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name : clash of castle
for me it a nice drawing and have a good idea to create this game. But for my first impression about this game, I don't really understand how to play this game.

name : s.o.s
this game is quit interesting with a good synopsis. maybe can improve the background and character design.

name : kenko shoot
nice colour. the intruction easy to understand. but maybe you can improve the character design to look more clearly

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Name : Science Journey
i think this game so fun, because simple background and easy to understand.
Rate : 5/10

Name : S.O.S
i think this game so simple, because simple background and easy to understand. Please improve your skill skecthes and please research colour scheme.. Btw i like your game so nice.
Rate : 8/10

Name : Spell the Word
I think this game so simple, because simple background and easy to understand. I like your game and idea.. But, i not your understand your character design not overall. please more research about character and concepts design. Colour scheme important.
Rate : 4/10

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name : mushmatics
i think this game can give more encourage to the kids to learn more about maths and love it. this game also make me interest to love maths too. the background is also nice and peaceful. 9/10

name: raining H2O
the character is cute. this game teach us how to save the water and appreciate it. my suggestion is create more plants in the bucket at different level. 8/10

name: clash of castle
this game is very adventure. i like the style of this game. but i don't understand the instruction of that game. make i simple and easy to read. 6/10

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Name: Cookie Mix
Comment: I like the concept of your game and the theme is quite cute. Kids would love to play it as it seems fun and simple enough to understand. Maybe you could add more details for the background.
Suggestion: Review your grammar for your game play.
Rate: 7/10

Name: Isahabit: Land Beneath The Wind
Comment: The game seems interesting and fun to play with. The game characters look like they're blended in with the background and the HP is a bit big.
Suggestion: You should try to make the characters look more appealing than the background.
Rate: 8/10

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Light Quest

Based on the concept art, I like the game environment and it seems like a mystery to be solved or search for. In terms of the game play, I could imagine of how the game will be but best to show the UI design of game play for us to understand more.

I suggest that the objectives of the game should be clearer as to what is the specific items or goals that need to be achieved along the journey. Is it going to be in levels or collecting proof until the end of the discovery?
Rate: (7 / 10)

Mushmatics

The pros in this game is, it is very educational and needs the player to think while playing it. I like the background of the game as it has that forest  and calm feel.

My suggestion is, if the target player of the game will be children, try to make the environment with much brighter color to attract them to play. Is it going to have like time limitation or increase in speed of the mushroom? Try to make a specific goal for the player to achieve either at the end of the game or in each level (if there are levels) to make the game much more interesting.
Rate: (6 / 10)

Science Journey

Same as Mushmatics, very educational and needs thinking. I like the idea of giving hints through pictures as they can help players to solve the word puzzle- in a much easier way.

Based on the UI design uploaded, my suggestion would be in terms of the lettering. Try to make it much interesting instead of using simple fonts. The background of where hints and word puzzles are should be much brighter to make it more exciting. Since the game involve lettering, dull or dark color behind will make the player feels bored. Try using colors complement to the words.
Rate: (6 / 10)

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Review 1: Kenko Shoot
- The color is quite eye-catching and the instruction is clear.
- You guys can improve the surrounding. try to make it more like in human body.
- Rate : 8/10

Review 2: Spell The Word

- I like the idea of the game. It really help kids in terms of vocabulary and spelling skill.
- think it's difficult for kids to guess the animal's name. Why don't put the animal picture so that the kids can guess the words.
- Rate: 6/10

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Review 1: Clash of Castle

Comment: Looks like a very challenging idea, with so many places to design, will anticipate the design as a player.

Critics: Not clear about the value this game can teach about whether it is educational value or cultural value.

Suggestion: Be clear about the gameplay, show clear picture on how the player is going to make his way through the game, correct grammar error to really convey your message to audience, you can ask miss to check the grammar for you.

Out of 10%, I will give 5% based on my impression towards what you have uploaded, not towards the idea of the game, because I can’t really understand how to play this game, on what platform and how it actually looks like.

Review 2: Kenko Shoot

Comment: A creative way of killing the bacteria, looks fun, loves the design of the bacteria.

Critics:  Cannot understand about the shooting part, what is going to come out from the player to shoot the bacteria???

