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Harriet Tubman-every great dream begins with a dreamer

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Harriet Tubman-every great dream begins with a dreamer

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1. I like my introduction,I think I put enough detail.
2. I need to think about much better adjectives and heading ideas.
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Harriet Tubman - the unstoppable fighter

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Harriet Tubman - the unstoppable fighter

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1. I really liked how I did it as descriptive as possible because I usually just search lots of researches but I don't use that much information about it but this time I  did it properly by not just writing only a little bit of facts.

2. I have a feeling to work more on descriptive writing to make it more biography - ish.

3. I'm especially proud of my sub headings because they are interesting make me more proud because i usually write boring ones.....

Kanon S

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1.).I think I used my good imagination and good similes.
2.).I think that I need to work on putting spaces after full stop and commas because that messes up everything and it looks like one long word.
3.).I'am really proud of the whole paragraph which is called ''The life-changing accident.",Because,I think that I wrote some good adjectives and I have used some words that I'am really proud of.

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1. i think i added good description and understanding into my biography.

2. i think i still need to work on better ideas and different vocabulary and sentence structure.

3.

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1. I think I added very good, detailed description.
2. my introduction could have had more information.
3. The heavy wight collided with her skull.
Bianka

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1. I realy liked how you started sentences.

2. I need to write more and describe more things which happened.

3. hited into her head which made a crack sound.

Boris

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1. I think i did really well with the subheadings 

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1. I think i did really well with the subheadings 

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2. I need to work on describing things better

3. "After her death she became an icon of freedom and bravery. Statues, streets, books, movies, memorials, schools, documents and more were made/named after her-a heroine and freedom fighter for the world. People remember her to this day.

Lilly

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Harriet Tubman: the unstoppable victim of slavery

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Harriet Tubman: the unstoppable victim of slavery

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1. I think I did pretty well on the "dreams of the north" paragraph over all.
2. I think i could have done better on the second paragraph of her childhood.
3. The more she dreamed of freedom, the more determined she got. I really liked the determined the more, the more sentence structure

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1.I really liked My Description about the Underground Railroad because I did add a lot of information

2.I would like to work on my Early life because I did not put enough information about Mrs Cook.

3.I liked my sentence in my introduction when I used a metaphor "slavery polluting the air"

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1. I think I did well with subheadings

2. I need to work on thinking some good idea for describing things.

3. After her death she became freedom. In our days she is still famous . There is lots of books, movie, statues, school around the world. She is the new Moses  who was a freedom fighter.

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1. I liked my ''Born into slavery'' because I think its very detailed and I presented it in a short way but the paragraph still took up a whole page

2. I think I could have added more information in the introduction, and in the ''Early Life'' paragraph I didnt really mention Ms. Cook.

3. I liked my dramatic dash sentence and here it is: Bravely, Harriet stepped between the slave and the overseer- the metal weight crashed with her skull, Minty was now laying on the floor.

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1. I think I added lots of great adjectives.
2. I didn't explain the Underground Railroad really well.
3. When she was six years old, Minty's worries that she would get hired out were finally realised. I think I have done a good job writing this, because I explained everything very well.

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1. I really liked my subtitles for the Civil War.

2. I think I could maybe add one more question to my introduction.

3. I really liked my short sentence 'freedom was in the air.' because I wrote it when Harriet stepped into Pennsylvania, so I thought it would be nice when she was now free.

Matyáš

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1. I liked my repetition for effect because it builds suspense.
2. I would like to work on my adjectives and adverbs.
3. "  Soon Harriet Tubman was put in the records of human history, and would never be forgotten again…" I especially liked this one because it has suspense, like the part of, " would never be forgotten again...".

Matias.

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1. I think I added a lot of verbs, adjectives and adverbs for the long ride to freedom, and I am happy with most of the other things I added in.
2. I think  I have to upgrade and up level a little bit of my description about the underground railroad and who used it and how. Just a little bit of more information about using the underground railroad and it would be good.
3. I think I did well on describing the long way to freedom and I added how tough it was and how hard the long way was, but it made sense because  they all wanted to be free, as most people did not make it to freedom, I am especially proud of the sentence.

Charlie

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1.I believe I had a good introduction because I put enough information into it but not too much.
2. I think my Underground Railroad description could have had  more things about the safe houses and codes.
3. 2-pound weight strikes I like it because it makes me want to read the paragraph.

Mateo

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1. I think that my paragraph of Harriet where and when she was born and made my facts accurate and true.
2. My life changing accident paragraph wasn't that good because i didn't describe that much.
3. After her death in 1913, she became an icon of justice and freedom. I like that sentence because she became famous fought for justice.

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1.I really liked My Description about the Underground Railroad because I did add a lot of information

2.I would like to work on my Early life because I did not put enough information about Mrs Cook.

3.I liked my sentence

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1. I think I gave a really detailed description of the Underground Railroad. I made sure all my facts were correct and clear.
2. My introduction could have included more information.
3. ??D??? I am especially proud of this sentence because I included exciting descriptions, parentheses and similes.