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This is where you will select a motif for "The Haircut" 

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This is where you will select a motif for "The Haircut" 

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It should only be 1-2 words and you should know what it means!

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This is where you will connect your motif to specific evidence in the story.

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This is where you will connect your motif to specific evidence in the story.

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Make sure to use quotations for your evidence, so it's clear what is evidence and what is analysis.

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Freedom and family relationships!!

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Family problems  because
"Maybe it confirmed for her how bad the haircut looked--and reminded her that I’d disobeyed. My dad’s in the army so we’re all about discipline around here." Dad said, “Sit down, young lady.” He was mad. Mom was so upset she couldn’t even speak. Dad doesn’t like to yell and he didn’t this time. He just told me how disappointed he was in me. "

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family relatinships,facing challenges,social class,confidence,hope,inequality,friendship

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Mom started watching my every move and putting down Patty and Marilyn. It didn’t help that I got home past curfew two weekends in a row after going to the movies with them. Suddenly, Mom said I couldn’t go to a sleepover at Patty’s that had been planned for weeks. How did she put it? “Until you learn how to tell time.” /family r/friends

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family relationships

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Mom started watching my every
move and putting down Patty and
Marilyn. It didn't help that I got
home past curfew two weekends
in a row after going to the movies
with them. Suddenly, Mom said I
couldn't go to a sleepover at
Patty's that had been planned for
weeks. How did she put it? "Until
you learn how to tell time."

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confidence,inequlity,family relatinship

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Family problems

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i think the motif is family relationships and friendship

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i think the motif is family relationships and friendship

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Inequality

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 Suddenly I understood something about myself. Was this the change I wanted? Was this a different me?	It took all summer to find out. 

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 Suddenly I understood something about myself. Was this the change I wanted? Was this a different me?	It took all summer to find out. 

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Motif
Guilt , friendship .
"My mother is aces at exasperation. You just don’t want her to move over into mad. h that really upset Mom. Maybe it confirmed for her how bad the haircut looked--and reminded her that I’d disobeyed."Mom blamed my friends Patty and Marilyn. She said there was something wrong with them because they have really short hair and don't use makeup. And oh yeah, they don’t date. She thought they had too much influence .

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" When I walked in the door, she looked at me hard, the corners of her mouth turning down. Then she looked away, back at the potatoes in the sink. Last week, she had absolutely forbidden me to cut it". “Your hair was so beautiful! Why you would hack it off like that is beyond me. You’re such a beautiful girl--and now….” "Mom blamed my friends Patty and Marilyn. She said there was something wrong with them because they have really short hair and don't use makeup. And oh yeah, they don’t date. She thought they had too much influence over me--like I don’t have a mind of my own. Maybe they did suggest I cut my hair, but I was tired of the way it looked; I wanted something different. I wanted my entire life to be different--maybe I just settled for a haircut".

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most of the family do not talk anymore like the mom and daughter 

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most of the family do not talk anymore like the mom and daughter 

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In "The Haircut" our main character has family problems. Her parents are toxic and controlling. "Last week, she had absolutely forbidden me to cut it." & "Maybe it confirmed for her how bad the haircut looked--and reminded her that I’d disobeyed. My dad’s in the army so we’re all about discipline around here."
She obviously wants freedom and to express herself. "Maybe they did suggest I cut my hair, but I was tired of the way it looked; I wanted something different. I wanted my entire life to be different--maybe I just settled for a haircut." & "Was this the change I wanted? Was this a different me?"

- shayla ୨୧
(p.s the motif with the heart is mine ♡)

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family problems

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Mom started watching my every move and putting down Patty and Marilyn. It didn’t help that I got home past curfew two weekends in a row after going to the movies with them. Suddenly, Mom said I couldn’t go to a sleepover at Patty’s that had been planned for weeks. How did she put it? “Until you learn how to tell time.”  this show that their family relationship isn't good.

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Mom started watching my every move and putting down Patty and Marilyn. It didn’t help that I got home past curfew two weekends in a row after going to the movies with them. Suddenly, Mom said I couldn’t go to a sleepover at Patty’s that had been planned for weeks. How did she put it? “Until you learn how to tell time.”  this show that their family relationship isn't good.

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Mom started watching my every move and putting down Patty and Marilyn. It didn’t help that I got home past curfew two weekends in a row after going to the movies with them. Suddenly, Mom said I couldn’t go to a sleepover at Patty’s that had been planned for weeks. How did she put it? “Until you learn how to tell time.”

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Family relationships,Facing challenges, and Friendship.

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It says"Mom blamed my friends Patty and Marilyn. She said there was something wrong with them because they have really short hair and don't use makeup. And oh yeah, they don’t date. She thought they had too much influence over me--like I don’t have a mind of my own. Maybe they did suggest I cut my hair, but I was tired of the way it looked; I wanted something different".

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It says"Mom blamed my friends Patty and Marilyn. She said there was something wrong with them because they have really short hair and don't use makeup. And oh yeah, they don’t date. She thought they had too much influence over me--like I don’t have a mind of my own. Maybe they did suggest I cut my hair, but I was tired of the way it looked; I wanted something different".

