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@Serena it's a strong topic but I feel like comparing that to how everyone was treated unfairly is too vague because people are treated unfairly all throughout history and even still today

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@peter I think your thesis on comparing the mob mentality of the Salem witch trial and the Japanese interment camps is really good!

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History repeats itself in the Salem Witch Trials and the Holocaust in many ways.  In The Crucible by Arthur Miller, Abigail Williams set off the fear of “witches” among the townspeople that caused the Salem witch trials. This event led to over 200 false accusations against “witches” that caused the deaths of 24 innocent people. In a similar aspect, Adolf Hitler sparked the fear of Jews with his racist speeches and propaganda which led to the mass genocide of almost an entire race, with 6 million Jews killed in cold blood. Characteristics that would likely get someone accused of witchcraft in Salem was if that person had a bad reputation and/or if they were considered an outsider. This situation is like the Holocaust because people of the Jewish faith were terrorized for religious beliefs. Tragedies like these only happen because people are simply afraid of what they do not understand.

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My thesis is about how the events in The Crucible and the Holocaust are similar in the

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@Chase I like how in depth your thesis is. You can see all of your main points and where you are headed with your essay.

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@Hailey What exactly is the Scottsboro Boys trial?

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In The Crucible by Arthur Miller, it is appalling to hear about the witchcraft trials that went on in the 17th century, but most people do not know that it still goes on today. Innocent people were taken from their homes because they were accused for “witchcraft”, which sounds crazy, but it is still going on today.

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@Daniel I really like this thesis, I think you worded it good and I know exactly what I would be reading about.

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@Tony You should put in the things you will talk about besides the events, what about the events.

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@nessa I like how you connected the witch trials to something present day

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@mikenah I really like how you worded your thesis!

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There are many similarities between the tragedies of the Salem witch trials and the Holocaust, particularly the way people respond during mass hysteria.

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The Crucible relates to 9/11 and the ideal image of  muslims for they were judged for their appearance rather than their own personality.

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Your thesis is very well thought and well worded. Being that it is a relatable topic between witch trials and the Holocaust your essay should be good. :

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remember to compare and contrast not just one or the other

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There are many similarities between what happened in "The Crucible" and what happened on the Holocaust including the fact that people were falsely accused.

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Arthur Miller’s The Crucible correlates to the false accusations made between the witches and the African Americans involved with the Black Lives Matter movement.

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Arthur Miller’s The Crucible correlates to the false accusations made between the witches and the African Americans involved with the Black Lives Matter movement.

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Arthur Miller’s The Crucible correlates to the false accusations made between the witches and the African Americans involved with the Black Lives Matter movement.

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@Jessica
So the fear of the atomic bomb correlates to the trials in which way specifically ? If it could be summarized into one sentence

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@Rhianna
I like the idea of the accusations of social media and the trials ! It's unique :)

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@Rhianna
I like the idea of the false accusations between the trials and social media. It's unique :)

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@Grace i like how you explained what you're going to do and i think it will be a good essay.

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@Bryan i like your thesis and how well it can compare towards the crucible

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The crucible can be compared to the witch hunts against muslims and terrorists after the 9/11 terrorist attack

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@Jason K.
This thesis will allow you to write how humanity has changed from both of these events which can be at least a page.

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In "The Crucible" Miller uses themes of racism, mob mentality, and abuse of power which can all be related to social media today.

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@MikeNah  Mike, you comparison of the crucible to the red scare is very much in parallel. The thesis is very good and a great topic for discussion.

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@Joeiny These are good but make sure you go in depth more.

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@ Matt Horvath
I agree with you on the unjust executions that went against the common people. The Nazis wanted to eliminate people who didn't convert to the norms of society.

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@Tony You need to be more specific with what your three main points are going to be in the essay

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The Crucible, by Arthur Miller, is easily compared to the historical event, the Holocaust. Unfortunately, both instances tortured innocent people and caused irrational fears, but the Crucible allowed the accused to testify and the Holocaust killed people without trial.

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Thesis: In the Crucible, the themes of hysteria, reputation, and intolerance can be connected to the events of the Holocaust.

Rough draft attached.

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@Jaden McNett Nice thesis, you might want to just use the Salem witch trials instead of The Crucible as a whole though.

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Very detailed thesis and and well explained

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Thesis is interesting but could use a bit more details but overall good

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Throughout this essay, you will see the differences between the two horrific events over time.  The differences between the Holocaust and the Crucible, the Holocaust beginning in 1933 and the Crucible taking place during 1692.

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The Crucible and the holocaust both emphasized how the thoughts and desires of one person can completely destroy an entire society.

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@Peter I like your ideas and where you plan on going with your paper.  You're the first person I heard of that is comparing it to these camps. You could also include how in both cases children were not safe either and they were also suspected and punished just like the adults.

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@Rim I love your comparison between the witch trials and present day elections. I agree with your point about how society is too gullible and manipulated into believing anything someone with power says. Only thing, don't forget to re-state your thesis at the beginning of your conclusion.

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Thesis: Similar to the Salem witch trials, the clown hysteria is sweeping the nation, brought up by children, and has played as a distraction from the important events happening in society.

