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 I HAVE TO ADMIT THAT I DON'T REACT IN THE SAME WHY WHEN I AM CRITIZED. When my parents criticise me sometimes  I get upset because they're really important for me.HOWEVER,butwhen my friends do I don't really care about it. 

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 I HAVE TO ADMIT THAT I DON'T REACT IN THE SAME WHY WHEN I AM CRITIZED. When my parents criticise me sometimes  I get upset because they're really important for me.HOWEVER,butwhen my friends do I don't really care about it. 

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Romaisa

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When my parents CRITIZE me I get angry because I care about their opinion.HOWEVER, WHEN MY FRIENDS DO IT I don’t care THAT MUCH.

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When my parents CRITIZE me I get angry because I care about their opinion.HOWEVER, WHEN MY FRIENDS DO IT I don’t care THAT MUCH.

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Cecília Miquel Mascaró

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I don't like when people criticise me. HOWEVER I DO  try to listen to them and to LEARN FROM my errors AND TO  STRENGHTEN MY weak points

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I don't like when people criticise me. HOWEVER I DO  try to listen to them and to LEARN FROM my errors AND TO  STRENGHTEN MY weak points

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Fatima El Mekkioui

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If I was asked to eat the same food for a week I would choose the Spanish 'paella'. It is my favourite food ,better said, it has always been the best option for me. I love it

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If I was asked to eat the same food for a week I would choose the Spanish 'paella'. It is my favourite food ,better said, it has always been the best option for me. I love it

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Mar Càneves.

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I would choose spanish paella because I love it and it is my favourite food. Especially I like my mother's one, it is perfect and very tasty. 

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I would choose spanish paella because I love it and it is my favourite food. Especially I like my mother's one, it is perfect and very tasty. 

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Mar Càneves.

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I WOULD  rather  read people's mind, because if I COULD read people's mind I  WOULD know what  people thinK about me.ON THE ONE HAND,  I WOULD  know if I'm a good person and if I'm popular for the people. FINALLY, I could know if my girlfriend reAlly loves me.

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I WOULD  rather  read people's mind, because if I COULD read people's mind I  WOULD know what  people thinK about me.ON THE ONE HAND,  I WOULD  know if I'm a good person and if I'm popular for the people. FINALLY, I could know if my girlfriend reAlly loves me.

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Miquel Adrover TRY TO USE CONNECTORS AND BE CAREFUL ..YOU USED ALL THE TIME "WILL" BUT YOU SHOULD HAVE USED "WOULD " CONDITIONAL

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I would rather be able to read people's mind .I think that some times people say things that they don't really think and if I could read their mind I could know when they are LYING me.
OK, .I JUST ADD A FULL STOP IN THE FIRST SENTENCE BECUASE IF NOT THE SENTENCE WAS A BIT TOO LONG

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If I had to choose I would prefer TO read people'S mind becaUSE  IT WOULD BE POSiTIVE FOR ME AND FOR OTHER PEOPLE. ON THE ONE HAND , I would be able to know if the PEOPLE LIE TO ME . As well as I could know if the PEOPLE  ARE sad AND I  would be able to help THEM 

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If I had to choose I would prefer TO read people'S mind becaUSE  IT WOULD BE POSiTIVE FOR ME AND FOR OTHER PEOPLE. ON THE ONE HAND , I would be able to know if the PEOPLE LIE TO ME . As well as I could know if the PEOPLE  ARE sad AND I  would be able to help THEM 

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Toni Martorell
ONE RECOMENDATION. USE PEOPLE INSTEAD OF  HE/ OR SHE  WHEN YOU TALK IN GENERAL ,BECAUSE IF NOT YOU WILL HAVE TO WRITE ALL THE TIME  "HIS  AND HER"
EX. You will know if a person is sad and you will be able to help her or him/ you will know if people are sad and you will be able to help them.

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I would rather be able to read people's mind.WE ALL KNOW THAT PEOPLE ARE NOT SINCERE  and if I WERE able to read people's mind I WOULD know always the truth

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I would rather be able to read people's mind.WE ALL KNOW THAT PEOPLE ARE NOT SINCERE  and if I WERE able to read people's mind I WOULD know always the truth

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Sergi Fullana Pascual.
REMEMBER TO USE "WOULD" AND NOT "WILL" BECAUSE READING PEOPLE'S MIND AS FAR AS I KNOW IT IS NOT POSSIBLE

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I would rather be invisible. I think if I COULD read  PEOPLE'S  minds I would get upset or insecure because I would constantly be hearing what people think about me.HOWEVER,  if  I WERE invisible I would be able to sneak in places that I WOULDN'T BE ABLE TO  get in if I WERE not invisible

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I would rather be invisible. I think if I COULD read  PEOPLE'S  minds I would get upset or insecure because I would constantly be hearing what people think about me.HOWEVER,  if  I WERE invisible I would be able to sneak in places that I WOULDN'T BE ABLE TO  get in if I WERE not invisible

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fatima el mekkioui
REMEMBER "I" GOES ALWAYS IN CAPITAL LETTERS
REMEMBER TO USE "WOULD" AND NOT "WILL" BECAUSE AS FAR AS I KNOW BEING INVISIBLE IT IS NOT POSSIBLE SO FAR

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I would rather be invisible because I  would BE ABLE to do  WHATEVER  I  wantED and nobody would see what I do. I think that beING  able to read people mind COULD  BE DANGEROUS because if you KNEW that the   WHAT PEOPLE THOUGHT people things to you, probably you won’t  WOULDN'T be happy.

Joan Nadal
DON'T WRITE THINGS LIKE  "A BAD THING", USE MORE SPECIFIC WORDS(COULD BE NEGATIVE, COULD HURT PEOPLE,
USE "WOULD "AND NOT "WILL" BECAUSE BEING INVISIBLE IS NOT SOMETHING REAL.

