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Really wonderful movement in your brush strokes in the sky.

Can you apply some of the detailed brush strokes to the fire/tree?

Be careful with your color scheme so it doesn't start to feel mixed up.

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Really nice attention to detail. I like the variety of brush sizes and shapes you used. All the horizontal brush strokes in they sky make it feel soothing.

Can you use some different shades and tints of colors to add detail and textures?

Try working on large parts of you painting and thinking about details like shadows and texture.

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Nice variety of brush strokes and brush sizes. I really like the different colors, shades and tints you chose to paint the town and hills.

Did you know that darker colors feel heavier?

Remember to fill in the very bottom of the page.

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I really like the brushstrokes you used in the background.

Can you use some of those types of brush strokes to paint the figure?

Think about your color scheme, and stay away from using pure black. Use dark shades of a color like blue, purple or red to add shadows and details.

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Great choice of colors. Really love the deep saturated oranges, greens and purples contrasting each other. Nice shadow on the vase.

What can you do to add depth and detail?

Think about using different size brushes and adding some highlights to create more detail and emphasis.

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Really nice consistency in attention and detail throughout the painting. Great use of layers and detail to create a sense of depth.

Can you use the direction of the brush strokes to add a sense of perspective?

Think about the angle of the table and see if you can use brush strokes that go in the same direction as the table.

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Nice use of your darkest color to add weight at the bottom of the image, it really grounds the painting and makes the purple flowers feel lighter than they would if the table cloth were a lighter color.

What can you do to add some depth and detail to the painting?

Think about what is in the background and what is in the front. Try to bring the details to the front of the picture by making them darker or brighter.

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Great use of tints, shades and detail. The brush strokes in your details really make the image come alive.

Could you add some very dark shades or deeper mid-tones?

Think about creating more layers of depth, with some darker shades or adding a gradient.

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Really energetic brush strokes. I really like how they lead it all sorts of directions and flow around the image.

Can you use the same techniques for making shadows on the bridge to add shadows around the edge of the pond or in the grass?

Try to stay away from using too much grey, add more color to some tints and shades to make the color scheme pop out.

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Great use of size, shape and color to create the illusion of depth and perspective. I really like how the textures carry through from the water, bridge and back into the grass.

Did you think about adding highlights to the water and bridge?

The light green on the left side of the grass really adds a nice contrast. Think about creating an emphasis on one place in the picture by adding other highlights.

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Nice impressionist use of line and brush strokes in the flower details. The leaves and flowers are really wonderful.

Can you give the bottle and table cloth some of the same detail?

Think about using tints and shades to add shadows and make the bottle feel like it is sitting on the table.

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Add More Detail to Sky and Add 3 Houses w/ Techincal Pen

-Shades of Green

-Diff Color Stump

-Unify Hill vs. Ground

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Awesome lines and brushstrokes in the sky. The colors and movement really pop out and create a sense of depth.

Why is the tree all black?

You can use a color instead of black, like dark blue or very dark purple to make the tree feel like it fits in and blends with the painting.

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@Colin Definitely agree with your suggestion about the tree stump. Thanks.

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@MattP Thanks for your input! Good idea, that was definitely on my bucket list of things to do. :)

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@Cole Thanks for your input! what areas do you suggest I touch up? I will come around. Thanks, Zach.

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@Jack Thank you very much for your input. I will talk to you about what detail I should add. Thanks again!

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@Ellie Thank you! That was my goal in designing this.

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@Elena Thank you for your input with the strokes. I'd love to talk with you and get a better understanding. :) Awesome idea, will incorporate it into my design for sure.

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@Lucy My color scheme is a blue/purple and green to make it a cool color scheme.

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Matt-
Interesting detail and color scheme. What tools did you use (eg: what brush?) Add more brush strokes to the sky as Aidan said. Good work. :)

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Jack, very nice color scheme. Very good way to put it together. What methods did you use to put in so much detail? One suggestion is to keep playing with your town and the lines and the brushstrokes. Nice work. :)

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Great layering and use of opaque colors to create contrast.