Suggestion: Make something that can make the player gain chances such as good bacteria like enzyme or white blood cell, make the player cuter and more appealing to audience, for character like broccoli you can refer to design of vileplume in pokemon, and think about how to make your players realize that the character they are using is actually food that is good to them in real life.

Out of 10%, I will give 6% because this game is easy to play and is thrilling as the bacteria is moving throughout the game.

Review 3: Raining H2O

Comment: A creative way to teach about saving water, looking forward to see the real game in the market.

Critics: Size of the barrel is too big and almost occupy the whole screen, make it almost impossible to miss any water droplets.

Suggestion: Change the design and size of the barrel as plant is not planted in the barrel, and maybe can increase the level of difficulty increased with the speed of water droplets falling.

Out of 10%, I will give 7% because this game teaches about saving water in such a creative and easy way, is an attractive game on first impression.

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1.       mushmatics

The game is interesting and can help kids improve their mathematics skills. I think this game can be improve in term of instruction if the player get the wrong answer. Out of 10%, I give 8% for the concept and effort.

2. raining H2O
the game is easy to understand and play. The design is nice, but the water bucket too big, if that is the real size that the player will be playing, then they can catch all the water shape. Out of 10%, I give 7% for the simple instructions and storyline.

3.       Clash of castle

The game synopsis is interesting but it is quite hard to understand on how to play the game and can be improve by giving simpler instruction. Out of 10%, I give 6%.:)

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Review 1

for this group i think character pingu, name is Eric it's look like very simple when your group just only focus for target group audiens is childs. Visual environment, your group can improve, how to design forest scenery, make it interesting and creative become design final output and for synopsis, all idea story something part not clear but interesting.
i give 7%,out of 10

Review 2
S.0.S
this game look like very nice background and have a simple environment, but character design can be improve because very simple and not have creativity when your group try develops idea to make it simply to character,so get more interest and more research about the suitable character design and environment. lastly, for instruction and synopsis, i like because so good for player when their try to understand
educational  through learning science on environment.
i give 9%

Review 3.
spell the word
this game for design environment look like interesting and creative learning for educational for child. for Instruction and synopsis, prop design, and character very clear and can be improve in terms of some part but not overall and very nice game play for educational.
i give 8%.

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Review 1: Kenko shoot
This game catch my eyes. I like the style especially on the player and enemy they just cut-cut the white background and it seem interest to me but the cutting look messy, it better cut refer to the character shape. The game mechanic not to bad just need some improvement on the visual look.

improvement: Make the background look more in stomach but not to realistic, make the player feel like happen in stomach. The bacteria can improve little bit like can combined if they collide with other become mutant and have some special ability. To me better add some equipment that can upgrade the players ability it seem more interesting.
I give 7 out of 10

Review 2: Spell the word

This game is simple and good for kids. They can improve their knowledge about animal name. It seem the time given seem very long and is it the cactus can move?

improvement: Make the time less depend on the animal name. Put some hint like animal picture but it can seem just 2/3 second and disappear. You can put the hint at any default brick so it can make the game more challenge. The cactus I think it more interesting if there can move and players can kill them by jumping towards them like Mario game.
I give 6 out of 10

Review 3: S.O.S

It is a good game to tell people about global warming especially for children. To me this is a new way to tell people what cause and will happen if the global warming not controlled. Sometimes we as adult who know about this global warming still didn’t care.

improvement: The game mechanic is interesting, just improve on visual look. To me its better start from small village/town and next is city. The bad guy could appear one/ two at first and then it getting more and fast when the time run outs.
I give 7 out of 10

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Clash Of Castle

-          Pros : Nice. I can see a lot of effort in this game design.

-          Cons : Track mission  is not clear. I don’t know the meaning of the track mission design whether it is just a track or something else going on the track.

Schrodinger’s Revision

-          Pros : Good. I like the effect that shows in the image.

-          Cons : I didn’t clear about the instruction and what is the goal.

Cookie Mix

-          Pros : Good job. The drawings are simple and easy to understand.

-          Cons : The game image review is not clear. There are lacks of functional button that can lead the player to do something to play the game.

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Review 1: Raining H20

Comment: Neat idea, great way to create awareness of planting and going green as player see their plant grew larger and larger! Look like it's a great time waster too!(in a good way)

Critics: The 3 health only seem a bit unforgiving, maybe make it 5? Or make a time attack mode so player only need to worry about time.

