask him if he would accept me as his apprentice.
Ans:Being quite interested in wing chun, I would love to ask him if he would accept me as his apprentice.
3.
Original:He didn't graduate from university but still managed to invent a number of Apple products with his partner.
Ans:Not graduating  from university ,but Steve still managed to invent a number of Apple products with his partner.

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Sadly he was taken from us too soon and died at the age of 28.

Answer: Being taken from us, he died at the age of 28.

Question : He was also a living miracle, being an ALS patient who lived for 76 years.

Answer: Being an ALS patient, he was also a living miracle for 76 years

Question: Although she was blind and deaf , she was still optimistic and travelled around the world spreading positive messages that encourage others

Answer: Being a blind and deaf , she was still optimistic and travelled around the world spreading positive messages that encourage others

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Question:Although she was blind and deaf ,she was still optimistic and travelled around the world spreading positive messages that encouraged  others.
answer:Being blind and deaf , she was still optimistic and travelled around the world spreading positive massages that encouraged others.

Question:Sadly he was taken from us too soon and died at the age of 28.
Answer:Dying at the age 28, he was taken from us too soon.

Question:He didn’t graduate from university but still manger to invent a number of Apple products with his partner.
Answer:Not graduating from university, Steve Jobs still managed to invent a number of Apple products with his partner.

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(1)Original: Sadly he was taken from us too soon and died at the age of 28.
Ans: Dying at the age of 28, he was taken from us too soon.

(2) Original: I am quite interested in wing chun and would love to ask him if he would accept me as his apprentice.
Ans:Being interested in wing chun , I would love to ask him if he would accept me as his apprentice.

(3) Original :He didn't graduate from university but still managed to invent a number of Apple products with his partner.
Ans: Not graduating from university, Steve still managed to invent and number of Apple products with his partner.

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1)Original: He's left behind a 50-year legacy with his iconic comic book characters,laying a foundation for almost all the Marvel movies so far.
Answer : Lefting behind a 50-year legacy with his iconic comic book characters,  he is laying a foundation for almost all the Marvel movies so
Correction:(New one)He didn't graduate from university but still managed to invent a number of Apple products with his partner.
Ans:(New one)Managing to invent a number of Apple products with his partner,he didn't graduate from university.

2)Original  :I'm quite interested in wing chun,and would love to ask him if he would accept me as his apprentice.
Answer : Interesting in wing chun, and I would love to ask him if he would accept me as his apprentice.
Correction:Asking wing chun if he would accept me as his apprentice,he had interested by me.

3)Original : Sadly he was taken from us too soon and died at the age of 28.
Answer : Dying at the age of dead,he was taken from us too soon.
Correction:Dying at the age of 28,he was taken from us too soon.

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Andrew
1) Original: Sadly he was taken from us too soon and died at the age of 28.
Answer: Being his taken from us too soon and died at the age of 28.

2) Original: If i could bring him back,he could use his intelligence to help us make more scientific advancements.
Answer: Making more scientific advancements of his intelligence, If i could bring him back.

3) Original: He didnt graduate from university but still managed to invent a number of Apple products with his partner.
Answer: Inventing a number of Apple products with his partner although he didnt graduate from university.

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1. Sadly he was taken from us too soon and died at       the age of 28.
Ans: Dying at the age of 28,he was taken from us too soon

2. I’m quite interested in wing chun,and would love to ask him if would accept me as his apprentice.
Ans: Being interested  in wing chun,Iwould love to ask him if he would accept me as his apprentice.

3.He didn’t graduate from university but university but still managed to invent a number of Apple products with his partner
Ans: Not graduating from university,he still managed to invent a number of Apple products with his partner.

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1)Sadly he was taken from us too soon and died at the age of 28.
Being taken from us too soon and died at the age of 28.
Correction:Dying at the age of 28,he was taken from us too soon.

2)I’m quite interested in wing chun,and would love to ask him if he would accept me as his apprentice.
Being quiet interested in wing chun,and would love to ask him if he would accept me as him apprentice.
Correction:Being quiet interested in wing chun,and I would love to ask him if he would accept me as him apprentice.

3) Being an ALS patient who lived for 76 years.
Being an ALS patient ,he lived for 76 years.

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sadly he was taken from us too soon and died at the age of 28
ans: dying at the age of 28,he was taken from us too soon

I'm quite interested in wing chun,and would love to ask him if he would accept me as his apprentice
ans:Being interested in wing chun,and would love to ask him if he would accept me as his apprence

Although she was blind and deaf,she was still optmistic and trallved around the world spreading positive message
ans: Being blind and deaf,she was still optimistic and trallved
around the world spreading positive message

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1) she is my favourite writer and also my idol
Being my favourite singer she is also my idol

2) i’m quite interested Wing Chun, and will love to ask him if he will accept me as his apprentice
Being Interested in Wing Chun,I will love to ask him if he will accept me as his apprentice

3) I will bring Jobs back to life so he could make better and stronger apps or Device we could use
Bringing Jobs  back to life,he could make better and stronger apps or Device we could use

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Sadly he was taken from us too soon and died at the age of 28

Dying at the age of 28,he was taken from us too soon

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I’m quite interested Wing Chun,and will love to ask him if he will accept me as his appearance

Interesting Wing Chun,I will love to ask him if he will accept me as his apprentice

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1. ORIGINAL:
Sadly he was taken from us too soon and died at the age of 28.
ANSWER:
Dying at the age of 28, he was taken from us too soon.

2. Original :
She is my favourite writer and also my idol.
ANSWER:
Being my favourite writer , she is my idol.

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1.ORIGINAL:

Sadly he was taken from us too soon and died at the age of 28

ANSWER: Dying at the age of 28 ,he was taken from us too soon

2.ORIGINAL:

She is my favourite writer and also my idol.

ANSWER: Being my favourite  writer , she is my idol.

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Andrew (corrections)
1.Sadly he was taken from us too soon and died at the age of 28.
Ans: Dying at the age of 28, he was taken from us too soon.

2. Being an ALS patient who lived for 76 years.
Ans: Being an ALS patient, he lived for 76 years.

3. Although she was blind and deaf, she was still optimistic and travelled around the world spreading positive messages that encouragred others,such as “Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow”

Ans:  Being blind and deaf,she was still optimistic and travelled around the world spreading positive messages that...

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1. The two sentences must share the SAME subject
2. Check out the FIVE functions and decide which one is the MAIN sentence
3. Verb in MAIN sentence need not be changed

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Miss Elvira was sent to mental hospital because of me.

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Ms Elvira is teaching us English today.

Ms Elvira has been sick today.

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Ms Elvira has woke up late this morning

Ms Elvira was sick today

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We are learning anything about English as Ms Elvira told us to learn English

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Ms Elvira also love you because of me.

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Ms Elvira is a very great English teacher.

Ms Elvira did not gave us any homework today.

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Ms Elvira was working at school today.

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Elvira making something terrible

Elvira was sent to the police office

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Tommy took photos yesterday. He dropped and broke his camera.