Did you put the orange color on the edges of the jacket on purpose?

Stay away from black for making lines, use very dark blue or green to create lines that fit with the color pallet.

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Character seriously looks like a cartoon character, A+ on that. Beard and lips are precise, especially the pink inside. How did you manage to put all this work in in just a few short classes? One suggestion I have for you is to keep playing with the brush strokes. Good work.

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Sarah, I really like the color and detail into those flowers. Very nice. Why did you use cool colors and warm colors together? I'd recommend using other colors to brush stroke to make the flowers a little more interesting and colorful.

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Ellie, goes together really nicely. Cool colors are cohesive very nicely alongside one another. What brushes did you use? I recommend also continuing to work with the Technical Pen. Good work. :)

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Jayme, good detail, effect, and artistic features. How did you come up with the color scheme you used? One suggestion is to use the technical pen to unify the design. Good work Jayme. :)

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Remi, this is PURELY AWESOME. Great combo of cool/warm color schemes. Awesome detail, brush strokes, and effect. How did you make this come together so nicely in only a few short class periods? One suggestion I have for you is to make sure the beautiful blue background does not have any blank white in it. Best one yet. :)

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I love the different directions and colors of brush strokes in the water. It really gives the illusion of depth and movement.

Is there a way to add detail or more contrast to the painting?

Use some opaque colors to add emphasis and weight.

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Amy, great cool color scheme. Creativity is shown. Why did you use the brush that you chose? One suggestion I have for you is to try out the flat round brush. Nice work. :)

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Lucy, very creative and colorful color scheme and small details in there. Brush strokes are visible and cool colors are used. Why did you use a purple bridge? I like it, just asking. Maybe make those lilypads in the water a little more visible and noticeable. Good work. :)

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I really like the detail of the mountain and the stars, and the brush strokes look really good. I would work on showing those brush strokes and detail in the town.

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Ellis, this is really realistic. Great sight to look at. Why did you mix cool and warm together? Maybe make stripes in the background or some other design to better utilize the empty space. :) Good work.

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I really like your colors and the details/shadows in the flower part with yellow and green. The back wall looks good, too. Maybe add more detail to the table or make it match the color scheme. What is the color scheme? Right now the vase kind of blends in with the table so maybe fix that

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I really like the colors and the way that the sky looks, it is really cool. I also like how you used different shades of green on the hill. I would add a little bit more detail to the grass on the hill.

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Elena, this is super unique. Great interpretation of this painting, mine was different than this. How did you copy the city so precisely? I couldn't do that! Keep working with your brush strokes, they already look really good.

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I like how detailed the grass is. Why is everything solid colors. You should use more sizes of the brushes.

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Colin, I love the cool color scheme you'e chosen, it is very much like the original. I think you need to add more dark blues and greens and very light blues and greens. It feels like they are all the same tone which make the drawing very flat. I do like the background and seeing the brush strokes. Work on the lily pads and making them in different shades and tints of the greens so we can see the brush strokes there too.

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Great layering of brushstrokes. You created a really interesting contrast of transparent textures and solid colors.

What part of the image did you want to emphasize?

Choose some other shades and tints of the colors to create more contrast in the portrait.l

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I like how visible the brushstrokes are in this picture. What is the color scheme? I would make the lily pads less transparent.

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I like the different shades of the colors in this image. I would add a little bit more detail to the jacket, because it blends in too much and doesn't stand out at all

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Cole-
This is absolutely stunning! I love the cooler color scheme and especially the green glowing eyes. Very clever. How did you make the background brush strokes SO PRECISE? One suggestion I have for you is to keep working on the jacket, making modifications where needed such as straightening some of the lines to make he jacket look more precise. Nice work. :)

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I like the contrast between the flowers and the background and how you had no line separating the flowers and leafs from the background.

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I like how it's easy to see all of your brush strokes. Why'd you decide to make the piece sort of translucent? I'd suggest you work on you color scheme.

