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When you were reading you were very fluent and you didn't have to go back and re read what you said. Next time, you could improve by adding more expression at the start of the story

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so the 2 things that were good is that you were reading the text fluently along with the words and matches the tone when it says whisper or shout but the wish is that you repeated a few words which is ok but you can work on it a little bit