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You could push down harder on the bottom and pinch a little harder two or more fingers on the walls. I like of smooth the inside of your is. 😃

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Elizabeth Tikhonin commenting on Caden Hammonds

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Elizabeth Tikhonin commenting on Caden Hammonds

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I like how the walls are smooth, but if I could make a suggestion it would be to not pinch so hard at the bottom.

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Madeline Tucker commenting on Elizabeth T.

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Your pot looks wonderful! It is very smooth and is the perfect size. However, the walls are a bit thick and uneven. You could fix this by pinching a bit harder and a bit more evenly. But overall, you pot looks very nice and is very good for a first attempt.

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Well done Maddie! I think that the bottom of your pot is very even and the perfect thickness! It looks absolutely great! A suggestion I would give to you would be to make your left side of your pot just a little bit thinner to match your right side. You could do this by pinching just a little more. Overall, it is a great creation, and you did a very good job!

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My first attempt cross section

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I really like how you smoothed out you piece, but maybe pinch a little harder so your piece is not as chubby. By the way sry for commenting on your piece, I just to savage (:<

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you could pinch harder on the sides and other than that it is good

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My first attempt cross!

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Grace, I really like how you smoothed out your the edges of your pinch pot, but maybe press down a little bit harder on your pinch pot so its not that chubby.

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You Could make the bottom a little more thick by not pinching to hard down.

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cross of first by Aiden Hemsley

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Aiden Hemsley

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Emma, it is a really good pinch pot, I liked the shape of the pot, but the walls are 2 different sizes. You could fix this by adding more clay to the thinner side. It is an amazing pinch pot-good job!
Ella Morse

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Your pinch pot is very well rounded and you did a great job keeping the sides the same thickness, but maybe you could make the sides a little bit thinner by pinching a little bit harder, but overall great job

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Cooper Cross

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my firs attemt

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i think it looks fantastic! but maybe just smooth out the inside a little bit. thats my suggestion other than that awesome job

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I believe your pot is decent but you could pinch a little lighter on the bottom. Also you should even out the sides and top. Otherwise you have created a good piece.  - Alyssa Gast

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You did really good! You could smooth the outside a little bit more. And from the outside the walls looked a bit uneven. But the pot looked great for a first attempt! i'm exited to see what it turns out to be!

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I like your because it is very well shaped. 😉🙏🏼🐴 wow.

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i think that the walls look great. i thing you should smooth in the inside a little more so its not too lumpy. other than that i think it looks great.

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I think that you could have made the walls a little bit wider. The walls were kinda slouching because of the thin walls were thin. It was a really good first attempt pot though.

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Logan, your pinch pot is REALLY GOOD! I loved how you made it round. My suggestion would be smooth it out better.

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you could pinch harder but other than that yours is good
FROM MR KORN

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The cross section!

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My pot!

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I think that it had a good thickness and a good shape and I liked it so good job

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I like the shape I think the walls could be thiner made next time you could have pressed harder! I real liked how you the product turned out.

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You could pinch the walls with a little less force, and you could also round it out more. I like how big it was and the general shape. In general, it is pretty good. 😊

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I think that it could be on the inside more smooth and on the outside and on the sides more thick but i did like the size.😃

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Lauren Thompson commenting on Alyssa Gast

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Your pinch pot is amazing, especially for the first try, but maybe you could pinch a little harder on the bottom and the corners.

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Tater Tot commenting on Grace! Try to smooth the outer side with a little more force

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Tater Tot commenting on Grace! Try to smooth the outer side with a little more force

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I really like how you spread it out and made the thickness even. However, the thickness was even but it was pretty thin. You probably could have pinched with less force. Other than that, your pinch pot was very good.

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I think it is very good, but you could probably smooth the edges

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I really like how you smoothed out your piece from the inside and made it curved, but maybe push down a little bit more so you can have some more clay to make your clay piece a little bit bigger, but great job otherwise.

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Baller

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I like the shape of your pot but I think you could have made it smoother you could have added slip!But overall it was very good.

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I think that you did a very good job smoothing it out and getting fingerprints out.  My suggestion is to maybe make the thickness even on each side. U maybe could have done this by looking at the top and on the side that was thicker, pinch a little more that way it is even. Other than that, GREAT JOB!!!!!

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I really like it because it looks smooth, and it's thin.😐 (Also next time, try making the pot a little bigger) (btw its Ashlyn🙃)

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You could have pinched harder on the sides and softer in the bottom. The inside looks really smooth.

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Your pinch pot is very good, but maybe you could pinch less to make the walls a little thicker and try to even out the pinching

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Lily Reynolds commenting on Samantha Brody  

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Lily Reynolds commenting on Samantha Brody  

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I think that you could have made the pinch pot more rounded because it looks really small i don't know if it was because it was so far away from the camera but it looks really good it was smooth and i liked it

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You did really good on keeping the corners not to thick or too skinny something you could of done better is maybe straighten out the top a little more because its a little crumbled by maybe using more water so it will not dry out as much . Other wise good job!
by Brinley murphy

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I like your pot but, you could of tried a little harder to make it good.

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Morgan Arnurius commenting on Lauren Thompson 

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Morgan Arnurius commenting on Lauren Thompson 

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I think the bottom of your pinch pot is a good thickness. I would suggest to pinch the corners inward

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Attempt cross section

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I really like the way you smoothed out your clay piece and how you made the bottom of your clay piece pushed down well. Maybe you could make the top of your piece more in to your piece, but love the clay piece.

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I think you could make the side a little thinner by pitching harder. I also think it is a little to thick in the corners and you can also fix that by pitching harder.
By Ben Schaefer

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attempt 1

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First One😱🤗
Name:Tater Tot

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Lauren Thompson

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Morgan Arnurius

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commenting on alyssa gast
yours looks awesome way better than me

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by gabe

i think that your pinch pot is good for your first one but your pot could use some work done on it by smoothing the inside of it.

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commenting on caden by gabe you can do it better

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commenting on caden by gabe you can do it better

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by smoothing it and also by making  the corners less thick by pinching and also you could also make the walls less thick and also your left wall was thicker than the right one

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Commenting on ella johnson i don't think she should pinch too hard

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Commenting on ella johnson i don't think she should pinch too hard

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It is grate.

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The walls looked pretty even and it wasn't cracking. The walls could have been a little more thick and could have pinched softer and the top could have been a bit more even. But overall a great pot :)

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I think maybe you should have made it a little taller and wider because it's very long. You also should have pinched a little harder to make it thin. Overall it is pretty good.

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my 1st

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This is good for first attempt, but it is really thin. But yet awesome.
-Grace

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The corners are a little uneven and thin. Also the sides are thick and could be pinched out some. Otherwise your piece is good.
-Alyssa Gast