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[Marina: I don't know what just happenned to the doc, it was uploaded the day we saw it in class and now it just disappeared. I'm uploading it again...]

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Good, Lola. Neat and well-organised/thought out. Tim.

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Good, Zoe. Good choices and it is organised well. For the collocations with 'work', make sure you show the position of each word (before or after 'work') Tim

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Good use of headings/categories. I like your choice of 'to school someone' - this is actually used a lot in modern English! Tim.

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Very good. The next stage may be to add some example sentences.Tim.

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You've made some interesting choices of vocabulary with lots of compound nouns. Well done! Tim

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Very good. The next stage could be to add more collocates for the verbs e.g. to fail (noun), to retake (noun). Tim.

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I like the fact you've included collocations. Examples can help give more context, too. Tim

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Lubomir Janšta

I like the way you've included information on the position of the adjectives and your choice of vocabulary.  Tim.

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Quite good, but you could have added examples, too. Also to 'graduate from' is more common in the UK by the way. Tim

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Quite good. Think about what extra information you could add to each word entry. Tim.

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Fine. Well-organised with good examples. Tim

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I like the layout of the collocations. Could you have added some examples for the first section? Tim.

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I like the layout & the fact you added examples adds more context. Well done! Tim.