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I would rather be invisible because I would be able to  SHOPLIFT.MOREOVER, knowing what people think it’s just depressing

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I would rather be invisible because I would be able to  SHOPLIFT.MOREOVER, knowing what people think it’s just depressing

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Marina
OK ALTHOUGH ...WOULD YOU ONLY USE BEING INVISIBLE TO STEAL?
TO STEAL WHATEVER YOU WANT FROM A SHOP IS "SHOPLIFT"

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I would rather to read people’s minds because I’m a curious person and I would like to know if what other PEOPLE said would be true or false.
GOOD YOU USED "WOULD" CONGRATS

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I would rather be invisible bacause I don't really care about what others think about me .So if I was able to read others peopleS mindS it wouldn't be much of a deal for me. On the other hand, if I was invisible I could do lots of MISCHIEVOUS /NAUGHTY things that I cannot do now.

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I would rather be invisible bacause I don't really care about what others think about me .So if I was able to read others peopleS mindS it wouldn't be much of a deal for me. On the other hand, if I was invisible I could do lots of MISCHIEVOUS /NAUGHTY things that I cannot do now.

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Jana G.

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If I could choose between beING  invisible or beING  able to read minds, I would definitely choose to read minds, since I would love to know WHAT people think and WHETHER they are really telling the truth or not. I would really love to have that power.

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If I could choose between beING  invisible or beING  able to read minds, I would definitely choose to read minds, since I would love to know WHAT people think and WHETHER they are really telling the truth or not. I would really love to have that power.

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Brunna Da Silva
IF THE QUESTION HAS A YES/NO ANSWER IS BETTER TO USE "WHETHER"

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If I would rather HAVE THE CHANCE OF CHOOSING BETWEEN  beING  invisible or beING abled to reAd people's minds  I would choose to be invisible. Because  I could move all over everywhere without people seeing me, BEING SEEN .MOREOVER,  it would Also be a  VERY EASY way of stealING AMYTHING I WISH  without gettinG caught.

Maria Alcover

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If I could choose between beING  invisible or beING  able to read minds, I  WOULD choose to be invisible, because I COULD  go to a lot of sites that AN ORDINARY  person can't go. For example, if I WERE invisible, at the school time, I COULD SKIP LESSONS AND GO SOMEWHERE ELSE 

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If I could choose between beING  invisible or beING  able to read minds, I  WOULD choose to be invisible, because I COULD  go to a lot of sites that AN ORDINARY  person can't go. For example, if I WERE invisible, at the school time, I COULD SKIP LESSONS AND GO SOMEWHERE ELSE 

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Marc Alomar Fuster
CONDITIONAL TYPE 2
IF I WERE....I COULD ( IF PAST SIMPLE, COULD/WOULD +INFINITIVE)

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I would rather be invisible because I would like to go to places where I can not normally go  because of my age . And I think it would be really FUN .

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I would rather be invisible because I would like to go to places where I can not normally go  because of my age . And I think it would be really FUN .

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Mar Càneves
FUNNY(MAKES YOU LAUGH) FUN( IT IS ENTRETAINING...)

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I would rather go to the future cause I would be able to see what's my future  WOULD BE like .MOREOVER I WOULD be able to change the things I don't like about it.

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I would rather go to the future cause I would be able to see what's my future  WOULD BE like .MOREOVER I WOULD be able to change the things I don't like about it.

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Jana Galmés Capó

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I would like to return to the past,ESPECIALLY I WOULD LIKE TO BE BACK  on 2009,  to SEE the Real Madrid 2-6 FC Barcelona on the Bernabeu stadium.

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I would like to return to the past,ESPECIALLY I WOULD LIKE TO BE BACK  on 2009,  to SEE the Real Madrid 2-6 FC Barcelona on the Bernabeu stadium.

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Xavi Frau
HI XAVI YOU CAN'T SAY "TO SAW"(EVEN THOUGH IS IN THE PAST) YOU MUST SAY "TO SEE"( PER VEURE, INFINITIVE)

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I would go to the future because if I WENT to the future I could see future events AND AVOID NEGATIVE THINGS TO HAPPEN. FOR INSTANCE/for example if in the future my mother died because OF  a train ACCIDENT I WOULD BE ABLE TO SAVE HER

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I would go to the future because if I WENT to the future I could see future events AND AVOID NEGATIVE THINGS TO HAPPEN. FOR INSTANCE/for example if in the future my mother died because OF  a train ACCIDENT I WOULD BE ABLE TO SAVE HER

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Toni Martorell
1. IF I WENT ( NO IF I GO, BECAUSE IT IS CONDITIONAL TYPE 2, WOULD / PAST SIMPLE)
2. BECAUSE+SUBJE+ VERB( BECAUSE SHE IS HAPPY)
BECAUSE OF + NOUN PHRASE( BECAUSE OF HER HAPPINESS)

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If I had a time machine I would rather go to the past because LIKE THIS I COULD DO MANY THINGS. ON THE ONE HAND ,I'd like to solve all the problems I had in the past in a better way. ON THE OTHER HAND, I'd also like to revive the best moments in my life and the funniest ones. HOWEVER,TRAVELLING TO THE FUTURE WOULD MEAN THAT  I would live two liVes, AND THAT  WOULDN'T  be funny. 

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If I had a time machine I would rather go to the past because LIKE THIS I COULD DO MANY THINGS. ON THE ONE HAND ,I'd like to solve all the problems I had in the past in a better way. ON THE OTHER HAND, I'd also like to revive the best moments in my life and the funniest ones. HOWEVER,TRAVELLING TO THE FUTURE WOULD MEAN THAT  I would live two liVes, AND THAT  WOULDN'T  be funny. 

