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Hi Alex,
I am glad we will work together. I think we shouldn't choose the rainforest as our topic, it is too hard. We should choose something easier like animals.
Sorry, we can't start tomorrow because I am busy tomorrow. How about doing on Wednesday?
We can prepare in my house because no one will be at home for 2 weeks.
I prefer giving our presentation in the afternoon, I think it is the best time.
DC

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- bài viết chưa đủ 100 từ (mới có 77 từ thôi), con cần bổ sung thêm. Ví dụ con có thể nói rõ con bận cái gì, bận đến bao giờ, nhà con k có ai thế bố mẹ đã đi đâu từ bao giờ... hoặc nói về chủ đề animals mà con định chọn, sao nó lại dễ hơn (dễ tìm kiếm thông tin/con biết nhiều về chủ đề này/con yêu động vật/...

- có 3 lỗi về dấu câu, con cần sửa lại bằng cách thay/thêm dấu hoặc thêm liên từ cho đúng.
- 1 mỗi về thì
- 1 lỗi thiếu tân ngữ
- 1 lỗi lặp từ gần nhau

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Hi Alex,
I am glad we will work together. I think we shouldn't choose the rainforest as our topic. It is too hard. We should choose something easier, like animals.
Sorry, we can't start tomorrow because I will go to grandpa's house. How about doing it on Wednesday?
We can prepare in my house since everyone will go to the beach for 2 weeks.
I prefer giving our presentation in the afternoon, as I think it is the best time.
DC

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- Con cần phải thêm câu để đủ 95 từ trở lên vì đề bài yêu cầu khoảng 100 từ. Trên đây là 1 vài ví dụ để thêm, con chỉ thiếu hơn 10 từ, thêm đâu có khó?
- Nhưng đặc biệt với chỗ "will go to grandpa's house" con có 2 lỗi: Lỗi về thì, đây là kế hoạch chắc chắn rồi. và nhà ông là ông nào? ông hàng xóm thì cũng fai có mạo từ, ở đây là ông mình thì con fai có tính từ sở hữu để xác định.
- Sau "sorry" con có thể thêm "but" thể hiện ý kiến đối lập với đề nghị của người kia.
- Ngoài "think" còn rất nhiều từ thể hiên ý kiến cá nhân như: feel, believe... con có thể dùng cho linh hoạt.

==> Con sửa thành V3 nhé.

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Jack climbed out of the boat and ran as fast  as he can to ther beach. When he was playing with sand, he found a treasure. Then he saw an island and went there to rest. He saw a shark and went to the boat to go back home.

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- Bài yêu cầu 100 từ, con làm 49 từ là sao đây? viết thêm cho đủ bài! Con có thể tả cái hộp kho báu màu gì, hình gì, có gì bên trong, tả hòn đảo to hay bé, có cây gì, có người không, tả con cá mập to không, hung dữ không, đáng sợ không.
- 1 lỗi sai thì, đang quá khứ cơ mà (mà câu này ngay trên mẫu đề bài cho, chép vào cũng sai??)
- 1 lỗi chính tả.

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Hi Rob​bie, ‎
I a​m so glad that we will have a birthday meal. It is a very good idea to have it at a ‎restaurant. ‎ ‎ ‎
I think we should eat at a burger restaurant because everyone likes burgers. ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎
Than​ks for telling me, ‎I need you to pick me up because my parents will work late this week. ‎ ‎
I have a question, when will we have the party? ‎Answer as soon as you can. ‎ ‎
‎ D​C  ‎ ‎ ‎

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- 2 lỗi dấu câu
- Chưa đủ 90-100. Viết thêm về loại burger ngon ở quán đó đi, là loại nào, có gì ngon mà mọi người lại thích?

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As I came out of the supermarket, I saw someone that I had wanted to see for a long time. She was Ngoc Linh, my girlfriend. We hadn't met since May, so I remembered her very much. I went to her as soon as I saw her. She was suprised a lot. Then we got to a café and talked about so many things, such as our pets, some games, a few new Rubik's cubes, and so on. Then we ate two double burgers and drank two glasses of pepsi at Lotteria. It was a fantastic evening.

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Hi Alex,
I am glad we will work together. I think we shouldn't choose the rainforest as our topic. It is too hard. We should choose something easier, like animals. It is quite simple and interesting.
Sorry, but we can't start tomorrow because I am going to my grandpa's house. How about doing it on Wednesday?
We can prepare in my house since everyone will go to the beach for 2 weeks. No one can bother us.
I prefer giving our presentation in the afternoon, as I believe it is the best time.
DC

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Jack climbed out of the boat and ran as fast  as he could to the beach. When he was playing with sand, he found a treasure. It is a big rectanglular wooden box. There is a lot of gold, diamonds, maps. He was very happy. Then he saw a small island which has a few coconut trees and flowers. He went there to rest and drank coconut milk. There was a shark which is comming. It is very big with so many sharp teeth, so he decided to go to the boat and get back home.