The barrel seem too big, maybe use a plant pot instead?

Suggestion: Make it tilt control (or add option to play with tilt control) so it's more immersive and fun.

Out of 10%, I will give 7% because this game want you to go green....and I probably end up having dead battery just playing this game for hours.

Review 2: Number 73

Comment: OMG It's Jump-and-shoot-Man! Does he have slide?....no? Still going to play it! Nice to play a game that teach about biology!

Critics: Unless the enemy shoot a lot of bullet or attack often, the block is kind of pointless..since player can just shoot from a far anyway.

Suggestion: Make a database or data collection, so player can learn more about the character and virus.

Out of 10%, I will give 9% because I'm a fan of 2D action-platform, and I'm bias...

Review 3: Mushmatics

Comment: Not a fan of math. But this game is great for teaching kids about mathematics and train their quick thinking skill without using calculator!

Critics: The background seem distracting as it's have too much colour and stuff, just tone down the detail.

Suggestion: add difficulty option, so other age (maybe primary school) can play as well..or just as a added challenge for pro math kids.

Out of 10%, I will give 7% because It's a great game and also a tool for teaching basic mathematics for kids!

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Review 1 : Isahabit: Land Beneath The Wind
I like the concept style of this game because it look like fantasy in the jungle and also using some type of element to use as weapon

Pros : Player can explore more in this game in adventure life style

Cons : try to put some shadow and light because the colour is plain but i still like concept it.

Review 2 : Schrödinger’s Revision
I like how the game concept look like which is the player can click and interact something so that it can give some clue and also have interesting storyline also

Pros: I love how the concept look like it just like the puzzle game and player can move around and explore all different area

Cons: Try to improve again the concept art and colour so that the visual will look really nice and more attractive enough to people want to play it anyway keep it up!

Review 3: Light Quest
This game look very interesting in first view because the concept is like the adventure in ancient place where player can explore more to find the treasure and many more!

Pros: Player can learn more about the ancient stuff and also the concept of platform can bring back memory from old time game like mario but this concept is really different than before

Cons: The Character of the player is not to attractive enough, try make it more stylish so that people can recognize the character identity.

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Review1:mushmatics
Comment:This title really catch my attention. it is a simple game that really easy to understand. it is a good game to be play.
Out of 10%, I will give 7% because this game easy to understand and need to improve in visual.

Review2: kenko shoot
Comment: This game visual really catch my eyes. it is really interesting game.
Out of 10%, I will give 7% because it is really nice and simple game.

Review 3: spell the word.
Comment: i really love word puzzle game. so, i like the idea of this game. it is really simple and easy to understand.
Out of 10%, I will give 8% because it is very interesting game.

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Mushmatics
Mathematics is my favorite subject to learn in highschool and after leaving it for 6 years, i would love to test my skill again in this game

Pros
it can help kids to think faster

Cons
there's not enough story to get me interested in playing more than once or twice

6/10

Xiao
An adventure with a classic plot ala Legend Of Zelda, whats not to love, if done right, it would be a good adventure to be experience by kids of all ages

Pros
From the picture i can see that its a portable game which means players can play it anywhere they want

Cons
For me, a phone is not the best platform to play an adventure game, maybe you can change it to a mobile console such as Nintendo 3ds, PS Vita or even a Gameboy. From the picture, it's not clear weather its a 3d rpg adventure or a 2d sidescroller adventure game.

6.5/10
Suggestion
For me, a phone is not the best platform to play an adventure game, maybe you can change it to a mobile console such as Nintendo 3ds, PS Vita or even a Gameboy

Kenko Shoot
foods that can shoot and kill bacterias by shooting them. Cool. Makes me remember some weird Japanese comercial and one of those early 2000s Japanese shoot'em up game.

Pros
I believe kids would be attracted by the characters.

Cons
players wouldn't know what exactly does the food provide to the body that would help the body to fight off the bacterias.
7/10

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Review 1: Number 73
Comment:
I firstly get attracted by the title and the character design. This somehow reminds me of a cartoon show called Ozzy & Drix. The idea is unique too.

PROS
This game could improve player's eye-and-hand coordination with action element in it.