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Mar Càneves.
TRY TO USE CONNECTORS AND NOT ONLY "AND AND BUT"
REMEMBER TO USE"WOULD" WHEN YOU TALK ABOUT HYPOTETICAL SITUATIONS AND NOT WILL

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I would travel to the past, maybe 8 or 10 years BACKWARD to when I was in primary school because I HAD a lot of good memories from THOSE DAYS

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I would travel to the past, maybe 8 or 10 years BACKWARD to when I was in primary school because I HAD a lot of good memories from THOSE DAYS

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Romaisa L.
REMEBMBER TO USE PAST ( BECAUSE I HAVE , YOU SAID)

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If I had a time machine I would go to the future to see how MY LIFE IS GOING  and what's about me.??

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If I had a time machine I would go to the future to see how MY LIFE IS GOING  and what's about me.??

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Miquel Adrover
WORD ORDER PROBLEM:  ·HOW IS GOING MY LIFE" IS USED IN QUESTIONS, IN AFFIRMATIVE SENTENCES YOU SHOULD WRITE "HOW MY LIFE IS GOING"
YOU SHOULD EXPLAIN IN A DIFFERENT WAY WHAT YOU MEAN ABOUT "WHAT'S ABOUT ME???)

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I would like  TO return to the past because I love SPANISH HISTORY. SPECIALLY THE  15TH CENTURY.I WOULD LIKE TO SEE PEOPLE LIVED IN SPAIN IN 1468.

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I would like  TO return to the past because I love SPANISH HISTORY. SPECIALLY THE  15TH CENTURY.I WOULD LIKE TO SEE PEOPLE LIVED IN SPAIN IN 1468.

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Anas
I THINK THAT IS MORE OR LESS WHAT YOU WANTED TO SAY .

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I would rather to go to te future beasicly, because I don't want I WOULD BE SCARED TO to go to the past because I don't want meke  AND DO something there that can COULD   change my present. And I would also like  to go to the future due to  THE FACT THAT I WOULD LIKE  to know which type of life I would have in the future.
1 YOU SHOULD USE THE PAST NOT THE PRESENT BECAUSE IT IS A HYPOTHETICAL SITUATION
2 DUE TO +NOUN PHRASE: DUE TO HIS PROBLEMS
DUE TO THE FACT THAT+SUBJ AND VERB: DUE TO THE FACT THAT SHE HAS PROBLEMS

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If I could travel to any time i  I would go to a far future .LIKE THIS I COULDbecause i i  want to see how we WOULD evolve  and how will be things   WHICH THINGS WOULD BE WAITING FOR US  at wait to the humanity.

Joan Nadal Gaya

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If I had a time machine I would go to the future to know how MY LIFE WOULD BE in 10 or 20 years.HOWEVER IF I COULD GO   to the past I would change the present AND THAT COULD HAVE NEGATIVE EFFECTS ON HUMANKIND  

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If I had a time machine I would go to the future to know how MY LIFE WOULD BE in 10 or 20 years.HOWEVER IF I COULD GO   to the past I would change the present AND THAT COULD HAVE NEGATIVE EFFECTS ON HUMANKIND  

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Sergi Fullana Pascual
1. WORD ORDER PROBLEM: HOW MY LIFE WOULD BE ( IN AFFIRMATIVE SENTENCES)/HOW WILL BE MY LIFE ?IN QUESTIONS

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I would rather go to the past so ICOULD  solve some of the biggest questions that humanity has.

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I would rather go to the past so ICOULD  solve some of the biggest questions that humanity has.

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Marina
REMEMBER TO USE PAST..YOU COULD HAVE INCLUDED SOME EXAMPLE

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If I could travel in time, I would travel to tha past. I would like to know how were my parends and my grandparends  WERE when they where WERE  young, and it would be also good to be born again and relive?? all the good things from when I was young.

Maria Adrover

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If I had a time machine, I would travel to the future to see my future self.lIKE THIS I WOULD BE to be able to CHECK what I have done well and what I have done wrong.

Maria Alcover

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The city that I liked most to visit was Berlin. I WENT  there ONCE in 2015 and I liked it very much.IT is very beautiful, there are MANY LANDMARKS/PLACES/ MONUMENTS/.. to visit  and the food is really good.

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The city that I liked most to visit was Berlin. I WENT  there ONCE in 2015 and I liked it very much.IT is very beautiful, there are MANY LANDMARKS/PLACES/ MONUMENTS/.. to visit  and the food is really good.

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Miquel Adrover
VERY +ADJECTIVE : VERY BEAUTIFUL
MANY+NOUN: MANY THINGS
TRY NOT TO USE THE WORD THINGS

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Madrid IS THE CITY I LIKE THE MOST. I VISITED SOME YEARS AGO AND THE PLACE THAT I ENJOYED THE MOST WAS THE  SANTIAGO BERNABÉU 

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Madrid IS THE CITY I LIKE THE MOST. I VISITED SOME YEARS AGO AND THE PLACE THAT I ENJOYED THE MOST WAS THE  SANTIAGO BERNABÉU 

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Anas
IT WAS A BIT TOO SIMPLE

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The city I have visited that I liked the most has been New York. I had the opportunity to go there when I was seven years old. I loved the vibes of this city and I also think IT  is a really beautiful city to live in, not only for visiting. 

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The city I have visited that I liked the most has been New York. I had the opportunity to go there when I was seven years old. I loved the vibes of this city and I also think IT  is a really beautiful city to live in, not only for visiting. 

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Mar Càneves
VERY GOOD MAR

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The best country that I have visited is Swiss  SWITZERLAND . I HAD THE CHANCE OF MAKING I made a tour for  AROUND a lot of cities THERE AND I HAVE TO ADMIT I WAS IMPRESSED WITH ALL OF THEM that were beautiful and all incredible.

Joan Nadal Gaya

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The best country I have ever been to is Austria. It's my favorite cause it's really beautiful and I was able to visit a lot of places like, Mozart's house and Sissí's palace. 

