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effects of mechatronic systems in agriculture 

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effects of mechatronic systems in agriculture 

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(i modified my sub titles to match the evidences, can you please check if it's good)

I.                Improved Crop Yield

a.     Implementation of precision agriculture

(talking about soil moisture sensors)

b.     Automated agriculture techniques

(explaining that robots are more efficient than human labor)

the third main point

I.                Technoeconomic Obstacles

a.     High total investment

(talking about initial and maintenance cost)

b.     Initial implementation

(talking about system technology complexity)

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can I start the definition of the main point with this means like this, is it wrong:

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can I start the definition of the main point with this means like this, is it wrong:

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The use of technology in math classes is one of the solutions to math anxiety among students. This means to take advantage of technological tools to enhance math education

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Is there a word limit for the conclusion ?

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is this a good topic sentence for my conclusion?

In summary, there are many solutions to reduce the use of thermal energy in food factories.

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Theme word- administrative work

Lastly, AI helps with administrative works in the hospitals. There are many tasks in the hospitals that are simple but it takes time. AI helps in healthcare tasks, so the staff can have time for the more urgent and important tasks.

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If I used two sentences for my response. Do I need to Submit the same evidence twice?

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in my conclusion, I do not restate the thesis correct? I only discuss my points/theme words.

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Topic sentence:

Mindful execution is another solution to math anxiety.

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IoT technologies play a major role in improving safety in smart cities by integrating sophisticated data systems, which allow for quick decision-making and accuracy to address safety concerns.

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(Theme word- drug discovery)

Another solution for AI in solving the challenges in the healthcare section is to help in drugs discovery. AI helps in cheaper drugs finding.

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green part of body para( physiotherapy theme word is faster recovery , point A is improved mobility):

Postoperative physiotherapy is the healthcare practice that uses physical function after a surgical procedure. Regular physiotherapy after an injury results in improved mobility. By being consistent to physiotherapy classes, function will be regained as a result from joint movements exercises.

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is this a good example?

For example, using steam recapture systems in the food industry helps capture excess steam from cooking processes and reuse it for heating, which reduces thermal energy waste and enhances efficiency.

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Topic sentence:

Theme: the personality of the teacher

Another solution to math anxiety is developing the personality of the teacher in a positive way.

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Can I start the topic sentence then the evidence at 1b only then the response

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Can I start the topic sentence then the evidence at 1b only then the response

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Additionally, AI helps the doctors with patients diagnosing. Jiang et al. (2017) stated….

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Can I change the theme word in the outline if I found a better one?

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Is this a good example?

Lokomat, for instance, is an innovative robot-assisted gait training tool that moves the legs through a normal walking motion to help patients with mobility problems.

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example for unpreparedness (theme word)-0183

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example for unpreparedness (theme word)-0183

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Should i keep the second sentence in my example, is it important to add?

To illustrate, in 2021, a mid-sized Minnesota Bank had substantial cybersecurtiy issues as a result of inadequate IT staff and budget contraints. This led to major monetary losses and negative publicity.

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Another benefit of incorporating IOT in smart cities is that it allows for more effective public safety measures.

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dr the green part of the body para is the definition of the theme point or poont A?

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Precision is one of the solutions used in the healthcare field. Technology known as artificial intelligence (AI) gives robots the ability to make decisions, learn and think similarly to people, which aids in data analysis and issue solving. AI decreases medical scans reading errors in the healthcare field. These reduced errors help in accurate patient diagnosing.

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In the conclusion I paraphrase thesis point with points A and B and write them in one sentence?

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Introduction to 1a point:

Theme word: online game-based learning

One of the technological tools is Online games that are designed to teach math in an enjoyable way.

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is this a good example for cyber risks. -0183

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is this a good example for cyber risks. -0183

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For example, Finastra, a renowned financial technology business, was impacted by a ransomware attack in March 2020 that exploited digital weaknesses, causing the server to go down.

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is this a good example?

For example, high-pressure processing (HPP), produces fresh juice while killing bacteria that’s harmful for humans without using high heat, which saves energy and keeps the juice fresh and clean.

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Second topic sentence :

Another benefit of postoperative physiotherapy is patients enhanced quality of life.

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1a -can I put this definition then the first solution at 1a point.

Precision is one of the solutions used in the healthcare field. Technology known as artificial intelligence (AI) gives robots the ability to make decisions, learn and think similarly to people, which aids in data analysis and issue solving. AI decreases medical scans reading errors in the healthcare field.

