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On the island Black Rock we catch our fist fish but it rain all day so we build a new and bigger cabin for have more space and to protect yourself from the rain. Since our arrival on the Black Rock Island we eaten fruits and vegetable . We had no contact with anyone for two weeks . But  it was good and cool
Nora Said 4°3

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today, on March 25, 2020 it's doable for 2 weeks that we are in contact with no one, locked up on the black rock island to eat fruits and vegetables since our arrival. today was a tiring day because it rained all day, but we still went out to build a bigger shelter. after we went into the sea to catch our first fish finally we went back to our shelter to grill our fish

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It's been a tiring day ! Because we have built a new and bigger cabin. And it has rained all day... I HATE the rain ! But... dad's caught our first fish ! The fish was delicious and it was a tuna ! But, as usual we have eaten vegetables and fruits since our arrival on Black Rock island. I'm sick of it !
Conclusion: LIVELY DAY !

Alicia Pinon, 4.3

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A monday 25th march sun all day and my brother and my visit the new bigger cabine that my big brother are build. I confined in the new cabine 4 weeks. I eat the fruit, the vegetable...I arival with my family on black rock island.I very like a vegetable. I catch with my family a lot of fish.
I very very thring day!!!
Lechalier Ylann 4*3

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My dad and me we have  gone to the black rock
island for builed a big cabin for stayed two weeks .
We have visited the island and begin built the cabin .We have
finished the cabin the after eat  because there have rained and wind .We
have gone on the sea for sweam and the night the weather has good and the sun come back .
it was a good day it was cool and funny . Maxime Farenc 409

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We have spent two days in a tent witha lot of holes therefor we have built an new tent the day after  i have been soaked by rainling because i have looked for some fruits for the desert on my lunch .i have caught my first fish on a desert island . REMI LORTHIOS 403
C'est bien quelques erreurs de saisie probablement. Tu pouvais être plus précis qui est 'we', tu parles beaucoup de 'I' il y avait ta famille tu pouvais parler d'eux aussi.

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This day has been tiring, it has rained but we have worked. This morning, we have built a new and bigger cabin despite the rain. Tim has been very happy he has caught his first fish, it has been a complicated task for him. We have only eaten vegetables and fruits since our arrival on Black Rock island so we haven’t had a lot oh energy this day. Tim and his mum have felt so lonely because we haven’t had no contact with anyone for two weeks.

excellent job

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The 25th of March has been a tiring day !
We have built a new and bigger cabin and also built four beds with palm tree leaves.
We have caught our first fish, for that we had to be so patient, Mum has cooked it and it was delicious !
It has rained all day ! I was cold and Tim was scared because it was stormy. He has hidden himself behind a tree. It wasn't a good idea because of thunderbolths.
We haven't had any contact with anyone for two weeks.
When our ship sank, I was exited but now, I am afraid because It's hard to find fruits and vegetables.
We must leave this island to survive !

Excellent job!

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Today a tiniry day because rair all day we have builta new bigger catoin for  to catch our fint fish with my dad we have had not no cuntact with anyone for tho weeks hecause we were on ar island we have eaten eat vegetables and fruit since our arrival on black rok island for very good day.
antoine pourveux 4°8

C'est bien, attention tu as oublier quelques verbes au present perfect

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Bad day ! it has rained all day
Tim,dad and I have built a new and bigger cabin
Tim and I have catch caught our frish fish
We are so down because we have had no contact with anyone for two weeks
I'm feed up because we have eaten vegetables and fruits since our arrival

quentin boy 4°9
C'est bien Quentin, tu as bien respecté le temps. C'est un peu court quand même tu pouvais donner plus de détails

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Today i have catch our first fish my fish was beautiful exept he was afraid . My day is so good exept my brother so mean . With my father build a new and bigger cabin . I bathed because the sun has benn shining all day . I am going on my father's boat and go to my home for eat grilled food. Yohan B Riché 4°9

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We have lived black rock island for 1 week .
Today it the tiring days because it has rained all day. My father and my brother have built a new bigger cabin. He it has rained but my mom and my have caught our first fish .I had really happy. We have eaten a vegetable and the delicious fruit . I feel depressed because we have had no contact anyone for two week. This really tiring day.