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The best country I have ever been to is Austria. It's my favorite cause it's really beautiful and I was able to visit a lot of places like, Mozart's house and Sissí's palace. 

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Jana G.
OK I SHALL GO

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First of all , every city that I have visited has been beautiful,but London stole my heart....(AND??)

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First of all , every city that I have visited has been beautiful,but London stole my heart....(AND??)

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Marina
IT IS A BIT UNFINISHED

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The city I liked the most is Barcelona. ALTHOUGH  I have visited a lot of times  I NEVER GET TIRED OF IT .and I think that is  beautiful and THAT PEOPLE ARE VERY KIND 

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The city I liked the most is Barcelona. ALTHOUGH  I have visited a lot of times  I NEVER GET TIRED OF IT .and I think that is  beautiful and THAT PEOPLE ARE VERY KIND 

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Xavi Frau

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The city I  liked the most is Madrid. I think Madrid is very SPECTACULAR DUE TO ITS skyscraperS I ALSO ENJOY MADRID BECAUSE  when I go to Madrid I ALWAYS vist Santiago BernaBeu which is a beatiful stadium

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The city I  liked the most is Madrid. I think Madrid is very SPECTACULAR DUE TO ITS skyscraperS I ALSO ENJOY MADRID BECAUSE  when I go to Madrid I ALWAYS vist Santiago BernaBeu which is a beatiful stadium

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Toni martorell
WHO ARE YOU??
BEAUTIFUL ( NO 2LL)

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The city I liked most to visit was New Yorck.  YORK.It was the firts  FIRST Time I travelled outside Europe and it was amazing.
OK A BIT SIMPLE

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The city I liked the most was Barcelona.I HAVE BEEN THERE ONCE BUT I WILL NEVER FORGET IT  because when I went there I could see a football match from the best club in the World which is FCBarcelona VS Real Madrid and this memory will be in my mind for the rest of my life. 

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The city I liked the most was Barcelona.I HAVE BEEN THERE ONCE BUT I WILL NEVER FORGET IT  because when I went there I could see a football match from the best club in the World which is FCBarcelona VS Real Madrid and this memory will be in my mind for the rest of my life. 

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Albert

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I would like return to the past, because I COULD  go to the happy moments and live THEM AGAIN 

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I would like return to the past, because I COULD  go to the happy moments and live THEM AGAIN 

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Marc Alomar Fuster
PAST TENSES,
UNA ALTRE VEGADA( AGAIN,)

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The city I have visited that I liked the most has been Dresde. IT  Is a small city in Germany. I went in August in 2018 and there WAS the festival of Dresde. IT was so beatiful.

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The city I have visited that I liked the most has been Dresde. IT  Is a small city in Germany. I went in August in 2018 and there WAS the festival of Dresde. IT was so beatiful.

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Marc Alomar Fuster
BEAUTIFUL ) NO BEAUTIFULL

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My favorite trip was to Germany, a few years ago. Since it was a trip with my whole family and we went to a lot of different cities in the country, IT HAS BECOME A WONDERFUL MEMORY .

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My favorite trip was to Germany, a few years ago. Since it was a trip with my whole family and we went to a lot of different cities in the country, IT HAS BECOME A WONDERFUL MEMORY .

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Brunna Da Silva
IF YOU USE "SINCE " IN THIS WAY, YOU SHOULD COMPLETE THE SENTENCE SOMEHOW

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I would definitely travel back to the past, as I would not like to see the future, because I am afraid of it. HOWEVER,I would love to see the past with my own eyes and LIKE THIS I THINK I WOULD BE ABLE TO  understand many things.

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I would definitely travel back to the past, as I would not like to see the future, because I am afraid of it. HOWEVER,I would love to see the past with my own eyes and LIKE THIS I THINK I WOULD BE ABLE TO  understand many things.

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Brunna Da Silva
DON'T CONNECT SENTENCES WITH COMMAS. USE CONNECTORS AND FULL STOPS.

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My favourite toy when I was a kid, was the Play 4.I USED TO PLAY WITH IT every day with my friends and I REMEMBER ISPENDING LOTS OF TIME ON IT.  I was very happy playing FIFA with my friends every day, I miss THOSE  moments.

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My favourite toy when I was a kid, was the Play 4.I USED TO PLAY WITH IT every day with my friends and I REMEMBER ISPENDING LOTS OF TIME ON IT.  I was very happy playing FIFA with my friends every day, I miss THOSE  moments.

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Miquel Adrover
USE PUNCTUATION

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When I was a kid my favourite  TOY was a ball and nowadays it’s STILL  the same.
I COULD SAY THAT I HAVE SA SORT OF have almost a collection OF THEM  and I have played with all  ECAH AND EVERY ONE  THROUGH ALL THESE YEARS a lot of time.

Joan Nadal Gaya

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When I was child my favourite toy was a red car. MY brother and I had a RACING CAR TRACK and I liked to play with them. Now the car is broken and my mother throw it on the bin.//UNFORTUNATELY THE CAR GOT BROKEN AND MY MOTHER THOW IT IN TO THE BIN EVENTUALLY

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When I was child my favourite toy was a red car. MY brother and I had a RACING CAR TRACK and I liked to play with them. Now the car is broken and my mother throw it on the bin.//UNFORTUNATELY THE CAR GOT BROKEN AND MY MOTHER THOW IT IN TO THE BIN EVENTUALLY

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Maria Adrover
( I WUOLD CHANGE YOUR LAST SENTENCE "NOW THE CAR..." FOR THE EXAMPLE I HAVE INCLUDED

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My favourite toy was a big fake horse that my grandmother bought me when I was 3 .Every time that I went there  TO MY PARENTS HOUSE I played with it. For me  IT was very special because it was very big and this, impressed me. AND IT WAS QUITE IMPRESSIVE I HAVE TO SAY

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When I was a child  I ENJOYED PLAYING VIDEOGAMES, ESPECIALLY THE ONES ON FOOTBALL. I USED TO PLAY  with my old brother.