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Hi Rob​bie, ‎
I a​m so glad that we will have a birthday meal. It is a very great idea to have it at a ‎restaurant.
I think we should eat at a burger restaurant because everyone likes burgers. I feel double burgers are the best. They has 2 slices of beef and 2 slices of cheese. Specially, this restaurant has pepsi discount.
Than​ks for telling me. ‎I need you to pick me up because my parents will work late this week.
I have a question: when will we have the party? ‎Answer as soon as you can. ‎ ‎
‎ D​.C.

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- great rồi thì k cần very nữa, nó đã là tính từ ở mức cao.
- xem lại lỗi chia động từ bôi vàng, đây là lỗi cơ bản.
- 2 miếng thịt bò sẽ đúng hơn là 2 lát (lát rất lỏng)
- "Đặc biệt" thì dùng "In particular"
- Dùng động từ "give" sẽ phù hợp hơn. và con thiếu mạo từ cho cụm danh từ "Pepsi discount". Con lưu ý, con rất hay mắc lỗi thiếu mạo từ, danh từ sẽ k đứng 1 mình, fai có mạo từ, tính từ sở hữu... (riêng với danh từ số nhiều không xác định thì mới không có mạo từ phía trước thôi)
- Cuối cùng, khi yêu cầu người khác, con hãy thêm "Please..." hoặc "..., please" đứng đầu và cuối câu đều được, để lịch sự hơn.

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- went to + place (đi/đến đâu đó), ở đây con có thể dùng "go to see" như thế thì động từ "see" ở vế sau con thay bằng "spot" để k lặp. Hoặc con có thể dùng cặp động từ khác, như gợi ý trong ngoặc.
- Từ ngạc nhiên sai chính tả rồi, con tự sửa đi.
- Pepsi là tên riêng (tên 1 món đồ uống có ga), con chú ý viết hoa.

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Hi Rob​bie, ‎
I a​m so glad that we will have a birthday meal. It is a great idea to have it at a ‎restaurant.
I think we should eat at a burger restaurant because everyone likes burgers. I feel double burgers are the best. They have 2 pieces of beef and 2 slices of cheese. In particular, this restaurant gives a Pepsi discount.
Than​ks for telling me. ‎I need you to pick me up because my parents will work late this week.
I have a question: when will we have the party? Please ‎answer as soon as you can. ‎ ‎
‎ D​.C.

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As I came out of the supermarket, I saw someone that I had wanted to see for a long time. She was Ngoc Linh, my girlfriend. We hadn't met since May, so I remembered her very much. I went to see her as soon as I spotted her. She was surprised a lot. Then we got to a café and talked about so many things, such as our pets, some games, a few new Rubik's cubes, and so on. Then we ate two double burgers and drank two glasses of Pepsi at Lotteria. It was a fantastic evening.

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Dear Ms Jones.
I think it is a good idea to invite a well-known person to our class.
I think a sicentist is better because we invited an actor last time, and I am not good at science.
I will ask how he/she became a scientist.
We can have a party and take some photos after the talk to entertain the visitor.
DC

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Two things I miss the most when I study online are friends' time and health. First, at school, I play chasing with my friends at break time. It is very interesting and funny. We are side by side for eight hours a day. But at home, I can only play online games with my friends on the internet. We chat for about two hours a day. It is quite boring. I miss my friends very much, and so do they. A few people can even forget their buddies. Second, at school, we do exercise a lot. In addition, we also run and play sports, which makes us relaxed. While at home, we only sit in front of the computer all day. This is the reason why we feel stressed. Therefore, we become weaker and our eyes can be short-sighted. I hope we will go to school every weekday in order for our lives to not be affected.

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Two things I miss when I study online V2

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Two things I miss when I study online V2

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Two things I miss the most when I study online are friends' time and health. First, at school, I play chasing with my friends at break time. It is very interesting and funny. We are side by side for eight hours a day. But at home, I can only play online games with my friends on the internet. We chat for about two hours a day. It is quite boring. I miss my friends very much, and so do they. Second, at school, we do exercise a lot. In addition, we also run and play sports, which makes us relaxed. While at home, we only sit in front of the computer all day. This is the reason why we feel stressed. Therefore, we become weaker and our eyes can be short-sighted. I hope we will go to school every weekday in order for our lives to not be affected.