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I added a fact about about water buffalo, and I said that they are 8 hours ahead of EST time and I said that when we are eating lunch they might be eating dinner.

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I was thinking of somthing i could releate too and draw a theme in my head.

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I had to paint a scene by saying that it will be the size of Airiza  if all the Islands were in pecs

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i had a hard time i will try it again

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I did a painting a scene. I helped them imagine what it looked like and felt like in Ireland. I also added more detail about the country.

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l made my intro into a paint a scene

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I made it spusific like I said Frrance has things like this or this. I made things clare.I think my intro is cool.

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I changed the facts in my intro into a scene and tried to make you picture flying around Nepal off of Mount Everest

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I did a little of personalizing my by adding a question if they like something. intro but also painted a picture in my intro I tried to connect to one of my holidays.

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I am adding more to my intro. i made a story for my intro

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I did a mix between personalize  and paint a scene. I  explained things about Norway and related to things they might know.

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I added to my introduction, A narrative. Of a kid that has to chores in Egypt

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I added more about the landscape and plants in Puerto Rico. And talked about air plants and how they collect nutrients from the air.

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I tried to "paint an image" in the readers head. I compared Denmark's landscape and climate to Vermont.

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In my lead sentence I painted the scene. I tried to make the reader picture what I was talking about.

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Like Ciro has the worst air pollution and making it readible and i think i did personalize

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I am in the process of making my new intro more in joyable to read and making a seperate page for location, place.

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I added a "paint a scene" i made a picture in the readers head