CONS
Unsure how tough or merciless the A.I of the viruses could be.

IMPROVEMENTS
Set the difficulty levels for player to choose.

Out of 10%, I will give 8% because of the environment design plus the uniqueness in character designs.

Review 2: Mushmatics
Comment:
Combining the element of nature (mushroom to be precise) with math is a pretty innovative idea for me. I think it would

PROS
This could challenge the player's I.Q in order to seek correct answer whilst being observant of the falling mushrooms.

CONS
The game description is lacking. How to avoid losing the game is a must.

IMPROVEMENTS
Set a time limiter option for the player so they can challenge themselves more in this game.

Out of 10%, I will give 7% because the player will have to predict the incoming mushrooms from the sky and he/she has to be diligent and quick-witted about fulfilling this game's objective.

Review 3: Slide the Fruit
Comment:
WHAT I THINK
Pretty educational game about love-hate of fruits. While the character may despise the fruits but he still believe that they will benefit him somehow, as he is in dream.

PROS
The game mechanic is solid and easy to understand.

CONS
Does the letter in the puzzle can be move horizontally or vertically? How do player arrange the letters?

IMPROVEMENTS
Set difficulty and elaborate the game instruction.

Out of 10%, I will give 7% because the innovative concept of using the fruits (virtually) as the weapon to defeat the evilness in dream world. This game could teach the player to eat more fruit, possibly.

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YAP PEI YEE 54246                                                          These are my peers' works that I have reviewed. Review1: Mushmatics                                                  Comment: I think the game is interesting for children,and the speed of mushroom fall from sky can help children culculate mathematic more accurate and improve the speed of doing mathematic. I think that the design can be improve and the colour sceme can be more colourful  .The colourful mushroom can attract attention from children.                                                                                 Out of 10%, I will give 8% because i think that this game can help children do their mathematic revision. Review2:Raining H2O                                             Comment: This game can gave awareness for children that water is important for earth. From the game children know how to save the water and help plant growth. If can, from the game mechanism you can add some process Photosynthesis. Children can know how plant produce food and the basic needs for plant growing up.                                                                           Out of 10%, I will give 5% because the game can be more interesting if add some different size of water drop.The biggest water drop , the water that player will get more.                                                                                    Review 3: Kenko shoot                                           Comment: From the game children can know the bacteria is not good for their body and give awareness for children always keep clean. I think can add some level of bacteria, maybe some bacteria need to shoot 2 time to kill it.                                                                         Out of 10%, I will give 8% because the design is cute

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YAP PEI YEE 54246                                                          These are my peers' works that I have reviewed. Review1: Mushmatics                                                  Comment: I think the game is interesting for children,and the speed of mushroom fall from sky can help children culculate mathematic more accurate and improve the speed of doing mathematic. I think that the design can be improve and the colour sceme can be more colourful  .The colourful mushroom can attract attention from children.                                                                                 Out of 10%, I will give 8% because i think that this game can help children do their mathematic revision. Review2:Raining H2O                                             Comment: This game can gave awareness for children that water is important for earth. From the game children know how to save the water and help plant growth. If can, from the game mechanism you can add some process Photosynthesis. Children can know how plant produce food and the basic needs for plant growing up.                                                                           Out of 10%, I will give 5% because the game can be more interesting if add some different size of water drop.The biggest water drop , the water that player will get more.                                                                                    Review 3: Kenko shoot                                           Comment: From the game children can know the bacteria is not good for their body and give awareness for children always keep clean. I think can add some level of bacteria, maybe some bacteria need to shoot 2 time to kill it.                                                                         Out of 10%, I will give 8% because the design is cute

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Review 1: Raining H20
Comment:
Pros: The idea is good to player know human must save water before lack happen in earth. The visual design are different to other game. Normally designer like use more colourful colour because can take attention to people play game. But, you have your own creative. Try improve the game background and plant in different pattern.I think have some player think this game boring and no challenges.
Out of 10%, I will give 7%.

Review 2: Kenko Shoot
Comment: I like this game because its is shooting game play at mobile game. The idea is nice have take care our stomach. Good challenge need should faster done it before time finish. I think you should design the big boss give it become more challenge.
Out of 10%, I Will give 7%.