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M’y day of the 25 march Stella fracchia 4eme3

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M’y day of the 25 march Stella fracchia 4eme3

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Wednesday 25, it was a tiring day because we are going fishing and it will rain. pourquoi as-tu utilisé le futur!! il fallait le present perfect pour faire le BILAN We quickly entered thé cabin of the boat but it was too small for us so we built a new and bigger cabin.When the rain stopped we started fishing again and i catch  have cought our first fish. After we got into our new cabin and we watched the tv and the president said no contact with anyone for two weeks. When we go to Black Rock Island we eat vegetables and fruits since our arrival on Black Rock Island

attention tu n'as pas fait un journal de bord  pour faire le bilan de ta journée. tu as racontée une histoire avec plusieurs moments passés terminés datées donc au prétérit.

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This day TIM was sad and happy . Mum was worried because had not food . With my dad we have built a new and bigger cabin but the witer was not with me because was rain all day .ME and Tim have fished the first fish .My familli were sad because we have had  no contact with anymore anyone  for two week . We have little strong because have eaten vegetable and fruit since our arrival on Black Rock island
Adrian Escalier 4°3

des problèmes d'accord sujet verbes, oubli de sujet.
les phrases au present perfect sont réussies

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Today it's a very tiring day because we have built a new bigger cabin and I caught my first fish but it's rain all day . We have a alone day because we haven't a contact with anyone for two weeks because we don't have phone .We have eaten vegetables and fruit since our arrival on Black Rock island .
Nathan Merschaert 4°3

Trés décevant Nathan dans  l'utilisation des temps, tu devais utiliser le présent perfect tu utilises le present, le preterit, present simple sans cohérence. Tu devais t'inspirer du text que tu avais à travailler.

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We have spent two days in a dirty tent with a lot of holes therefore we have built an new tent. The day after, I have been soaked by rainling because I have looked for some fruits for the desert of my lunch. I have caught my first fish on a desert island just like as Robinson Crusoé. It was a way to verify that no boats have gone.

Tu ne peux pas parler du jour d'après au present perfect. je ne comprends pas ce que tu veux dire dans ta dernière phrase.
Tu n'as pas mis ton nom!!

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Since we arrived on "Black Rock", today it's the most tiring day because we have built a new and bigger cabin. Dad have built a new table to eat. We ' ve has are very hungry because we ' ve eaten vegetables and fruits since our arrival on the island. But, today I have caught with Tim our first fish and Tim has been so happy. It's so good to eat ! I have dreamt to eat a big burger with fries. Yesterday, I was so down because it was a raining day and I have had no contact with anyone for two weeks.
Damian Besnard 4°8
Attention à l'utilisation et la construction des temps tu mélanges bilan et histoire

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Today, I just raised at 9:00am and outside he rain. It's a bad day who begin.
I have never a no contact with anyone for two weeks, last week, I caught my first fish and I played at the rugby with my parents and my brother. Outside he  rained all day but we played a video game and finally I have eaten vegetable and fruit since our arrival on Black Rock Island.
Elias Maurel 4°3

tu n'as pas compris et respecté la consigne  : tu racontes un histoire et tu ne fais pas le bilan de ta jouréne au present perfect. tu parles d'une journée qui commence!!

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25th March                2 weeks have passed since the boat sank. It rained all day but I caught my first fish, I'm happy. I built a new cabin with my family. Except that I have had no contact with my friends for 2 weeks. Since our arrival on the island we have eaten only fruits and vegetables. It was a tiring day.    Matéis (403)

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25th March                2 weeks have passed since the boat sank. It rained all day but I caught my first fish, I'm happy. I built a new cabin with my family. Except that I have had no contact with my friends for 2 weeks. Since our arrival on the island we have eaten only fruits and vegetables. It was a tiring day.    Matéis (403)

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Pas mal du tout il manque un ou deux because et but pour ce soit parfait et quelques adjectifs par ex delicious fruit,.my firts big fish ...

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Today is a tiring day because me and my dad had  buit a new and bigger cabin. He rain it has rained all day but Tim and mom have caught our first fish. It is grey and big. We've been eating vegetable and fruit since our arrival on Black Rock island . Since our arrival we have had no contact with anyone for two weeks but i remain hopeful !
Siham Gatbaoui 4°9
Pas mal tu aurais du te relire pour éviter qq  erreurs. tu pouvais faire qqc d'un peu plus long aussi en ajoutant des détails avec because.

