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Edgar Allan Poe

The Raven

They say love last forever

Though I say it does not

I thought she Loved me

But indeed she did not

People say i'm mad

But I say I am not

She said our love would last forever

But it did not

I thought she was one the one

But indeed she was not

And  as she hanged from the rope

She proved she was not

On the day I met her

As her blonde hair danced in the wind

And after our marriage

We said we would have many kids

We said our love would last forever

But sadly it did not

She said she was doing fine

But indeed she was not

Why do people say love last forever

When it cleary does not

I wish love lasted forever

But sadly it does not

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ROBERT FROST

KOBE BRYANT

Basketball is the dream

Even though it may not seem

You stay up thinking all night

Thinking how you would make the team right

You practice outdoors

Then show who you are on the gym floors

You go from losing by ten

Then you come to reality and get the WIN!!!

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Robert Louis Stevenson

My Shadow

The water is dense

I'm drenched with it

I lost my courage

Where is it

There might be my shadow

Crawling up like flooding indigo

That made this liquid

That washed away the inferno

That fire I once kept

Dearly in my heart

Burned away to cinder

Where did the shadow come

If fire doesn't emit it

Was it the shadow of my dread

That I have created?

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The sun rises and the morning winds blow;

Leaves of bushes and trees dance in the breeze.

Honey bees and deer emerge as the sun rays glow.

Colors of the flower petals shimmer in the light.

The sun retreats from glory to let the moon shine;

One of the clever cycles of time.

Fireflies flutter in the calm night, nature's design.

Clouds hide stars to kindly bring rain to the plants.

Isn’t this all amazing?

The graceful mannerisms of the outside world,

It needs well deserved praising.

I love nature and everything in it, pure beauty.

Inspired by Marjorie Pickthall, specifically her poem Daisy Time.

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Christina Rossetti

Who has seen the wind?

The grass is green

The birds sing

Leaves fall,

fall,and fall

Sun is bright

Clouds are clear

Cold is here

And snow is near

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My bike's like, a time machine, Showing me stuff I haven't seen! Pedal hard, and zoom ahead, No time for being scared or dread. Handlebars tight, gotta steer right, Future's coming, super bright! Wind in my face, like a total rush, Life's a race, gotta crush! Hills are hard, like, seriously steep, But I can do it, gotta keep, Pushing on, with all my might, Reaching the top, what a sight! Down the other side, super fast, Leaving all the worries in the past. Sun's shining down, it's gonna be great.

inspiration: My shadow by Robert Louis Stevenson

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Edgar Allan Poe

The Raven

ignore the v2 btw

They say love last forever

Though I love does not

I thought she Loved me

But indeed she did not

They say i'm mad

But I say I am not

We promised our love would last forever

But of course  it did not

I thought she was one the one

But indeed she was not

And  as she hanged from the rope

She proved she was not

On the day I met her

I thought our love would last forever

I wish that was true

But sadly it was not

We said our love would last forever

But sadly it did not

She said she was doing fine

But indeed she was not

Why do people say love last forever

When it cleary does not

I wish love lasted forever

But sadly it does not

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My family loves me and I love them. but we don't use words to say "I love you." instead, my mom stirs her love into a pot of steaming rice porridge A chorus of good morning Hana" welcomes me to the table and we start the day together, our bellies and hearts full. Ah Gong shows me the love he feels when he walks me to school As I hop over cracks, his steps shuffle next to mine, and we dance to the rhythm of our feet. how do I show my family my love? I do my best in school so they can feel proud. when the teacher asks a question, I raise my hand. And at recess, I run as fast as I can. As I catch my breath, I imagine how bright their eyes will shine when I tell them how hard I tried. my tummy Rumbles. I find Ah ma's dry noodle dish steaming inside my lunch. she sprinkles her love onto the noodles she makes for me. (and sometimes I find a sweet surprise,too!) at the game, my dad's love Echoes In His cheers: "Jia you, Hana Go,go,go!" my legs pump faster and faster- I miss as I sniffed by the sidelines, my dad holds my hand and Whispers in my ear. with his every word, my bravery grows, and I Dash right back onto the field to try again. the moment I get home, I want to find the rest of my family. stories from our day spill from our lips, and we settle into the sweetness of being together again. then, as the smell of dinner I fill our home, I rest my head on the belly that holds someone precious and new. I tell it about things like ice cream and swings and rain and the love that waiting when it joined us. dad calls us to the table: it's time to eat! we show Ah ma and Ah gong our love when we let them fill their bowls first. they pick the best pieces that will keep them strong (yet those pieces end up in my bowls!) finally, as night takes over day, we say "i love you" with the last thing we do i rub the knots out of Ah ma's feet and pour Ah Gong the tea that helps him sleep. well my dad and I read side by side, my mom tucks my sheet in tight. with their good-night kisses still soft and against my cheek, I whisper at last "wan an." in my family,our love lives in all the things we do for one another. that is how we say "I love you."