Review 3: Mushmatics
Comment: I can see it have education people about mathematics. Good to people who dislike subject mathematics. But the design background give me feel pain because the color scheme problem and I cant see the tittle name.
Out of 10%, I will give 6%

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Review1: ZAO
Comment: This is a very interesting game for me, because i like open world game. It will be fun to explore unknown map with some quest.
For the weakness, i want to know is it have limit for the object that player can create? If no, i think it the player will clear the quest very fast buy spamming create a powerful object. After that, may be you can create a main quest for player for example to defeat XXX boss. So we can know how to win or finish this game.
Out of 10%, I will give 7% because the concept about explore the unknown map are creating freshness to the player.

Review2: Mushmatic
Comment: I think this is a interesting game because player can learn or train their self to be more better in mathematics. The equation from top are really a good sample of education game for kids. For the weakness, there is no challenge if the speed of mushroom fall down is same/ slow. I think you can gradually increase the speed of mushroom/ equation falling down, so that player will want to play again and again to challenge it.

Out of 10%, I will give 8% because the educational concept is very strong and good for kids and event teenagers.

Review 3:  Raining H20
Comment: This is a simple and easy to understand game , i like the concept of this game which is about save water, plants and eco green. Not only that, it also convenient for the player because can use one hand only to play. I think the weakness of this game is it was not so challenge because you did not set the speed of rain falling down, then player will very patient to collect it even the time is running. So, if you set the speed of rain drop will increase in different speed will be more nice.
Out of 10%, I will give 7% because the element of simple, easy to understand, convenient and educational are all at there.

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Review1: Cookies Mix
Comment:
Pros: I think the idea of this game is suitable for the children
Cons: However the font of the instruction is too small so it is hard to read.
Improvement : Add more visual that will attracted children, change the font size.
Out of 10%, I will give 7% because it is a game which can help to educate the children done their task first before do another work.

Review2:  Kenko Shot
Comment:
Pros: It is a creative idea to have some science knowledge in the game and have fun while playing.
Cons: The visual of the game is not so attractive.
Improvement: Change the visual and the colour scheme so that it can attract more children.
Out of 10%, I will give 7% because it is a very good game to train the time management skill and accurate of the players.

Review 3: Number 73
Comment:
Pros: The game name and idea is very catchy!!! I just so overwhelmed with the synopsis of the game.
Cons: The font colour is not grabbing the attention of the player because it is too small and the background too dark.
Improvement: Change the font colour.
Out of 10%, I will give 8% because I like the idea of the game !

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Review1: Spell The Word
Comment:
WHAT I THINK
Great way to show that humans care about the animal wildlife. The gameplay and mechanics itself is simple and easy to understand. This game is also interesting due to the game fundamentals it has, which are platform side scroll and crossword puzzle.

PROS
Alternative way of learning how to correctly spell animal names.

CONS
10 minutes for a game set is too long.

IMPROVEMENTS
Provide a flexible time range for a game set instead of only one (10 minutes is still too long)

Out of 10%, I will give 8% because the concept of crossword puzzle and platform side scroll is something new to me. The idea of befriending wild animals in the desert can be a message to the user to treat animals well and not abusing them. However the game lacks challange
and it drags too long for a game set.

Review2: Mushmatics
Comment:
WHAT I THINK
Interesting concept of combining both mathematics and mushrooms falling from the sky. Very original. Indeed. This definitely is a great way to attract audience who's not fond of mathematics.

PROS
Challanging game by allowing user to think of the correct pair for the answer and equation. Great way to learn mathematics!

CONS
Game description is lacking. No time limit? What happens if user catches the wrong equation?

IMPROVEMENTS
Provide time limit per game set. Make a penalty if the user catches the wrong equation. Make a scoring system for each correct equation the user gets, the harder the equation the higher the score the user will get

Out of 10%, I will give 8% because the concept of using falling mushroom from the sky with no idea where the source comes from combining with mathematics is very weird to me and interesting at the same time and I believe this game has potential if it were to be further develop. This game just need to add more content to the game description.

Review 3: Number 73
Comment:
WHAT I THINK
Great learning game for better understanding what happens if a person has an open wound. This makes the user to be more cautious not to get hurt.At the same time shows how humans defense mechanism works.

PROS
Learn white blood cells defense mechanism along with other bacteria types.