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Today it’s a tiring day ! It’s rain all day but it’s wonderfull day : I have cautch my first fish . It is red and very big . We haven’t had no contact with anyone for to weeks and we are have been  worried . I have eaten eat vegetable and fruit since my arrival on Black Rock Island and I want a big pizza !

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25 th March: We have lived on this island for 12 days . Today,it has rained all day . We have catched our first fish because we were tired to eat only vegetables and fruit since our arrival on Black Rock island .I feel  sad because we have no contact with anyone for two weeks . My mother and dad haven't been so happy or felt so good because we have built a new and bigger cabine much more confortable . Tim is happy to leave like Robinson Crusoe .
Alice janot 4°9

Excellent job Alice, just perfect. Tu pouvais néanmoins améliorer avec quelques adjectifs delicious fruit, this hevenly island ...

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Tiring day because we have built a new and bigger cabin for the family but it was raining all day and I’m feel sad . We haven’t had no contact with anyone for two weeks . We have eaten vegetables and fruit since our arrival on black rock island . Also I have been so happy because we have caught our first fish and he has been a wonderful day.
Charline carta 4*8

Pas mal Charline, tu as bien rexpectée la consigne

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Today you have a hard day because there is a four days an enormous storm has broken our cabin,she isn't more waterproof and protective. Over the rain my father and me have gathed all material to build a new cabin. The cabin is bigger than the first you have used branch and creeper and taller leaf tree it was very difficult. The next day dad  we  have done a surprise to go catch a fish in a river. Dad tim and me have built fishing rod, it was funny and difficult and we have caught four bigger fishs. We have eaten vegetables and fruit since our arrival on black rock Island. It is mum that them have  ramassed. Every afternoon we walk on island. No contact witch anyone for two weeks.
rémi lazzara 4°8

Pas mal Rémi quelques erreurs pourquoi utilises-tu le YOU (tu)? tu devais utiliser WE (nous) Tu parles du jour d'après, tu ne peux pas  parler du jour d'après car c'est le futur donc ce n'est plus le présent perfect.

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Tim has happy because he has caught our first fish but i'm sad because it has rained all day so the cabin is broken. Dad's and me have built a new and bigger cabin. We have had no contact with anyone for two weeks. We have eaten vegetables and fruits since our arrival on Black Roch island but today we have eaten fish. It's tiring day.
Kilian PETER

Très bien tu as utilisé because, tu as exprimé des sentiments. Mais ta dernière phrase devait aussi être au PRESENT PERFECT c'est le bilan de la journée.

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Two weeks have passed since our ship sank and we have had no contact with anyone yet. I have built a new and bigger cabin with my father and it has been a very tiring day because it  has rained all day!
Since our arrival on Black Rock island we have eaten vegetables and fruits, but today i have caught our first fish and we have been very excited!
Sacha Manoukian
Excellent job Sacha!

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At Monday 25th march rain all day but my mum and my dad are build a new and bigger cabine i have no contact with anyone for two weeks i eat vegetables and fruits since our arrival on black rock island but i doesn't like vegetables  me and my sister catch our first fish
it's a very tiring day

C'est bien Iheb d'avoir essayer mais il te manques  le temps necessaire pour parler du bilan de la journée Le PRESENT PERFECT. comme dans le texte que tu as étudié.

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My father and me going to build a new and bigger cabin but we must eat vegetables and fruit since our arrival on Black Rock island. My mother and my sister catch our first fish of week. My family and me are very lonely because the doctor said: no contact with anyone for two weeks. My father was so down because it rained all day so was a tiring day.
Imane Amrabet

Imane tu n'as pas utiliser le PRESENT PERFECT nécessaire pour faire le bilan de sa journée!

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IMAGINE you are Jamie Gillianson.

ADD a few lines to his diary for the 25th March.
(Ecris la journée du 25 mars en utilisant les informations suivantes et ton imagination)

25th March  --> a tiring day

rain all day

build a new and bigger cabin

catch our first fish

no contact with anyone for two weeks

eat vegetables and fruit since our arrival on Black Rock island