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With active reading where you notice grammar structures, vocabulary and expression, you will learn to see patterns in the way writers phrase their work. If you take it a step further, you need to practise the same by writing in a similar style. Correcting structures come with awareness. If you have a grammar book, practise. The more you realise that language is actually patterns with rules, the easier it is to correct your own work.

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Sometimes when you have an idea it takes a long time for it to emerge in words. All good writers jot down their ideas on a draft before actually writing about them as a final piece. Most writers craft their first draft which is usually rough and has many mistakes in first before they work on it to get the best copy. This is because writers change their mind a lot or they change the way they phrase ideas. Describing your opinion or thoughts comes easily when you go through this process. Also, the more practise you have, the easier it becomes. So you really need to challenge yourself and raise the bar (raise standards) in your own work.

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1. It makes it difficult when a text sounds like a broken record. This can happen when sentences start the same way with the subject or when the same words are used more than once within the paragraph. To avoid this, always use the golden rule PAPTAM: start sentences with (P)reposition, (A)ction, (P)hrasal- Adverb, (P)hrasal-Adjective, (T)ime and Purpose and Method. See this link

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Elaborating your ideas will challenge your powers to question and think.

1. Ask yourself: Is this detail relevant? Is this sufficient detail? Then note if you have answers to "Who, What, Why, When, Where and How". THEN, ask yourself "Why" for about 3 times more.

2. It helps to plan your ideas first so that you can focus on language when you write. Use clusters of connected ideas for each paragraph.

3. Finally, ask a friend to read it and let you know if you have added enough supporting details. If your friend feels you should expand your paragraph by answering more questions (see No. 1) then you should edit your work.

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1. Write your draft then edit it so that you can look at your sentence structures and vocabulary later in a few days. Looking at your writing through fresh eyes is important. You can spot mistakes and check coherence (how easy it is to read) easily.

2. It is also important to use the thesaurus function in your Word document for better vocab.

3. Try using similes and metaphors. Choose words carefully for their different connotations. Try using emotive language. You need to experiment to improve!

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To try avoiding repetition.

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Maybe some grammar problem

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I found out that the most challenging part of writing for me is that

It is hard for me to describe what I was thinking.

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I found quite challenging in using

different kind of adjectives and adverbs

to describe something.

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I find it hard to describe things

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I found it difficult to describe the features

of my poster using advanced vocabularies.