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When I was a child  I ENJOYED PLAYING VIDEOGAMES, ESPECIALLY THE ONES ON FOOTBALL. I USED TO PLAY  with my old brother.

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Xavi Frau
DON'T CONNECT 2 SENTENCES WITH A COMMA. USE A FULL STOP  AND A CONNECTOR IF YOU CAN.
A BIT TOO SIMPLE

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When I was a kid, my favorite toy was a green FOOTBALL  goal and a football ball.I USED TO PLAY TO FOOTBALL WITH MY FATHER IN OUR FLAT .AND I REMEMBER THAT EVEN ONE DAY WE BROKE A WINDOW GLASS.s. It was so nice :)??(I DON'T THINK BREAKING A GLASS WAS NICE)

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When I was a kid, my favorite toy was a green FOOTBALL  goal and a football ball.I USED TO PLAY TO FOOTBALL WITH MY FATHER IN OUR FLAT .AND I REMEMBER THAT EVEN ONE DAY WE BROKE A WINDOW GLASS.s. It was so nice :)??(I DON'T THINK BREAKING A GLASS WAS NICE)

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Marc Alomar Fuster
REVIEW PAST SIMPLE VERB TO BE( I WAS / YOU WERE)

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My favourite toy when I was a kid were playmobils. I loved playing with them everyday AND I COULD SPEND HOURS INVENTING ADVENTURES. IT WASN'T SO NICE FOR MY MOTHER BECAUSE SHE  always had to buy new ones because I loved having lots of different characters. 

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My favourite toy when I was a kid were playmobils. I loved playing with them everyday AND I COULD SPEND HOURS INVENTING ADVENTURES. IT WASN'T SO NICE FOR MY MOTHER BECAUSE SHE  always had to buy new ones because I loved having lots of different characters. 

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Mar Càneves
I JUST TRIED TO CONNECT A BIT MORE THE SENTENCES WITH THE IDEA THAT IT WAS NICE FOR YOU BUT NOT SO MUCH FOR YOUR MOTHER

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My favourite toy when I was a kid it was a big teddy bear that I got at the fair,  .I remember that I used to sleep with it every night.
romaisa
CONNECT SENTENCES WITH FULL STOP( PUNTS) AND NO WITH COMMAS

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When I was kid my favorite toy was a ps4 and my favorite game WAS  Rocket league.

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When I was kid my favorite toy was a ps4 and my favorite game WAS  Rocket league.

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Anas
TOO SHORT Anas. pay attention to tenses..you wrote IS instead of WAS

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My favourite toy when I was a kid was a beatifull car that my mother bought for me. The car was SO BIG THAT I  b I was able to  EVEN  drive IT. Nowadays I STILL have it in my bedroom  because I'm still in love whith that car

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My favourite toy when I was a kid was a beatifull car that my mother bought for me. The car was SO BIG THAT I  b I was able to  EVEN  drive IT. Nowadays I STILL have it in my bedroom  because I'm still in love whith that car

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Toni Martorell

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When I was a child I used to play with my pinipons a lot.I would build their house and imagine stories with them

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When I was a child I used to play with my pinipons a lot.I would build their house and imagine stories with them

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Marina Arcas Bosch

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My favourite toy used to be A GIANT SOFT DOG. MY UNCLE GAVEIT TO ME WHEN I WAS 3 ANDI USED TO LOVE CUDDLING. . 

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My favourite toy used to be A GIANT SOFT DOG. MY UNCLE GAVEIT TO ME WHEN I WAS 3 ANDI USED TO LOVE CUDDLING. . 

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Jana Galmés Capó
YOU CUDDLE SOMETHING(NO WITH)
I WOULD CHANGE THE ORDER THE SENTENCES

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My favorite toy was a teddy bear, WHOSE NAME WAS WALTER. IT WAS A DOPHIN AND USED TO LOVE SLEEPING  with IT and I spent lots of good moments with IT

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My favorite toy was a teddy bear, WHOSE NAME WAS WALTER. IT WAS A DOPHIN AND USED TO LOVE SLEEPING  with IT and I spent lots of good moments with IT

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Cecília Miquel Mascaró
GOOD YOU USED "WHOSE" SENTENCE, BUT I CHANGED THE SENTENCES POSITIONS.
YOUR TEDDY IS "IT"

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My favourite toy when I was a kid was a car that my father bought me. IT was very big and COULD BE CHARGED . I remember GOING with my father and my dog for a walk.NOWADAYS, I still have the car.

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My favourite toy when I was a kid was a car that my father bought me. IT was very big and COULD BE CHARGED . I remember GOING with my father and my dog for a walk.NOWADAYS, I still have the car.

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Sergi Fullana Pascual
DON'T CONNECT SENTENCES WITH COMMAS, USE " FULL STOPS"
REMEMBER GOING (NOT TO  GO ) BECAUSE YOU TALK ABOUT MEMORIES
"NOWADAYS"IS A SINGLE WORD,IT IS NOT 3 WORDS

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My favorite toy when I was a kid  was a doll. It was very big and my older brothers were afraid of him. IT (YOU SHOULD EXPLAIN WHY YOUR BROTHERS WERE AFRAID OF IT)

Maria Alcover
YOUR TOY IS AN OBJECTSO YOU HAVE TO USE "IT" PRONOUN

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The city that I have visited that I liked the most is Manacor, because ALTHOUGH  I have BEEN to  MANY DIFFERENT CITIES, THERE IS NO CITY THAT I LIKE THE MOST THAN MY CITY.a lot of citys but the others didn't like me.( THIS MEANS CITIES HATE YOU??)

