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WWW-Very detailed piece, I really liked the storyline to this. It is very interesting and I would love to see the final product.
Ebi- add more dramatic music to engage the audience.

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Maybe add more enigmas, as we already know a lot about Luna and her evilness just from the trailer. Make it surprising. Also the music is important, have a good track and a bad track to surprise the audience, that the trailer they are watching is not innocent anymore.

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Is everything you have written here going in the trailer? If so, you are giving a lot away about the film (pretty much the whole plot) in just the trailer, however if not all of this is included it looks good :) I think the use of sound should be focused on as it will definitely add to the mood of your trailer, especially the cut from happy music to a dangerous track

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They all are dark and have a mysterious look to them

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They all are dark and have a mysterious look to them

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dark colours such as red or black are used and a main focus picture to grab viewers attention.
I like posters if the image of who is on it, the props that are used and the background is good and who is starring in the film and I recognise them.
In your film poster you should include the camera angle facing on so I can see who is starring in the film and if I can recognise if they are a star.

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I like the Empire magazine as it has Will Smith on the front and has a lot of other stuff going on in the background. This is interesting to me because it shows that there is a lot to read and I won't get bored. 

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I like the Empire magazine as it has Will Smith on the front and has a lot of other stuff going on in the background. This is interesting to me because it shows that there is a lot to read and I won't get bored. 

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I like the darkness of all the colour schmes but they all look to similar with their conventions.

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I like the darkness of all the colour schmes but they all look to similar with their conventions.

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I like the darkness, the title and background image being a main focus as it is the first thing that people will see.
The people on the front and the colours that are being used are nice.

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Very detailed with an interesting plot line but it's maybe not so predictable in terms of the best friends thing not anything I have noticed before which is good. Maybe have less of a story as it is only a trailer but that will be cut down during editing anyways- more enigma needed. I normally like locations of
a park, houses and a street. I like the use of darkness in trailers and that the majority of female characters are shown as being vulnerable because it plays on conventions we already see in films.

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I love the story line, the plot is very detailed so that we can see what the plans for the trailer are. I love how the enigma of who the villain is in the trailer. Great story!

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I love the narrative conventions in the trailers, the element of surprise and mystery is generated in the trailer "The Girl On The Train" thriller. The use of darkness and silence makes the audience wait to see what will happen next. I like that.

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its a great storyline and no improvement in my opinion! but you could add dramatic music so the audience is even more engaged.

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the soundtrack made it more exciting to watch, so you could add this in yours. Accused at 17 is my favourite film trailer as it was interesting. I don't like how some film trailers use too much flashing images.

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I think it is a very interesting storyline. I think that best friend necklace is good prop because it shows the viewer that this trailer is about friendship. Maybe in the trailer you could show a clip on how her dad died.

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It looks mysterious so it catches my eye to see what will happen in the film. I like the soundtrack of the trailer. I hate horror themes in films because it is too gruesome. In trailers I like the music and theme that it's showing. My favourite film trailer is Me Before You because the storyline is really good. I hate the trailer Wrong Turn (a horror) because it is shows how they eat people.

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this is definitely something that I would want as a magazine- elegance, perfect picture, simple colour and just enough headlines

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this is definitely something that I would want as a magazine- elegance, perfect picture, simple colour and just enough headlines

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again, can't read anything because there is just too much on the picture

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again, can't read anything because there is just too much on the picture

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I like the mystery surrounding the picture- again, it will draw in veiwers

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I like the mystery surrounding the picture- again, it will draw in veiwers

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dramatic- appealing as it is not a natural look

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looks mysterious- something that people will actually want to look at

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looks mysterious- something that people will actually want to look at

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all the magazine has a limited amount of text, so not every magazine looks good with too much text.
but it depends on the angle of the picture and its shot.

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make-up is another important aspect which you need to consider.

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they look professional and looks better if the person is in a portrait and stands out more than the texts that surround it.

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the characters face-expression doesn't look good. - the black and white theme doesn't suit it that well.

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poster has good colour contrast- and it has a good expression on the characters face.

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the theme is appealing and interesting with the dramatic outlook.

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I also like the soundtack of 'The Girl on the Train' this is something that shows a different contrast between the typical scary soundtrack and the one used in this particular trailer is different and I think you should do this for your trailer.