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i like the color scheme and how every color has multiple shades. you should add more contrast to make the strokes pop out more

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I like the brush strokes used in the water. You should delete the lines on the original picture.

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I like how bright the flowers are. Why is everything the same shade. You should add some more brush strokes to the table.

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I like how you can see the different brush strokes. Maybe add more shades of the colors.

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Colin-
Blue and green is a cool color scheme, which is PERFECT in this case. Great ideas. What kind of brushes did you use to make your brush strokes? One suggestion I have for you is to "play" with the brush strokes a little bit more and shading it when needed. Really nice work! :)

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I like the Christmas theme and how visible the brushstrokes are. I would make the tree stump a different color so it fits with the color scheme.

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I like your colors and the details in the town and mountains look really good. You could add more brush strokes to the sky and tree thing because they are kind of blurry. I think your color scheme is blues, purples, greens (adjacent colors).

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I like the idea of the Christmas tree, and the fact that you can see the brush strokes. I would add more shades of green on the grass to give it more detail.

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I like how you added darker shades of green so you can tell that its grass. Maybe add some more lighter shades of blue to the water.

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I really like the colors in this one. How did you choose them? They are very unique to this image and it gives the painting almost an old-western vibe. I would maybe use the technical pen tool to outline the man's jacket and body so it stands out from the background.

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I like the color scheme used. You should add more brush strokes to the blue part of the sky so it looks more interesting

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I like the originality of the Christmas tree. Creative. Why did you decide to make the moon transparent? I'd suggest you simply touch up some places, but other than that it's great.

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Aidan-
Interesting color scheme for sure. Unique, and that is what is important in my opinion. Brush strokes are EXTREMELY well done and precise. The brown jacket has sooo much detail! How did you make all of this happen in only a few class periods? One suggestion I have for you is to keep adding detail, because it will only make it look better. :)

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I really like the creativity in the color scheme. One thing I would work on would be to make sure that the image shows individual brush strokes.

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Nice pink gradient on the water, it has a very smooth transition from dark to light.

Did you add the texture in the lilies? Or is that the photoshop grid pattern coming through?

I really like the way the lilies are transparent and textured. You could make your own organic texture to go behind the transparent purple lilies.

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I like how you make your brush strokes very visible and how did you make you color scheme so nice and as a suggestion finish your artwork

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I like how you made it christmas themed but i think there should be more detail

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I like the color scheme used in the painting with all of the variants of red orange and brown. Why is his eye area darker than the rest of his body.

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I like the brush strokes in the background and the color scheme. You should add more to the jacket.

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I like how much detail there is in the swirly parts. Why is the brownish mountain all the same color. You should add more brush strokes and different shades of colors.

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I like the colors you chose it is cool and it feels like winter. How did you pick these colors? Also, how did you decide to use a pencil-like style for the brushstrokes - it is very unique. I would maybe have the background get gradually darker or lighter to add some perspective.

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the yellow and green go really well together
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the table and vase look like they're the same object, maybe make one lighter or darker

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Drew-
I like the idea of this painting and it seems very surreal. How did you make the pink water so amazing with those brush strokes? Brilliant. A few suggestions I have for you is to continue to work on your brush strokes (especially in your flowers) and keep going with the awesome brush strokes in your background. This also confuses me since you have warm colors (pink) and cool colors (blue and green) together. Think about warm/cool colors. Good work.

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I really love the brush strokes you've got going on in the sky. The color choice there is also really nice. It feels like I'm looking up into the milky way gallaxy! I think that the houses/trees don't really fit into this color scheme too well, they are to bright and clean. Can you mute the green down a bit? And the other colors in the village, can you make them dark green or dark blue so that it fits into a cool color scheme better?

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I like the consistent warm color scheme and how it's easy to see the ripples in the water. Why does the red extend out of the lily pads? I's suggest you make more visible brush strokes.