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The city that I have visited that I liked the most is Manacor, because ALTHOUGH  I have BEEN to  MANY DIFFERENT CITIES, THERE IS NO CITY THAT I LIKE THE MOST THAN MY CITY.a lot of citys but the others didn't like me.( THIS MEANS CITIES HATE YOU??)

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Sergi Fullana Pascual

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My obligation is to make my bed everyday. HOWEVER, I HAVE TO DO MORE CHORES FROM TIME TO TIME.Sometimes my pareNts make me wash the dishes and also mop the floor.  Finally, sometimes I have to dust the house,WHICH  is the most boring HOUSE CHORE TO DO 

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My obligation is to make my bed everyday. HOWEVER, I HAVE TO DO MORE CHORES FROM TIME TO TIME.Sometimes my pareNts make me wash the dishes and also mop the floor.  Finally, sometimes I have to dust the house,WHICH  is the most boring HOUSE CHORE TO DO 

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Mar Càneves.

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I have to LOAD  THE dishwasher every day after every dinner.  (...)

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I have to LOAD  THE dishwasher every day after every dinner.  (...)

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Xavi Frau
A BIT TOO SHORT

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I haVe TO DO SOME HOUSE CHORES.,FIRST OF A I HAVE  to take care of my Guinea pig,clean ITS cage and feed her. I also haVe to clean my room and sometimes take the dishes out of the dishwasher. 

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I haVe TO DO SOME HOUSE CHORES.,FIRST OF A I HAVE  to take care of my Guinea pig,clean ITS cage and feed her. I also haVe to clean my room and sometimes take the dishes out of the dishwasher. 

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Fátima el Mekkioui

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The only  TWO house choreS that I do is SETTING  the table and MAKING  my bed. 

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The only  TWO house choreS that I do is SETTING  the table and MAKING  my bed. 

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Cecília Miquel Mascaró
a bit short, YOU COULD HAVE EXPLAIN IF YOU FEEL LIKE NOT TO DO MUCH MORE OR IFYOU WOULD LIKE TO DO MORE

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I only have to clean my room at least 3 times a week and sometimes I have to do the laundry as well.
romaisa
GOOD USE OF "AS WELL"

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I don't have any HOUSE chOreS TO DO. MY PARENTS THINK THAT MY ROOM IS MINE AND THAT I CAN DECIDE HOW TIDY I KEEP IT . HOWEVER, WHAT I DO IT IS TO TIDY MY ROOM ONCE A MONTH, SPECIALLY ON SATURDAYS.-  

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I don't have any HOUSE chOreS TO DO. MY PARENTS THINK THAT MY ROOM IS MINE AND THAT I CAN DECIDE HOW TIDY I KEEP IT . HOWEVER, WHAT I DO IT IS TO TIDY MY ROOM ONCE A MONTH, SPECIALLY ON SATURDAYS.-  

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Maria Alcover
I HAVE REORGANIZED WHAT YOU WROTE .IF YOU WRIE "THEY" BEFORE YOU HAVE TO SAY WHO YOU ARE TALKING ABOUT (THAT'S IS WHY I WROTE "MY PARENTS)

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In my house I have to do some  HOUSE hoose chores like tidyING up my cleaned chlothes, setTING the table in every dinner, and also putTING the all the tishes iINTO the dishwasher.
A BIT TOO SIMPLE.USE CONNECTORS. PAY ATTENTION TO SPELLING

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The chores I have to do are OF DIFFERENT SORT. FOR INSTANCE I HAVE TO   going to buy food , set TING and PUTTING ASIDE the table. SOMETIMES I EVEN have to mop the floor OR  tiding  up my bed room.

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The chores I have to do are OF DIFFERENT SORT. FOR INSTANCE I HAVE TO   going to buy food , set TING and PUTTING ASIDE the table. SOMETIMES I EVEN have to mop the floor OR  tiding  up my bed room.

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Sergi Fullana Pascual
"SOMETIMES "IS  ONE WORD
TRY TO USE CONNECTORS

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In my house I have to set up the table. I ALSO DO THE BEDS AND CLEAN THE BEDROOMS.SOMETIMES I EVEN COOK FOR MY MOTHER , SPECIALLY ON ...WHEN SHE IS TOO BUSY.FINALLY I put the dishwasher

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In my house I have to set up the table. I ALSO DO THE BEDS AND CLEAN THE BEDROOMS.SOMETIMES I EVEN COOK FOR MY MOTHER , SPECIALLY ON ...WHEN SHE IS TOO BUSY.FINALLY I put the dishwasher

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Toni Martorell Oroz
BEDROOM  AND NOT "BETHROOM"
I DON'T KNOW IF YOU COOK FOR YOUR MUM EVERYDAY, IF IT IS NOT SO, YOU COULD EXPLAIN WHEN .

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My obligations in my house are THE FOLLOWING. ON THE ONE HAND I  set the table, I ALSO  LOAD, the washing machine. I  makE MY bed AS WELL, I ALSO TIDY UP my bedroom every day and put the drying machine.

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My obligations in my house are THE FOLLOWING. ON THE ONE HAND I  set the table, I ALSO  LOAD, the washing machine. I  makE MY bed AS WELL, I ALSO TIDY UP my bedroom every day and put the drying machine.

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Miquel Adrover

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Every day I have to do my bed, tidy up my bedroom and set the table. IF  I don't do FINISH MY CHORES I can't / AM NOT ALLOWED TO  play videogames.

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Every day I have to do my bed, tidy up my bedroom and set the table. IF  I don't do FINISH MY CHORES I can't / AM NOT ALLOWED TO  play videogames.

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Marc Alomar Fuster
A BIT SIMPLE. YOU SHOULD USE A CONDITIONAL AND NOT A "WHEN " SENTENCE

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I have to make my bed every day at 7:00 before  GOING TO school.

