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Hi Ophelia! I really like your website. It made me realise the impact of greyhound racing. This is a great showcase. Next time, maybe add more images in your research area. Its a bit bland.

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Fantastic job Ophelia, when I was listening to you and reading your website I really felt for the greyhounds. I feel so,e things you could improve on is in your presentation try to make your speech more entertaining and heartfelt as you were a little lost for words in some parts. Try not to rush and take your time. In your infographic i know it might be hard but next time try to make it a bit more intriguing and bigger so that it is easier to read. Overall a good website.

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Hi Ophelia
This is a great showcase topic and you did a lot to help this cause. Next time maybe when your talking be a little bit more specific and say a little bit more about your information and call to action

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I think it was great other then the infographic which I didnt find so appealing but everything else was amazing you should be so proud Ophelia! :)

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Question: what could you have improved on?

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Hi Ophelia! Your showcase was out of this world! Your call to action inspired me and your essay ad photos made me feel for the Greyhounds. Your showcase overall enthralled me in the expectations burdened on Greyhound dogs and how after their racing they get dumped on the street or get euthanised (i think that is how you spell it!). This was a superb showcase!

Regards, Rithika.

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Hi Ophelia,
I found your showcase very interesting especially the photo essay. I found it very interesting and engaging

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Your website is really good.

Some things that you could improve on is. The home page texts is a little bit hard to read. You should also show pictures of the posters around your neighbourhood and choose if you want to sell some cupcakes, you should make your mind up if you want to sell cupcakes or if you dont want to.

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Ophelia, a great start. Just some minor things that I suggest. When making an infographic. Make it visually appealing as much as possible. So make your images larger too. You have a lot of 'dead' space with nothing there, so fill it with more images or enlarge the ones you already have.

Also, I love the petition and the email but what are you planning to do after all that information gathering? Whats the plan after that? How are you going to raise more awareness or help put a stop to greyhound racing?

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Hi Ophelia,

I loved your website. It looks awesome. The statistics were great. You should be very proud. :)

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Hi Ophelia!,
I really enjoyed this as it is very emotive and powerful! i like how u included lots of statistics and facts, but the only think is i think you need slightly more content on your information page but or else it is great!

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Interesting. Incredible facts & statics. It engaged me straight away, you have gathered amazing information. This is a great showcase so far!!

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Hi Ophelia! I really like this! Im not sure if it’s just my device or you didn’t publish it yet, but the call to action page is currently blank for me. But i love the amount of work you put into it!