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my motif is relationship because in the relationship of them is that their mom got a bad haircut and blames her friends, and my other motif is punishment because she went to prom without his parents perishing

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i chose family problems because, the mom thinks that her friends forced her to cut her hair and, that they are a bad influence. "Mom blamed my friends Patty and Marilyn. She said there was something wrong with them because they have really short hair and don't use makeup. She thought they had too much influence over me--like I don’t have a mind of my own.  don’t date. She thought they had too much influence over me--like I don’t have a mind of my own. "

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Mom started watching my every move and putting down Patty and Marilyn. It didn’t help that I got home past curfew two weekends in a row after going to the movies with them. Suddenly, Mom said I couldn’t go to a sleepover at Patty’s that had been planned for weeks. How did she put it? “Until you learn how to tell time.” /family r/friends

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family relatinships,facing challenges,social class,confidence,hope,inequality,friendship

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Family relationships

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She cut her hair are asked to go to a sleep over and her family wanted to take her to her grandparents to punish her

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She cut her hair are asked to go to a sleep over and her family wanted to take her to her grandparents to punish her

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confidence,challeges,family realetionships,inequlity,freindship

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" When I walked in the door, she looked at me hard, the corners of her mouth turning down. Then she looked away, back at the potatoes in the sink. Last week, she had absolutely forbidden me to cut it". “Your hair was so beautiful! Why you would hack it off like that is beyond me. You’re such a beautiful girl--and now….” "Mom blamed my friends Patty and Marilyn. She said there was something wrong with them because they have really short hair and don't use makeup. And oh yeah, they don’t date. She thought they had too much influence over me--like I don’t have a mind of my own. Maybe they did suggest I cut my hair, but I was tired of the way it looked; I wanted something different. I wanted my entire life to be different--maybe I just settled for a haircut".

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Family relationships,facing challenges

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Mom started watching my every
move and putting down Patty and
Marilyn. It didn't help that I got
home past curfew two weekends
in a row after going to the movies
with them. Suddenly, Mom said I
couldn't go to a sleepover at
Patty's that had been planned for
weeks. How did she put it? "Until
you learn how to tell time."

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Family struggles

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relationship and punishment.

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“Mom blamed my friends Patty and Marilyn. She said there was something wrong with them because they have really short hair and don't use makeup. And oh yeah, they don’t date. She thought they had too much influence over me--like I don’t have a mind of my own. Maybe they did suggest I cut my hair, but I was tired of the way it looked; I wanted something different. I wanted my entire life to be different--maybe I just settled for a haircut. Mom blamed my friends Patty and Marilyn. She said there was something wrong with them because they have really short hair and don't use makeup. And oh yeah, they don’t date. She thought they had too much influence over me--like I don’t have a mind of my own. Maybe they did suggest I cut my hair, but I was tired of the way it looked; I wanted something different. I wanted my entire life to be different--maybe I just settled for a haircut.” This shows that the mom blamed her friends because she couldn’t accept her daughters change of not wanting long hair any more.

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“Mom blamed my friends Patty and Marilyn. She said there was something wrong with them because they have really short hair and don't use makeup. And oh yeah, they don’t date. She thought they had too much influence over me--like I don’t have a mind of my own. Maybe they did suggest I cut my hair, but I was tired of the way it looked; I wanted something different. I wanted my entire life to be different--maybe I just settled for a haircut. Mom blamed my friends Patty and Marilyn. She said there was something wrong with them because they have really short hair and don't use makeup. And oh yeah, they don’t date. She thought they had too much influence over me--like I don’t have a mind of my own. Maybe they did suggest I cut my hair, but I was tired of the way it looked; I wanted something different. I wanted my entire life to be different--maybe I just settled for a haircut.” This shows that the mom blamed her friends because she couldn’t accept her daughters change of not wanting long hair any more.

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family problems, freedom, facing challenges etc.

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In "The Haircut" the main character has family problems, facing challenges and wants freedom. She wants freedom because her parents are controlling because she cut her hair. "It was the haircut that sent Mom over the edge. When I walked in the door, she looked at me hard, the corners of her mouth turning down. Then she looked away, back at the potatoes in the sink. Last week, she had absolutely forbidden me to cut it.

Upstairs in the bathroom, I studied my hair in the mirror--short. It made me feel a little exposed, but then running my hand through what was left made me smile.

No one in my family ever talks about anything important, so Mom stayed silently upset and Dad acted like nothing had happened. I just wanted everyone to get over it. But then Mom started in.

“Your hair was so beautiful! Why you would hack it off like that is beyond me. You’re such a beautiful girl--and now….”
She wants freedom and also wants to express herself. "Mom blamed my friends Patty and Marilyn. She said there was something wrong with them because they have really short hair and don't use makeup. And oh yeah, they don’t date. She thought they had too much influence over me--like I don’t have a mind of my own. Maybe they did suggest I cut my hair, but I was tired of the way it looked; I wanted something different. I wanted my entire life to be different--maybe I just settled for a haircut. " -Isabella<3