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I have to make my bed every day at 7:00 before  GOING TO school.

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Anas
A BIT MORE PLEASE

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At home, every day I have to set the table to have lunch and diner. I also have to vacume clean the fire place every day, and make my bed.
Maria Adrover
OK

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The house chores that I do are makING  my bed, setTING te table once every 3 days and keep my room tidy.

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The house chores that I do are makING  my bed, setTING te table once every 3 days and keep my room tidy.

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Jana G

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I have to clean my room every week. I set up the table every day before the lunch and the dinner…(???)

Joan Nadal
DON'T CONNECT  2 SENTENCES WITH A  COMA.USE FULL STOPS
IT LOOKS UNFINISHED

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My favorite toy as a child was a pink  elephant teddy called Gary. I named him like that because I loved SpongeBob/ I NAMED HIM AFTER SPONGE BOB. Gary was a very special toy for me because my grandmother gave IT to me on my 3rd birthday.

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My favorite toy as a child was a pink  elephant teddy called Gary. I named him like that because I loved SpongeBob/ I NAMED HIM AFTER SPONGE BOB. Gary was a very special toy for me because my grandmother gave IT to me on my 3rd birthday.

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Brunna Da Silva

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At home, whenever I'm not studying I have to help my parents with whatever they ask for.MOREOVER,   I also have fixed tasks, such as tidying my room, setting the table, taking the dishes out of the dishwasher AND SO ON. HOWEVER, I have an advantage, which is that I have 3 brothers, so the housework is well  distributed.

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At home, whenever I'm not studying I have to help my parents with whatever they ask for.MOREOVER,   I also have fixed tasks, such as tidying my room, setting the table, taking the dishes out of the dishwasher AND SO ON. HOWEVER, I have an advantage, which is that I have 3 brothers, so the housework is well  distributed.

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Brunna Da Silva
REMEMBER TO USE CONNECTORS AND FULL STOPS INSTEAD OF COMMAS TO CONNECT SENTENCES

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My biggest fear are animals such as dogs and pigeons. Since I was a kid/AS FAR AS I CAN REMEMBER  I've been frightened  OF THEM . So if I'm alone and I see one OF THEM I will change FOR SURE to the other side of the street and I WILL TRY TO  avoid ANY EYE CONTACT WITH  them as much as possible.

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My biggest fear are animals such as dogs and pigeons. Since I was a kid/AS FAR AS I CAN REMEMBER  I've been frightened  OF THEM . So if I'm alone and I see one OF THEM I will change FOR SURE to the other side of the street and I WILL TRY TO  avoid ANY EYE CONTACT WITH  them as much as possible.

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Jana G.
MY SUGGESTIONS ARE JUST TO IMPROVE VOCABULARY

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I'm irrationally scared of ALL TYPES OF INSECTS insects,  WhenEVER  I see an insect I  FREEZE?/ AND  I can't just do anything . I'm not able to walk or act normally because I get too scared. 

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I'm irrationally scared of ALL TYPES OF INSECTS insects,  WhenEVER  I see an insect I  FREEZE?/ AND  I can't just do anything . I'm not able to walk or act normally because I get too scared. 

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Mar Càneves.

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I'm very scared of spiders or ANY KIND OF insects . whenEVER  I see one I just try to avoid it. 

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I'm very scared of spiders or ANY KIND OF insects . whenEVER  I see one I just try to avoid it. 

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Romaisa
GOOD VOCABULARY

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Im very scared of insects, SPECIALLY I AM SCARED OF FLYING INSECTS .HOWEVER, iI'm  scared of the ocean because  IT IS deep and  WHENEVER I SWIM I GET ANXIOUS IMAGINING ALL THE creatures THAT ARE SWIMMING UNDER ME 

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Im very scared of insects, SPECIALLY I AM SCARED OF FLYING INSECTS .HOWEVER, iI'm  scared of the ocean because  IT IS deep and  WHENEVER I SWIM I GET ANXIOUS IMAGINING ALL THE creatures THAT ARE SWIMMING UNDER ME 

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Fátima el Mekkioui
SAY" FLYING INSECTS" INSTEAD OF " INSECTS THAT CAN FLY"

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I'm irrationally scared  OF  caterillarS. WhenEVER I see this animal I run AWAY AS FAST AS I CAN

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I'm irrationally scared  OF  caterillarS. WhenEVER I see this animal I run AWAY AS FAST AS I CAN

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Marc Alomar Fuster
YOU ARE SCARED "OF" NO (WITH)

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I am  GET very sacred  SCARED when I go to my HOUSE BASEMENT room because IT  is very very dark .I HAVE BEEN ALL MY LIFE SCARED OF IT .since I was 3 made me be scared when I go there
A BIT BASICALLY EXPLAINED

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One of my most irrational fears IS NOT TO KNOW what there is under my feet when I’m swimming in the sea.I AM SPECIALLY SCARED OF  algaes or jellyfish.

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One of my most irrational fears IS NOT TO KNOW what there is under my feet when I’m swimming in the sea.I AM SPECIALLY SCARED OF  algaes or jellyfish.

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Maria Adrover

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I like my room but I don’t love it. I’m trying to change some tings like the pink curtains I have  HAD since I was eight years old. I would like to fix a lamp and change the mirror TOO.

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I like my room but I don’t love it. I’m trying to change some tings like the pink curtains I have  HAD since I was eight years old. I would like to fix a lamp and change the mirror TOO.

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Maria Adrover Riera
GOOD JOB

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Yes I do, I love my room because it is the place where I sleep, I do my homework,AND I rest .MOREOVER  I also have a big bed and a mirror THAT ARE VERY COOL. So that is why I like it. HOWEVER,  if I could change something of my room I would make it SLIGHTLY  bigger. 

