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i would like to invite people to hunza. it is the north of Pakistan and its a very beautiful mountainous place with beautiful lakes. Do visit attabad lake and taste their traditional food. people are very friendly there.

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Hi, today i am here to invite you to visit my home town and my home town is Balakot in KPK. it is such a beautiful town and the weather is also pleasant now a days. if you go further you will find more beautiful places like, kaghan, naran and saif ul maluk lake. which is as like paradise on earth. so one should go and see the place. hoping you will enjoy it.

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Come to Pakistan,the people who are really friendly.There is lots of greenery and you see it almost everywhere.

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Naran – Kaghan Valley. Naran is a medium sized town
>> AN ENCHANTINGLY BEAUTIFUL PLACE >> situated in upper kaghan valley which is a part of Khyber Pakhtun khwa province of Pakistan. It is one of the most beautiful part of northern areas in    Pakistan which is elevated 2500 meters above sea level. ... The weather of Naran is very cold.

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come and visit  japan. Japan is divided into 47 prefectures and traditionally into eight regions. Approximately two-thirds of the country's terrain is mountainous and heavily forested, and less than one-eighth of its land is suitable for agriculture. Consequently, Japan is among the most densely populated and urbanized countries in the world. The largest urban area is the metropolitan area centered on the capital city of Tokyo, which is the most populous in the world. Japan itself is the world's eleventh most populous country.

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Things people can do when they visit the place suggested in your travel brochure.

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Things people can do when they visit the place suggested in your travel brochure.

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come and visit   China, officially the People's Republic of China, is a country in East Asia. It is the world's most populous country, with a population of around 1.428 billion in 2017. Covering approximately 9,600,000 square kilometers, it is the world's third or fourth largest country by area and china is very beautiful .
you should visit china China is a unitary one-party socialist republic and is one of the few existing socialist states. Political dissidents and human rights groups have denounced and criticized the Chinese government for human rights abuses, suppression of religious and ethnic minorities, censorship and mass surveillance, and cracking down on protests such as in 1989. The Chinese government says that the right to subsistence and economic development is a prerequisite to other types of human rights and that the notion of human rights should take into account a country's present economic level.

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Kashmir is the northern-most state of India which gives the tourists millions of reasons to visit and celebrate its existence. Adorned with snow-clad mountains, glittering lakes with sailing shikaras and floating market, the untouched valley with colourful flowers, Kashmir boast of the tourist destinations that will make one fall in love instantly. Kashmir tourism isn’t just about embracing the impeccable natural beauty but also the rich culture that is wreathed with rare handicrafts and delectable cuisines. Even though zillions of words can be written to best describe the beauty of Kashmir, but to witness what magic the state possesses, one has to see it, to believe it.

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Kashmir is the northern-most state of India which gives the tourists millions of reasons to visit and celebrate its existence. Adorned with snow-clad mountains, glittering lakes with sailing shikaras and floating market, the untouched valley with colourful flowers, Kashmir boast of the tourist destinations that will make one fall in love instantly. Kashmir tourism isn’t just about embracing the impeccable natural beauty but also the rich culture that is wreathed with rare handicrafts and delectable cuisines. Even though zillions of words can be written to best describe the beauty of Kashmir, but to witness what magic the state possesses, one has to see it, to believe it.

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Visit Kashmir you will get impressed by Toli Pir greenery and breath.

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Come and visit Sawat their
THERE.>..are  high mountain and in winters in Malam Jabba the mountain are covered with snow .
and tTHE lake view of Baharaian river >> IS ?????and in winter the water is so cold  and they have make a system to that the water is coming every where
You can have the fun of the chair left and their tasty food  come and visit the Sawat ,.
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Visit Lahore a place full of  culture and ancient sightseeing!
Do you want to visit a place full of exciting places and adventure,well why not come to Lahore you will love the place.
Firstly,you can go and have some breakfast in the famous 'Lahore gym khana' and go and see the big Lahore  fortress stadium.
Then you can go for some sightseeing,why not go to badshahi mosque an ancient mosque built by a Mughal emperor long ago ,it  was built by a famous emperor Aurangzeb  in 1671. with The exterior  is decorated with red sand stones and marble.
And of course you can't forget about 'Shah i Qila' an amazing and vast fort built by the emperor Akbar and is at least 20 hectares  long with amazing ,ancient history!Don't forget to go to visit 'Minar-e-Pakistan,the place where the resolution was passed.
Don't forget the Wagah Border where every day a Wagah border ceremony is held  and serves as a good transit between India and Pakistan.
Afterwards go for some traditional shopping of different styles of shalwar kameez  then you can have some chai or tea  to drink.
Finally,you can have a look around at the busy streets and lanes of Lahore.Don't forget to try on some traditional jewelry and exotic foods!

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Come and visit Muree there are are    high mountains and snow you can get good (( delicious,, scrumptious ))food from    hotels and you can get good room you can   see different types   of  animal it's amazing

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Malam jabba
Kalam
Baharain river

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in Islamabad there are places to visit                                  Rawal Lake  is where you do   Sighting                                 Lake view park has great  picnic spots                          Fasil Masjid  is a   Place to pray and has a great view and architecture                                 at  Daman-e-Koh,  we can hike and it lunch it also has some antique shops

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in Islamabad there are places to visit                                  Rawal Lake  is where you do   Sighting                                 Lake view park has great  picnic spots                          Fasil Masjid  is a   Place to pray and has a great view and architecture                                 at  Daman-e-Koh,  we can hike and it lunch it also has some antique shops

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In Peshawar you can have a visit to the fetching fort of Bala Hisar Fort, the architecture here is elegant . The sight is very enticing , you will definitely list it into your must - visit places .>>GOOD>>
Then you can visit the magnificent museum of history in Peshawar, there is the history of Peshawar , most people come here to see the ancient rich culture of Khyber Pakhtunkhwa .
Finally you can end your trip in Qissa Khwani Bazaar , in this beautiful market you can have a cup of> FAMOUS PEHAWRI TEA >and buy some clothes >TOO>, at night this market is full of dazzling lights.
you will see people bargaining , eating and buying , Peshawar is an amazing historical city!

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Gilgit is the hub for expeditions to Mountains.It is a home to the worlds highest Mountains.Hiking on these mountains is very enjoying with beautiful view to the valley around.
Here you can EVEN stay  FOR nights and enjoy the BEAUTY OF  lakes. Rush lake  HAS A  beautiful view to enjoy the NATURAL beauty.
Here you can also visit National parks that have wild life and see the beauty of wild life closely.
There are 23 historical forts located here with lots of historical sites and facts.
And lastly you can enjoy the long festivals all around Gilgit Baltistan.

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In Islamabad you can see the Faisal Mosque witch world famous and after you can go to some very fancy restaurants to eat some fancy food.

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