CONS
Game mechanics not fully elaborated. what and how will the game character shoot? If the player were to continue, where would he continue from?

IMPROVEMENTS
Place a checkpoint where player can continue from if his avatar died in the game.

Out of 10%, I will give 8% because the concept of using the human defense system in a game is fantastic. This game can show how will the white blood cells interact with the bacteria in the human bloodstream.

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Review 1: Kenko Shoot
I like the idea of using healthy food as a weapon against bacteria. It really show the player especially kids to eat vegetables and other healthy foods.

I thought the white character is White Blood Cell until I read the synopsis. The game look simple, could improve the visual design to attract player to play it.

Improvement: Maybe add boss stage and make the game harder to play. For example, the bacteria fall down faster and some can shoot back at you. The use of shield might me interesting. The nutritious food could be design as superhero/icon. Add background, the visual could be inside the stomach. Make player feel like its happening inside the body.

I give 7 out 10

Review 2: S.O.S
At first I thought its a chess game or pokemon type battle, until I read the synopsis. Its a good idea for a game about Global Warming. We human sometime didn't really care what we do actually harming the animal in some way.
How many bad guy appear on the screen? I think player cannot lose.

Improvement: The game mechanic is interesting but need to change a bit. The enemy could appear one or two at first, and then the as the time runs out, more bad guy appear.

I give 7 out of 10

Review 3: Spell the Word
Very good concept. Kids who play this game can identify and spell the animals name's correctly after playing this game.

It seem lack of challenge other than avoiding the cactus and have to spell the word within the time given. 10 minute seem a long time.

Improvement: Make the time less, 2 or 1 minute would be very challenging. Give score for each completed word and add highest and lowest score, that way players can compete with each other.

I give 8 out 10.

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Review1: Raining H2O
Comment: I think the design of this game is attractive. The visual design can be improved with more colourful design. This game needs different kind of challenge.
Out of 10%, I will give 7% because overall design quite nice and harmony.

Review2: Xiao
Comment: I think this game play is great and educated to children. The visual design can be colour which can be more attractive to children. Maybe add more level to this game.
Out of 10%, I will give 7% because overall the game idea is solid and good for children.

Review 3: The elemental wars
Comment: I think this game is attractive especially character design to me because it is a card game. This game can be improved.I suggest the game content and design can be more educated to the children.
Out of 10%, I will give 7% because it is a strategy game.

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Review 1: Xiao
Comment: a very moral game , for the instruction right quite small difficult to read and can put some button to show how player play .
Out of 10%, I give 7%

Review 2: Cookies Mix
Comment: quiet interesting game , player can learn how to made cookie maybe can put a character make the game more intersect .
Out of 10, I give  7%

Review 3: Science Journey
Comment: no really clear with the instruction can add more details and also the game play .
Out of 10, I give  6%

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Review 1: Xiao
Comment: It is quite a moral game to play. But during facing the obstacles, how does the player have to fight the boss? As in really fighting or as in solving the questions? Overall, seems to have very Chinese feeling, and a good way to honor parent.
Out of 10%, I give 7%

Review 2: Cookies Mix
Comment: A great way to know how to make cookies. How will the player faces the obstacles? By matching the cookies together only? Try adding some recipe to attract the player.
Out of 10, I give 7

Review 3:  Number 73
Comment: Is a way to let the players to get to know better of their own body. Will the players know about those bacteria that attack the wound? Maybe you can add the knowledge about body.
Out of 10, I give 7%

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Review1: Raining H2O
Comment: I think the overall design is quite nice, looks colourful and attractive. The weakness of your game is that the game play is quite boring for me. If the bucket you showed on the UI design is the actual size in the game play, I think it is extremely hard to lose in your game. Player might get bored after several game play as the moving area is so limited. I suggest that maybe you guys can think of turn the game into landscape view instead of portrait, this will make the game more challenging and more addictive.
Out of 10%, I will give 5%.

Review2: Kenko shoot
Comment: I like the idea of through this game, kids will learn that by eating nutritious food can help them defeat the bacteria in their body. I think the bacteria’s design is ok since it is based on the real bacteria’s look I guess, but as for the nutritious food design…I think is quite creepy and not appealing. For me, it actually looks like boss of those bacteria and not the main character. My suggestion is improve the nutritious food and background design to make it looks more interesting.
Out of 10%, I will give 6%.