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Yes I do, I love my room because it is the place where I sleep, I do my homework,AND I rest .MOREOVER  I also have a big bed and a mirror THAT ARE VERY COOL. So that is why I like it. HOWEVER,  if I could change something of my room I would make it SLIGHTLY  bigger. 

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Mar Càneves.
I JUST INCLUDE SOME VOCABULARY SUGGESTIONS. GOOD JOB

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I really like my room. I recently got a new mirror, and new decoration AND I LOVE IT EVEN MORE. I actually would add a couple posters. And something I love about my room is that I have enough ROOM to add an EXTRA bed for when my friends COME FOR A  sleepover.  

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I really like my room. I recently got a new mirror, and new decoration AND I LOVE IT EVEN MORE. I actually would add a couple posters. And something I love about my room is that I have enough ROOM to add an EXTRA bed for when my friends COME FOR A  sleepover.  

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romaisa
GOOD CONTENT AND WELL WRITTEN
"ROOM" MEANS ALSO " ESPAI"

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I like my room because  IT is very big and have all the necesary things I need. IF  i could change somethingI WOULD change the window because IT is in a very UNSUITABLE  position and the people of the street can see me when  IT IS open.

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I like my room because  IT is very big and have all the necesary things I need. IF  i could change somethingI WOULD change the window because IT is in a very UNSUITABLE  position and the people of the street can see me when  IT IS open.

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Sergi Fullana
"I" GOES ALWAYS IN CAPITAL LETTERS
CONNECT SENTENCES WITH FULL STOPS AND NOT WITH COMMAS
REVISE CONDITIONAL TYPE 2
GOOD CONTENT

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In general I love my bedroom but I want to put more posters and some decoration . When I haVE PUT that my bedroom will be perfect

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In general I love my bedroom but I want to put more posters and some decoration . When I haVE PUT that my bedroom will be perfect

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Toni Martorell
PAST OF PUT-PUT-PUT ( PUTED DOESN'T EXIST)
A BIT SIMPLE

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I like my room because  IT is big and there is a lot of ROOM. But if I could change something it would be the wardrobe, because I don, t like ITS color. 

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I like my room because  IT is big and there is a lot of ROOM. But if I could change something it would be the wardrobe, because I don, t like ITS color. 

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Cecília Miquel Mascaró
SENTENCES NEED SUBJECT ( I LIKE MY ROOM BECAUSE it ...)
THE WORD "ROOM " MEANS " ESPAI"

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I think that my room is okay because the bed is comfortable and  BEDS ARE is the  MOST IMPORTANT l thing that  IN ANY ROOM has to be perfect in a bed room. If I had to change something I would put a new TV  SET with the play.
YOUR SENTENCE WAS GRAMMATICALLY OK , BUT IT DIDN'T SOUND TOO ENGLISH

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I like my room very much . ESPECIALLY SINCE I REDECORATED LAST YEAR. SO , I would not change anything .

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I like my room very much . ESPECIALLY SINCE I REDECORATED LAST YEAR. SO , I would not change anything .

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Maria Alcover
THERE WAS APROBLEM WITH THE ORDER OF THE SENTENCES .IT SOUNDS MORE LOGICAL LIKE THIS

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I loved to play with my pinipons.I loved to collect them!

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I loved to play with my pinipons.I loved to collect them!

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Marina

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I'm irrationaly scared of spiders.I hate all spiders and whenEVER I see ONE  I jump and run AWAY

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I'm irrationaly scared of spiders.I hate all spiders and whenEVER I see ONE  I jump and run AWAY

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Toni Martorell
CONNECT SENTENCES WITH FULL STOPS AND NOT WITH COMMAS

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I like a lot of things of my room but if I COULDI would put a tv SET  to see  MY FAVOURITE series, movies… but apart of  FROM that it have  HAS A  good size, AND THE he bed its  IS okey and I don’t have any other problem.
Joan Nadal
BECAREFUL WITH HAVE /HAS

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My bedroom is very good.I like it A LOT, but  WOULD  like to have a PC in my bedroom, SO I could play all the time with the PC .BUT I AM VERY HAPPY WITH EVERYTHING ELSE. 

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My bedroom is very good.I like it A LOT, but  WOULD  like to have a PC in my bedroom, SO I could play all the time with the PC .BUT I AM VERY HAPPY WITH EVERYTHING ELSE. 

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Miquel Adrover
TOO MUCH ( MASSA..IF YOU LIKE YOUR ROOM TOO MUCH MEANS THAT YOU ARE A BIT OBSESSED WITH IT=

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I like my room, but if I could change it I would put some decoration in it, for example plants, crystals?? AND SO ON

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I like my room, but if I could change it I would put some decoration in it, for example plants, crystals?? AND SO ON

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Brunna da silva
DON'T PUT ETC..WRITE ..AND SO ON...

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In general I like my room because there I have MY  computer and I can play  AND Relax. HOWEVER , WHAT I DON'T LIKE IS sharING  MY  room with my brother but in general I HOPE SOON HE WILL GET HIS OWN ROOM.

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In general I like my room because there I have MY  computer and I can play  AND Relax. HOWEVER , WHAT I DON'T LIKE IS sharING  MY  room with my brother but in general I HOPE SOON HE WILL GET HIS OWN ROOM.

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Marc Alomar Fuster.

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I like  my room  A LOT but I think a mirror is missing, because when I’m  GETTING dressED up I would like to BE ABLET TO  look at my outfit,.HOWEVER I ALWAYS HAVE TO to go to the bathroom to see myself.

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I like  my room  A LOT but I think a mirror is missing, because when I’m  GETTING dressED up I would like to BE ABLET TO  look at my outfit,.HOWEVER I ALWAYS HAVE TO to go to the bathroom to see myself.

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Xavi Frau
GOOD VOCABULARY