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1. I have modified the generalization

2. I revised the organization and started a new paragraph before I start a new point of view.

3. I added more relevance between my articles and citations.

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Writing Project Revision for Final Digital Presentation Project 

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Assignment 2-Analysis And Synthesis Writing Project

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Assignment 2-Analysis And Synthesis Writing Project

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Analysis and Synthesis Project- Final  Draft

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Assignment 2-Analysis And Synthesis Writing Project

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Assignment 2-Analysis And Synthesis Writing Project

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Assignment description: What connections are there between design and health, wellbeing, and wellness in the fields of education, architecture, medicine, governance, politics, the digital commons, family, labor, and intimate relationships, among others? What effects does the design of the environment around us have on how we perceive ourselves as humans? How does the way we perceive ourselves as human beings affect, or have the ability to affect, how the world is made up?

In this project, I went on to argue the connection between health and work. It made me realize that most people nowadays are taking a lot of time off by their own bosses, and I learned that people should learn to take breaks and be lazy. It is the right way to allocate rest time and work time.

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Assignment 1-Narrative Writing  Project 

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Assignment 1-Narrative Writing  Project 

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Assignment Description: Depending on the individual personal, cultural, political, social, or biological circumstances in which people use them, the terms "health," "well-being," and "disease" have diverse connotations. Think about what one or more of these terms means to you and/or the people in your life that are close to you while you work on your narrative writing assignment.

It made me explore and remember the health issues around me and made me think about what it really means to be healthy. I learned from the assignment the importance of health and how to relate two articles to another similar topic and form a new article.

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In this video, I talk about my basic information, my subjects of interest, my future career direction and my hobbies.

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I learned the format of a citation, how to write an introduction paragraph, how to state a point of view, and how to use evidence from the article to argue in support of my point of view during the writing process. I enhanced my rhetorical strategy and organization, like in the comment “your paper also leaves room for improvement in terms of its engagement with quotations, and its tendency towards generalization at certain moments.” So, When I revised my article, I made my citations shorter, removed unnecessary information, and left only the information that really helped my point. And for the organization, the comment said “ In future papers, be mindful of where you start and end your paragraphs.” So, I enhanced this by thinking of a paragraph as a vehicle for a single important idea. Once I’ve made my point about that idea, start a new paragraph that tackles a new idea. My favorite writing project is Narrative Writing Project because this assignment allows me to tell my own experiences, which makes me feel more ease to do. I can write my feelings, and my understand, my changes in this assignment. This makes me feel comfortable to write. I dislike the research writing project the most because it requires me to connect up to three resources, and I need to spend a lot of time reading and understanding each one, which makes me tired.