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and how there's such little writing

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I like the magazine anyways because of Will Smith and the colours makes me want to read it.

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Looks a bit all over the place I wouldnt' read

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Looks a bit all over the place I wouldnt' read

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Don't like it, its too vague and doesn't look interesting

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Looks like a swan

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White theme is nice

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I like the train tracks as it relates to the title

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I like the train tracks as it relates to the title

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element of mystery looks scary

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I like how every trailer displays the main setting in which the crime takes place by showing a long shot as an overall viewpoint. I also like how the action builds up in time with the music.
I dislike the how the main character is introduced (Emily Osment) and the name appearing at the end. In your trailer you can use an under-tunnel location for your trailer and show characters are getting accused for no reason and how they overcome difficulties.

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like- the narrative convention. I like how they use two different age grouped people, I can see how they find it hard to understand each other so there is conflict between the two age groups.
I like how it gives another extra bit after the title.

dislike- it gives too much information and evidence from the film, so we can expect what will happen. i also dislike the negative ending.

in your trailer, you could show physical action from the characters. i really like the two faced grandparents- and how the little girl responds by pushing her down the hill.
my favourite film trailer is the Kingsman and it is from the crime-thriller genre and as expected it has really high sophisticated technology and action based narrative- i like how the main character who was a former criminal relates to many of the audience in some ways- and how he transforms from his casual look to smart figure.

what i hate in trailers is when they spoil the film too much and we can guess what the end will be, so i l really like when they have a mystery side that leaves the audience in question and has an enigmatic sense.

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The plot sounds good and interesting all throughout -seems like something worthwhile to watch

No improvements needed in my opinion

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I'm more likely to buy a magazine if the front cover appeals to me as well as some of the main articles highlighted on the front - a nice picture helps a lot too

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I like that each magazine cover has a theme to it but some of them are pretty crowded with a lot of words.

I think you should definitely try and stick to a certain colour scheme/theme to make it seem more engaging.

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Stereotypical narrative

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Kind of stereotypical but still good

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I really like the storyline, it is interesting and I would watch a movie like that. However I think the treatment is a bit confusing.

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STEP 3) Look at the magazine covers below

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STEP 3) Look at the magazine covers below

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1. What are your likes and dislikes about each of the magazines?
2. Do you think there any aspects of the magazines I should include in my magazine?
3. What part of a magazine will make you buy it?

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Emily Osment A DAUGHTER'S NIGHTMARE Official Trailer |NEW MOVIE 2014| HD

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"A Daughter's Nightmare" a new thriller movie with Emily Osment, the protagonist of the hit movie "Cyberbully". Premieres May 3, 2014 on Lifetime, Movie Central and The Movie Network channel. Starring: Emily Jordan Osment (Spy Kids 2 : Island of Lost Dreams , Spy Kids 3- D : Game Over, Hanna Montana), Richard Karn (Home Improvement , Last Man Standing) , Gregg Sulkin (The Wizards Return : Alex Vs.

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PLEASE FOLLOW THE STEPS BELOW, COMPLETE ALL THE TASKS AND PLEASE BE HONEST WHEN ANSWERING

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PLEASE FOLLOW THE STEPS BELOW, COMPLETE ALL THE TASKS AND PLEASE BE HONEST WHEN ANSWERING

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1. What are your likes and dislikes about each of the posters?
2. Do you think there any aspects of the posters I should include in my upcoming film poster?
3. What part of a poster will make you want to watch the film and why?

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Starring Nicole Gale Anderson, Cynthia Gibb, Janet Montgomery, and Lindsay Taylor. Showing on Lifetime sometime in 2010!

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1. What is good about the treatment and what could be improved?
2. Is there anything that could be added?
3. What would you like to see in the trailer that is not already included?
4. What locations, props and characters do you prefer to see in the trailer?

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STEP 1) Please watch the trailers below 

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STEP 1) Please watch the trailers below 

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1. What are your likes and dislikes about each of the trailers?
2. Is there anything you like in this trailer that I could add in mine?
3. What entices you from a trailer?
4. What are your favourite film trailers? and why?
5. Is there anything you hate in film trailers? and why?

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The Girl on the Train - Official Trailer - In Theaters October 7 (HD)