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is this a good topic sentence for 3b?

Additionally, sustainable methods in the food industry are another beneficial solution for reducing the use of thermal energy.

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For instance, gunshot detection systems such as ShotSpotter can identify the exact location of gunfire and alert law enforcement within seconds.

Can I use the name of a company like this? Is the punctuation correct?

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Lastly, one significant disadvantage of banking technology is the increased danger of cyber risks.

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Topic sentence:

Theme word: the use of technology

The use of technology in math classes is one of the solutions to math anxiety among students.

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11/17/24- term paper practice, questions

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11/17/24- term paper practice, questions

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is this a good topic sentence for 2b?

Furthermore, enhancing resource performance in the food industry reduces excess waste such as energy.

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Robotic systems enable precision agriculture, producing effects such as improved resource efficiency and reduced waste. (I tried to add my focus is it right this way)

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is it a good topic sentence? (3a)

Energy procedure improvement is another solution to reduce the use of thermal energy in food factories.

is this enough for background?

Food processing strategies often include methods like using more efficient machines and use less heat.

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is this a good topic sentence for 2b?-0183

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Moreover, digital banking contributes significantly to financial inclusion by making financial services more accessible and easier for underprivileged and remote communities.

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Finally, despite the positive effects of mechatronic systems in agriculture, technoeconomic obstacles have limited the adoption of these technologies.

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For example, MindMotion Go is a virtual reality tool that helps patients with neurological conditions through engaging exercises to boost their mobility performance and cognitive function. It plays a crucial role in motivating patients and improving their rehabilitation journey.

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Thesis:

Three techniques educators can use to reduce student’s math anxiety are utilizing technology, developing positive teacher attributes, and implementing psychological strategies.

Theird point theme word: changing students thoughts

Is it a good theme word ?

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is this a good background sentence?

Reusable energy is the process of restoring excess heat from factories and reusing it for heating or other purposes with the intention of lowering consumption and increase energy efficiency.

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Another benefit of financial technology is its capability to increase availability.

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is this enough for background information for Main Idea 1?

IoT enhances traffic management in smart cities by enabling real-time data analysis from interconnected sensors. Implementing IoT in these systems is crucial, as it supports smarter, data-driven decisions for improved urban mobility.

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For instance, in California, strawberry farms use robots equipped with sensors and cameras to detect the maturity of each crop, enabling them to select only those that are ready for harvest.

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Topic sentence for point b

Moreover, neurological disorders can be treated with virtual reality tools used in physical therapy for senior individuals.

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A key way to solve the challenges of AI in software development is by creating trust between developers and AI systems.

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is this a good topic sentence for 1B? -0183

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is this a good topic sentence for 1B? -0183

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Additionally, implementing fraud reduction enhances effectiveness by reallocating resources, allowing organizations to concentrate on progress and less on addressing losses.

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I checked the references but not all of them can be found as a pdf file, what should i do?

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Is this a good topic sentence for 1b

Additionally, Variable Frequency Drives is another solution to improve motor performance and reduce operational expenses, which is important for developing sustainable production in the food processing industry.

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Another solution that physical therapy offers for treating neurological illnesses is the use of innovative technologies.

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Robotic systems enable precision agriculture, allowing efficient resource use. This optimizes input management and improves agricultural accuracy. (is it ok or it's too short?)

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11/14/24- Term paper Questions and Practice

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11/14/24- Term paper Questions and Practice

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One of the advantages of technology in finance is its ability to improve productivity.

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Faster recovery is one of the advantages of postoperative physiotherapy. Regular physiotherapy after an injury result in improved mobility. By being consistent to physiotherapy classes, function will be regained as a result from joint movements exercises.

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Where i can find the notes you wrote of the term paper outline

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The integration of IoT in smart cities provides advantages like better traffic management and public safety but faces a significant challenge with data privacy.

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Is this a good sentence to put before my points 1

By using efficient refrigeration with hybrid models is important since it saves energy while keeping a specific temperature for food safety.

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Three possible solutions to major problems in healthcare include improving diagnostic accuracy, accelerating drug discovery, and enhancing healthcare efficiency.

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final term paper practice of any sentence 11/5/24

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final term paper practice of any sentence 11/5/24

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Rewrite:

AI decreases medical scans reading errors which reduces human error and improves the accuracy of diagnoses, leading to better patient outcomes.

