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The incorporation of artificial intelligence (AI) in academic writing is a topic of considerable debate. Proponents argue that AI can enhance efficiency, provide insightful analysis, and democratize access to high-quality educational resources. Critics, however, fear that AI could undermine critical thinking skills, compromise academic integrity, and perpetuate biases. This essay examines both perspectives, advocating for a cautious yet strategic integration of AI in academic writing.

AI offers significant benefits, primarily by improving efficiency. AI-powered tools can quickly analyze large datasets, summarize information, and generate citations, allowing researchers to focus on more complex analytical tasks. Additionally, AI democratizes access to writing assistance, helping students, particularly non-native English speakers, improve their grammar and style. This accessibility can level the educational playing field, offering support that might be unavailable through traditional means. Moreover, AI's ability to detect patterns and correlations in data can provide novel insights, enhancing research outcomes.

Despite these advantages, there are significant concerns. One major issue is the potential erosion of critical thinking skills. Over-reliance on AI can lead to a passive approach to learning, where students depend on AI for idea generation and argument structuring, hindering their analytical development. Academic integrity is another concern, as the line between using AI as a tool and letting it perform substantial writing tasks is thin. This could lead to plagiarism and devalue academic qualifications. Additionally, AI systems can perpetuate biases present in their training data, leading to skewed analyses and conclusions.

Some argue that AI can complement, rather than replace, human effort, enhancing critical thinking by providing additional perspectives and tools for analysis. However, to leverage AI's benefits while mitigating its risks, a balanced approach is crucial. Educational institutions and policymakers should establish clear guidelines for AI use, ensuring students develop their analytical skills independently. Transparency in AI algorithms and training data is essential to minimize biases and inform users of AI limitations. Incorporating AI education into curricula can help students use these tools responsibly and critically.

AI in academic writing presents both opportunities and challenges. While it can enhance efficiency, accessibility, and research quality, it also poses risks to critical thinking, academic integrity, and fairness. A balanced and ethical integration of AI, supported by clear guidelines and education, can harness its transformative potential while maintaining academic excellence and integrity.

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The incorporation of artificial intelligence (AI) in academic writing is a topic of considerable debate. Proponents argue that AI can enhance efficiency, provide insightful analysis, and democratize access to high-quality educational resources. Critics, however, fear that AI could undermine critical thinking skills, compromise academic integrity, and perpetuate biases. This essay examines both perspectives, advocating for a cautious yet strategic integration of AI in academic writing.

AI offers significant benefits, primarily by improving efficiency. AI-powered tools can quickly analyze large datasets, summarize information, and generate citations, allowing researchers to focus on more complex analytical tasks. Additionally, AI democratizes access to writing assistance, helping students, particularly non-native English speakers, improve their grammar and style. This accessibility can level the educational playing field, offering support that might be unavailable through traditional means. Moreover, AI's ability to detect patterns and correlations in data can provide novel insights, enhancing research outcomes.

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To leverage AI's benefits while mitigating its risks, a balanced approach is crucial. Educational institutions and policymakers should establish clear guidelines for AI use, ensuring students develop their analytical skills independently. Transparency in AI algorithms and training data is essential to minimize biases and inform users of AI limitations. Incorporating AI education into curricula can help students use these tools responsibly and critically.

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You are casually walking down the road and all of a sudden, you see a huge, curved stadium with a gigantic billboard on it. It's as if you are looking at a screen where a 5-year-old has been doodling on their parents' computer, on the "Windows Paint" application. In the worst handwriting possible, the screen says, 'WE ARE LOOKING FOR GRAPHIC DESIGNER" in all caps. It definitely looks like they are in desperate need of a graphic designer, whoever the advertiser was.

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In the graphic designer ad, the sentence is written in a large and wide screen with poor quality hand writing. This makes them look more desperate than anyone and the need for the graphic designer is very urgent.

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In the graphic designer ad, the sentence is written in a large and wide screen with poor quality hand writing. This makes them look more desperate than anyone and the need for the graphic designer is very urgent.

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On the advertisment for Raid, we can see at the end of a long corridor, a red hand on the floor. This red hand seems unalive, without energy. Intrigued you look closer at the limbs and understand it is the famous superhero Spider-Man. Spider-Man could be loved by everyone, but some people might despite him: the arachnophobe. You can see that this is a crime scene because of the Raid, kill bugs spray. This spray was so strong that even the great Spider-Man was killed.

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There is a huge electronic billboard more than twice as tall as trees below. It is quite curved so shapes like almost hemisphere. In the billboard, there is an advertisement which has terrible shaped sentence on the Microsoft Paint. The advertisement appeals how desperate the company looking for their new graphic designer.

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Ants look for the sweet things. But they avoid the candy on the picture. I think It is a nutorious killer they think because of its sense of sticky.

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On the advertisement of SNICKERS, it shows one quote from Apple about their decision to remove USB port from the Apple devices. Then it tells Apple, “You’re not you when you’re hungry.” As a lot of people disagree with the idea of eliminating the various part of the devices, which is the USB port, SNICKERS has criticized Apple’s decision bravely. At the same time, it has promoted their product, the chocolate bar, by making it hilarious and memorable; it means that by being full with eating SNICKERS, the workers at Apple would have been thinking normally.

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Have you seen a spider dead? i bet you did once, But have you seen a spiderman dead? This advertisement shows lifeless hand in a spiderman suit, with a picture of petricide, "Raid" at the right bottom of it.