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@coral
This is a very clear thesis, I know exactly how your essay is gonna go, great job

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@serenasuzansky

Really interesting topic, I never even thought to compare the witch trials and women's rights

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The events that take place in The Crucible by Arthur Miller are remarkably similar to the events that occurred during the red scares

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@Hailey Your thesis is interesting, however I would be a bit more specific, because not a lot of details were stated about the Scottsboro Trials

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The Crucible is a lot like the current terrorism taking place in Iraq and Syria, because mostly women are prosecuted, and people are being prosecuted due to religion,

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The Crucible by Arthur Miller is similar to the current terrorism going on in Iraq and Syria, because mostly women are being prosecut

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👈🏻👈🏻👈🏻Mines

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The influence of fear compares "The Crucible" to infinite amount of events like it as a result of how people react towards fear, what people do when they are in a fearful situation, how fear changes people

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@Serena Great thesis. just make sure you go into further detail when backing up your argument of women's mistreatment and inequality with men. You could use past puritan reads we did in class as references and to look quotes in. But overall good argument

@Rhianna Good point. But I think it is a little too broad, try and focus in one specific event or situation in social media. but overall great argument

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@Rim
I like the way your thesis is worded and I think it's a great topic for this time period

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@camila
I like your comparison to the Crucible and black lives matter. I think that'd be a very interesting essay

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The corrupt use of government power, unjust death penalties from false trials, and theocratic based ruling is shown in Queen Mary’s persecution of protestants as well as in the Salem witch trials depicted in The Crucible.

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That is a really good comparison. But by social media, do you mean a certain of it, or social media

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I liked how you said that it is a distraction to what is really going on in society

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Arthur Miller's The Crucible and the Syrian Refugee Crisis both demonstrate a theme of not knowing what's coming next through major events that leave people's lives broken.

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Thesis: Similar to the Salem witch trials, the clown hysteria is sweeping the nation, brought up by children, and has played as a distraction from the important events happening in society.

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@alycia I would make it more obvious what you are writing about because I don't really understand what you are comparing to The Crucible, but from what I do understand it sounds interesting.

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@serena I like the topic you are comparing to The Crucible, but I would combine the sentences that you wrote to make your thesis flow more.

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The Crucible compares to the Stonewall Riots by the involved being considered a societal threat, the views being based on stereotypes, the outbreak of hysteria being caused by the abuse of authority and biased laws, and the accused not being given a fair trial and actually being innocent.

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@ grace
Good thesis, talks about the main idea of your essay clearly

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The Crucible written by Arthur Miller and Social Media mixed with the clowns represents the mistakes and how fast gossip gets around these days.

@bryan I totally see your point and I think it is a real shame how all Muslims will only be seen as terrorists because of 9/11.

@Rim I love your thesis and especially this election can be compared to the crucible.

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@ Mike Nah

Very well worded thesis, states the main idea of your essay clearly and to the point

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In the Crucible people were afraid of witches, just like how after 9/11 people were afraid of Muslims. People were scared of Muslims because the people that did 9/11 were Muslim extremists so people just saw all Muslims as terrorists.

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@Rhianna  great use of big words sis! Your vocabulary choice is outstanding(:

@Jasmin your thesis makes me sound like an idiot...you write amazing! you'll surely get an A if you keep up the good vocabulary!!

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People might read The Crucible and read about women’s rights and think there is no similarity between the two. However, these two topics are much more similar than most people believe they are. People were treated unfairly both during the salem witch trials and during the times where women were stay at home moms/wives.

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@Rim I really like your idea for your essay. It is very creative!

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@jaden
this is really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood. I too believe that the Holocaust was unjust and its really good.

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@grace
"The Crucible," by Arthur Miller, compares...

Other than that, its pretty good.

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Although Arthur Miller's "The Crucible" was written about the injustices of the Salem witch trials in 1692, its theme of wild accusations and mob mentality is very similar to the Japanese internment during World War II.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1rvV5Ui3Kq2HyR5RjHthzMzIddMmenoIJQI9oDZG0Tts/edit?usp=sharing

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@Christina I really like your thesis and the use of vocabulary
@Alycia your thesis is very well written

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Although they may seem very different, both the events from The Crucible and social media contain assumptions and false accusations, both are a popular and significant event of their time period, and both cause and increase problems to others.

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In The Crucible, the Puritans were punished by the way they lived their life, were judged by the decisions they made and the beliefs they followed just like the Jewish people during the Holocaust and other historical events of religious discrimination.

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@mike I think your thesis is great and I got the connection without you having to explain it.

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@Alycia I love the thought you put into your thesis

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@Alycia I love the thought you put into your thesis

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-Zyanna Rosado

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The Crucible can be compared to the "Zip to Zap" riot by the human reactions, the impact it had on the cities, and the outcomes.

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@jasmin I really like your thesis statement!

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@jasmin strong point there, jas. Totally agree! Just make sure to not mention McCarthyism:).

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I love your comparison, your essay will be great.

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Here's my rough draft in case anyone actually wants to take a look. I'm totally open for suggestions :).
https://docs.google.com/a/basdschools.org/document/d/1ZsMydBT1KxiSIGZH_kqn2MEQNl3g5sPH3uzrKoVlMvs/edit?usp=sharing

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Great Job, I love the idea of your essay. ayyyylmao

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Arthur Miller's, The Crucible, can be viewed as a parallel of the Red Scare in America where numerous people were accused of being communist sympathizers, few folks were put to death, and the issue evolved through the fear of communism from the Soviet Union.

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I really like that you chose a topic that not many people are familiar with, which makes your essay interesting!! I do suggest rearranging the wording so your thesis is easier to comprehend.

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@Rim Turk I agree 100% with your thesis. Good job

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@Coral Great choice there! The Holocaust is a very relatable situation when it comes to The Crucible. It is very common, too, so I would try adding something "unique" to the essay if it makes sense.

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