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Slide out pockets

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Lots of pockets with light material

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Heat shield, light and hard shell

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Slide out mini microwave that Can cook frozen food from the cooler

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retractible tent, made of heat resistant foil. cooling system in backpack

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retractible tent, made of heat resistant foil. cooling system in backpack

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the backpack is full of different features,  the slide out shelves are made of air tight ribber coated in heat resistant foil. the pocket above your left shoulder has flaps on top of the backpack for your findings, you can drop any evidance inside, weather its hot, or on fire. the shelve has a cooling system that prays cool water along with a fan . any leakage in the backpack will be instantly absorbed into the matherial and slowly drained down a tube and sent out the bottem of the pack.

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volcanic systems
volcanism

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Very well written. It just needs a little revision

Revise your paragraph in the following ways:

Word choice selection needs improvement (wider variety of general vocab)

Clearer explanation on how your design improves or solves a specific problem.

More transitions, overall flow, and clarity. Just make sure you read through it and fix little errors like spelling and such.