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You show a clear beginning and end! Can you think about the middle of the story? Think about the problem with Jamal

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Carla, you added some events that didn't actually occur. However, I like how you showed the events of the story by adding lots of details and dialogue.

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Mason, I like the slide you showed in the beginning. Can you think about how Bootcamp end? Is your slide accurate?

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Maria, nice job showing the beginning and middle events. Does your last slide show how the story end?

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Dylan, nice work especially in your middle and end. Think about the beginning slide you created. Did this event happen? -Ms. Ramoo

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You did an awesome job showing the events of the beginning of the story! I wish you continued to add more to the middle and end as well.

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Nice work. I like the beginning and middle slides you created. At the end, does Jamal take the last shot? I would double check that!

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Julio, I like how you showed the events of the story. Be mindful of the setting you created. Although they are fun, do they match the story?

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Amy, I enjoyed reviewing your comic strip! I really enjoyed the facial expressions you added to the characters.

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Nathaly, well done. I like the way you showed most of the major events of the story!