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In the Chupa Chpups ad, ants that like sweet things are not attracted to the candy, which means that the candy doesn't contain much sugar.

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There is an old man sitting on the chair in the subway. He grabs his red bad by his left arm on his legs. His corner of the mouth goes down due to this his face looks so depressed.

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About the Spotify advertisement, I have heard the song ‘Sorry’ by Justin Bieber. It reminds me lyrics like “Is it too late to say I’m sorry.” The advertisement notice that someone played it 42 times on Valentines Day. It is weird thing. The creative way of advertising the app by introducing funny situation.

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In the Chupa Chups advertisement, the ants are making their way without contacting Chupa Chups. Usually ants are attracted to sweets because of sugar. However, this advertisement shows that the ants are avoiding Chupa Chups because it’s sugar-free.

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In the ad, there is a sentence that says “lets remove the usb port from our devices” which most of the consumers think, is not a good idea. Snickers uses this to advertise their product by saying “You’re not you when you’re hungry” and implies that they should have had snickers before making that bad decision.

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손경진 Assignment 2: 비즈니스 영어 통번역 [한영편] (p. 46~51, Chapter 4 )

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[ver. 1]

Gold is valuable only because it is scarce. I believe it is the same for all other things in the world. A substance can only be valuable when it has limited quantity. However, in this day and age, information on the internet itself seems as supplied with infinite volume. Which is why I believe that information on the internet is more problematic than valuable.

Sure, the fact that “accurate” information on the internet is still scarce and thus brings us much value, if not more than how it used to bring, is an agreeable argument. In the olden days, information used to be a property of the privileged, and it could only be produced by a few and even be consumed by a limited amount of people. Especially written content, because most people could not read or write. On the contrary, only anyone who has access to the internet can create and access content, which would be most of the population. Especially as a society with one of the greatest internet penetration rates, South Korea is known to have 98% of the population with internet accessibility. We have the least illiteracy rate in the world with as little as 1% of the population being unable to read or write. This means that almost every single person in the South Korean territory is able to produce as much information as they would like to. This leads to more information, whether we like it or not, on the internet without any confirmation or verification of quality. And even if the ability of accurate information to be produced is heightened simultaneously, we cannot stop the majority of people who are not professionals on a daily basis to mass-generate the data they are currently producing. And because of the mass of valuable, accurate data is inevitably much less than the one of its counterpart, the percentage will get lower and lower, meaning that the value will get higher, but most of the data will be good for nothing, nevertheless.

In conclusion, yes, valuable data is getting more and more scarce on the internet making it ironically more valuable as there is more useless information altogether. So most information on the internet does do harm. However, I believe that with the right education for the mass to control and filter the information that they are able to access and consume, in the near future it can to more good than harm.

[ver. 2]

In today's digital age, the internet has become an indispensable tool for accessing information on virtually any topic imaginable. With the click of a button, individuals can delve into a vast sea of knowledge, gaining insights, skills, and perspectives that were once out of reach. While concerns about information overload are prevalent, it's essential to recognize the numerous ways in which an abundance of information on the internet can be profoundly beneficial.

First and foremost, the surplus of information fosters continuous learning and personal growth. Whether one seeks to acquire new skills, explore different cultures, or stay updated on current events, the internet offers an endless array of resources to facilitate these pursuits. From online courses and tutorials to scholarly articles and educational videos, individuals have unparalleled opportunities to expand their knowledge and enhance their expertise in diverse fields.

Moreover, the abundance of information empowers individuals to make well-informed decisions in various aspects of their lives. Whether it's researching products before making a purchase, gathering insights on health-related issues, or staying informed about political developments, the internet equips people with the tools they need to critically evaluate information and make decisions that align with their values and preferences.

Additionally, the wealth of information available online facilitates innovation and creativity. Entrepreneurs, artists, scientists, and thinkers alike can draw inspiration from a vast pool of ideas and perspectives, fueling the creative process and driving progress in various domains. Access to diverse viewpoints and cutting-edge research fosters collaboration and interdisciplinary thinking, leading to groundbreaking discoveries and advancements that benefit society as a whole.

Furthermore, the internet serves as a platform for democratic participation and civic engagement. Social media, online forums, and digital activism enable individuals to voice their opinions, mobilize support for causes they believe in, and hold institutions and authorities accountable. The democratization of information empowers marginalized communities and amplifies voices that have historically been silenced, contributing to greater inclusivity and social justice.

In conclusion, while concerns about information overload are valid, it's crucial to recognize the myriad benefits that an abundance of information on the internet brings. From facilitating continuous learning and informed decision-making to fostering innovation and democratic participation, the surplus of information empowers individuals, enriches lives, and drives progress in the digital age. Embracing the opportunities afforded by the internet while adopting critical thinking skills and discernment is key to maximizing its benefits and navigating the complexities of the information landscape effectively.

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Ver1

In the current society, information on the Internet is attached strongly to our life by giving both the answers and enthusiasm people immediately requires. However, I believe the information on the Internet is too much and is problematic.

Ver2

There is a general debate nowadays about information on the Internet. It is attached strongly to our life by giving both the answers and enthusiasm people immediately requires. With both perspectives have merit, I believe the information on the Internet is too much and is problematic. On top of this, the Internet is sacrificing some people’s privacy in order to draw attention.