Review 3: Science Journey
Comment: To be honest… I can’t get the answer for the EASY LEVEL question you showed on the UI design that you guys had posted lol. The question is too small and hard to be read. Besides that, the colour is quite dull for me but overall, good effort. My suggestion is improve the question and colour scheme for your game.
Out of 10%, I will give 5%.

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Review 1: White Blood Cell : Number 73
Comment: I think the idea is good, because its set on the biological world, blood circulatory system. So, is quite fresh for me.

-The good that I think about this game is that the environment is blood circulatory system, type of enemy is virus or bacteria, player may actually learn those scientific names of those stuff.

-For the weakness of this game, I think is that it may lack of boss stages. Put in big boss enemy in each level, and maybe nt just shot to defeat it. maybe need to solve some puzzle first to open a chance to shoot it , or just straight up running from it(run until a certain point so that the boss couldn't reach you.

- To improve this game, I may suggest that make an entries(record list kinda stuff), so that player can review the enemy and read about it, or make it a collectible entries.
Out of 10%, I will give this 7% because is a solid game-play and quite addicting( if the level design is really hard) may have a few replay value.

Review 2: Spell The Word
Comment: I think the idea of this game is solid, because the influence super mario is way too strong, and it make it look like almost same game.
- The good that I think about this game is that the time attack section,  it can really boost the intensity of the game.

- For the Weakness of this game is that, the statement of the goal of the game. is it just keep on answer the question in 10 minute time to get a high score? or there is something else?  Other then this, if player couldn't answer the question, does it have a skip button for another question or just hang at there wait to for the time to end?

- To improve this game, set a simple goal for this game. Example : player must keep on answer the question in 10 minute time to get a high score. As for the color, the text in the brick better be white color, so it is contrast for visual.

Out of 10%, I will give 6% because the idea is there, but need to really polished out a simple and clean game-play and rule.

Review 3: S.O.S
comment: I think is idea is quite good, because it got eco-friendly aspect in it and is a strategy game that require player to think and made decision in a short duration.

- The good aspect that this game have is the idea, mention a global warming issue, and bring it into game. game like this i think is quite less in the market.

- The weakness of this game is that, i think the player is "Overpower" or "imbalance" , from what i understand from the game .  I don't think player will lose in this game, or is really hard to lose.

- Balance the game-play to improve the game, or make it really hard and see how it turn out, in this kind of game, it required challenging factor.

Out of 10%, I will give this 7% because is have the potential to be a good real time strategy game.

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Review 1:  Cookie Mix
Comment: The concept looks so nice , your game background has very attractive colours, its just that i have difficulties to read your game play and synopsis, please make sure its big enough :)
Out of 10% , i would like to rate 7% for the effort that you put in

Review 2:  Science Journey
Comment: The game looks interesting to play , its just that the part of the actual game we play is smaller compared to the background where Eric stands . Good Try :)
Out of 10% i would like to rate 6% , for the concept and effort

Review 3:  Kenko Shoot
Comment: i like the idea of the game , but the problem here is im getting confused between the bacteria and the nutritious food , it looks same so i guess your target audience most probably which is kids (i guess) will get confused as well, try using different colours . Good try :)
Out of 10% i would like to rate 6/% , for the idea and effort

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Review 1:  Kenko Shoot
Comment: I like the color and concept. The game character too complicated & not clear instruction to understand.
Out of 10%, i will give 6% because of the color of the concept that u choosing and the color easily attract audience.

Review 2:  THE ELEMENTAL WARS
Comment: First of all, I like all the character and concept board should be more clear with image to attract audience & the wordings should be more big.
Out of 10%, i will give 7% for the character and idea.

Review 3: SPELL THE WORD
Comment: I like the concept and idea but the instruction not clear & i cant see any animal there.
Out of 10%, i will give 5% because the color of the concept.

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Comment: I think ... (SWOT analysis/good/ bad/ strength/ weakness/ how to improve).
Out of 10%, I will give 5% because....

Review2: XXX
Comment: XXX
Out of 10%, I will give 3% because....

Review 3: XXX
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Out of 10%, I will give 8% because....