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I like how you can see every stroke and how it looks like a water painting. you should make more contrast between the water and lily pads

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I like the color you used for the water and the shading you used. I would make sure that the lily pads aren't transparent.

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I like how you set to a specific color scheme and then contrasted the mountain from the sky how did you make your brush strokes so visible and make the houses more in tune with your artwork in the sky

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I really like the colors that you used and how you made everything blend instead of outlining it

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The outlines are a nice touch to make the image pop more. I also really like the colors you used. I would suggest adding some blue to the flowers so it is seen not only in the background.

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I like how you added a darker blue to the bridge to make it look more detailed. Maybe you could do that for the background.

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I like how you used different shades of blue and green. I would maybe add some lighter shades of green in the grass.

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I like the color scheme you used. why did you make part of it a checker board

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I like how the color scheme is clear. Why are the brush strokes so big in the water? You should add more shades to the flowers.

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I really like the colors of your flowers
why did you deside to make the design fuzzy and a little blurry
maybe you could add more shadows to the vase to make it flow nicer

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I like how I can see the brush strokes really easily and also I like the different shades of blues on the bridge. Maybe you could create a solid background so that there aren't any white spaces.

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I like how everything is outlined and looks kind of like a cartoon. maybe make more shades of each color

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I like the shift from darker yellow into the bright yellow on the background, and the way you use the same idea again with the dark red on the left moving to bright red on the right in the lilies.

What can you do to add depth to the picture?

Think about adding layers with a variety of textures on top and below the water surface.

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it looks a lot like the actual painting
why did you decide to keep it its original colors and not different ones
add more shading to the black tower

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I like the bright color scheme but i like how it also looks dark. How did you make the background bled together and make it look like its moving.

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Yellow water? Hope my dog didn't pee in it. Awesome color scheme, perfect utilization of the WARM color scheme. Brush strokes are very well done and it has that surrealism in it too. Yellow water isn't something you'd expect regularly, but it works with your awesome warm color scheme. How did you come up with this interesting idea? One suggestion I have for you is to keep working on those brush strokes because it is already so good. Make it look even more like brush strokes. :)

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I like how the yellow complements the purple and the green complements the red. Why did you use bright pink? You could make the pink darker so that the colors are cool and the only warm ones are the complements.

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JP, I really like the color scheme you went with, its very different than the original! I can see the different tones, lights and darks of the colors you've used, I would suggest adding in the dark/lights not in such a strait diagonal line. Curve around the lily pad. Introduce some of the darks and lights into the water in other areas too, not just the left side.

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I like how you did not go to a specific color scheme and you made a nice level of contrast between the mans jacket and the background and how did you get your brush strokes so visible

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I really like the different colors in the background

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I really like the color of the sky and how you used different brush strokes. I also like how you used different yellows on the tree to make it look like it is glowing

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I like the color scheme. All the colors are seen in the water and the lily pads so it looks really good. How did you do the water? All the brush strokes blend very well. I would suggest maybe making the brush strokes go more in one direction so the water looks more real.

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I like how you added outlines to the leaves. Maybe you could add some more colors to the table.

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I really like your design and the sky looks super cool. Maybe you could add smaller brush strokes to the trees and grass with the technical pen to make it look less blended and more textured. What is your color scheme? If it's blue green purple (adjacent) you could add more blue in the grass details. I really like it

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I like how you did something unique with the image and made a christmas tree, also the sky is really cool and you can see the different strokes. What is your color scheme?

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I really like the design you made the detail is really good

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I really like the design you made the detail is really good

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why did you mkae the skin blue?

add some brush storkes to add definition to the jacket
-ellis

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Hey Will-
Strong start. Good utilization of brush strokes. I agree with Aidan's question, what is the TRUE color scheme? One suggestion I have is to reunify your color scheme. Keep working, looks good.

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I like how you use lots of shades of green throughout the picture. I would maybe add some more details to the clouds.

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the color scheme is good
why is the background all strokey and the guy isnt
make the guy strokey as well