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Implementing IoT in traffic management systems is important as it allows for smarter, data-driven decision-making in urban mobility.

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1A:

By being consistent to physiotherapy classes, function will be regained from joint movements exercises.

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Data minimization reduces AI implications by limiting unnecessary storage use.

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Why is it important 1a:

This reduces human error and improves the accuracy of diagnoses, leading to better patient outcomes.

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Improving the coordination of muscles can be the main component in the neurological patient's journey of the treatment process.

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IoT improves traffic management in smart cities through real-time data analysis from sensors.

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Cost optimization enables banks to decrease operational costs.

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AI decreases medical scans reading errors which helps in accurate patient diagnosing.

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Regular physiotherapy practices after an injury results in improved mobility.

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Diagnosis the patients illnesses in early term is the main advantage in health science ,it is a life saving .

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Efficient Refrigeration System can reduce energy while maintaining critical temperature spans for food safety through the use of hybrid model predictive controls.

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Precision is one of the solutions used in the healthcare field.

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The enhancement of mobility is one of the advantages of integrating IoT in smart cities.

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Mobility enhancement is one of the solutions that can treat neurological disorders.

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Productivity in banking services is one of the benefits of technology.

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topic sentence:

Faster recovery is one of the advantages of postoperative physiotherapy.

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The enhancement of mobility is one of the advantages of integrating IoT in smart cities.

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the accurate diagnosis is one of the solutions used in the healthcare field. (Theme word: accurate diagnoses)

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The application of energy practical tools is one of the solutions to reduce the use of thermal energy in the food industry.

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is this a good hook?

Postoperative physiotherapy helps speed up recovery and restores strength after surgery.

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Three advantages of early postoperative physiotherapy include accelerated recovery, improved lifestyle , and avoiding long term disabilities.

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Three possible solutions to cybersecurity threats in information systems are investing in training, updating software and Enabling authentication.

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Is it a good background information or it is too detailed?

Mathematics anxiety is a feeling of fear or nervousness when doing mathematics which includes manipulating with numbers or solving problems in academic situations. This anxiety can be caused by the teacher’s teaching strategies, student’s personal beliefs, or the complex nurture of mathematics. Furthermore, it has been proven that math anxiety has a negative impact on student’s mathematics achievement. Therefore, this could lead to students avoiding math-related majors or careers.

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The integration of IoT in smart cities provides advantages like better traffic management and energy savings but faces a significant challenge with data privacy concerns.

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Physiotherapy can offer three solutions for treating elderly neurological disorders by enhancing physical health, engaging advanced tools, and utilizing clinical programs.

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There are advantages and disadvantages to the impact of technology on banking services, including increased efficiency, enhanced accessibility, and heightened cybersecurity threats.

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Three points that support the argument that early postoperative physiotherapy influence recovery outcomes from injuries include accelerated recovery, cultural and regional adjustments, and avoiding long term disabilities.

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Three possible solutions to cybersecurity threats in information systems are backing up data, updating software and Strengthening passwords.

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Thesis : (problem/solution)

Three techniques educators can use to reduce student’s math anxiety are utilizing technology, developing supportive teacher traits, and implementing psychological strategies.

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Is intervention well be a good theme word for utilizing clinical programs?

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Thesis:

Three possible solutions of major problems in healthcare include improving diagnostic accuracy, drug discovery and efficiency in healthcare.

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There are several solutions for saving energy including energy effective machines, heat recovery technologies, and process development.

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Is it a valid Hook ? (Problem/ solution)

Is it possible to overcome math anxiety, or is it a permanent challenge faced by students?

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Three points that support the argument that early postoperative physiotherapy influence recovery outcomes from injuries include accelerated recovery, local adjustments, and avoiding long term disabilities.

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Thesis:

improving diagnostic accuracy, drug discovery speed, and administrative efficiency in healthcare.

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If it is an argumentative focus, should i write 2 for and 1 against or 2 against and 1 for?

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Thesis : (problem/solution)

Three techniques educators can use to reduce student’s math anxiety are utilizing technology, developing important characteristics, and applying psychological techniques.

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Topic sentence

Physical therapy is known for treating various conditions, and neurological conditions are one of them.

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Thesis

Three effective mathematics teaching methods include concrete representational abstract approach, cooperative learning and strategic questioning.

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Problem/sultions

Three effective teaching method of the problem of numerous mathematics teaching methods are x, y and z