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Outline Revissed Version

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1- What were your strengths in the essay?
My essay was well supported by reliable sources.
Also shows strong content development.

2- What aspects were you able to gain awareness of through the process activities on Padlet?
The organized information management

3- What were your weaknesses in the essay?
Punctuation rules.

4- What do you need to overcome those weaknesses?
Study more the puntuation rules.

5- How did your classmate's feedback contribute to improving your work?
They helped me to delve deeper into the topic of my essay

6- What was meaningful about this experience? Why?
The outline format, because I had never used the format and it taught me a lot about organization, Content and Coherence.

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Outline III Revissed Version

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Essay III

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1- What were your strengths in the essay?
Strong content development that is clearly linked to the thesis statement. Also, my ideas in the essay were logical and original.

2- What aspects were you able to gain awareness of through the process activities on Padlet?
Good organization of the different processes to carry out a essay in the best way, for example the the search of information, the outline and de essay.

3- What were your weaknesses in the essay?
Punctuation rules, because there weren't comma splices, run-on sentences or fragments.

4- What do you need to overcome those weaknesses?
Strengthening punctuation rules

5- How did your classmate's feedback contribute to improving your work?
In this case I did not receive a good feedback.

6- What was meaningful about this experience? Why?
The outline format again, because the format taught me a lot about organization, Content and Coherence.

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1- What were your strengths in the essay?
An effective use of transition devices allowing a smooth flow of ideas and the ideas in the essay were logical and original.

2- What aspects were you able to gain awareness of through the process activities on Padlet?
By the mechanism I was able to get good feedback from my classmate.

3- What were your weaknesses in the essay?
The conclusion didn't contains a restatement of the thesis statements, a summary of the key points, and an appropriate closing device.

4- What do you need to overcome those weaknesses?
Pay more attention to those aspects of the conclusions.

5- How did your classmate's feedback contribute to improving your work?
He helped me a lot in ideas organization.

6- What was meaningful about this experience? Why?
Being able to develop and increase my writing levels