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youu should start thinking in the first 5 min and write it in the next 5 min

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i tried to lock in chopped chin and i did it faster and beter by taking the things ms veronica said and used it

i am more satisfied because i think i did it better

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Think of more interesting stuff to write and say to the examiner for marks 🤑🤑🤑🤑🤑

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for the first 5 min my controller disconnected and my wifi walked away but then the next 5 min , i regained concousness like a 5 year old and i finished the planning

yes i am because i did it with hardwork and i think it was good

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remember the points and plan

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You must plan and try to rehearse what you say

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i did the same as I drew a mind map and list all the main points that I could think and almost the same as the first one

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I should double check my plan and correct some mistakes or add more ideas and plans into the plan and practice my speech more

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write and plan

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i wrote the points in point form so it was easier to memorize things i wanted to say. Everything was sorted out so i could read it all easily

yes i was very satisfied as i was able to read, understand and memorize my lines

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Think before i write and plan beforehand

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1) I did not change the way on how I plan my speech but I did dive into more of different people perspective of the video such as tourists.

2) I'm dissatisfied with my plan as I wrote less, did not put much thought into the plan like the previous plan and was not motivated to do the second planning.

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3) For the first, I did the planning is sentences. The second, I did in mindmaps.

4) I am more satisfied with the mind map because it has all keypoints and way easier to plan.

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Go with the flow then check. Anything wrong, correct it

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1)I did the exact same thing

2) I am more satisfied as i wrote more relevant points

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3)I added more details and wrote it in a clearer way so its easier when delivering my elaboration.

4)i am slightly more satisfied but still think i could of done better

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we should reread our plan to see if any better changes can be made

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3) I wrote more points and more words

4) I am more satisfied since I wrote more points

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reread the point to see if they contradict or relate to the topic and check for grammatical errors

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1) mindmap

2) less because mind maps make my writing shorter and less interesting

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Instead of writing a paragraph i wrote in point form

i am less satisfied with my plan as i could not figure out how to deliver my speech

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we should reread our points to see if it make sense , try adding more points and check if there is any grammar errors .

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1)I thought along as I wrote and made some changes at the end after practising my elaboration.

2)Not rly i feel like i should of done more by adding details and changing the grammar a little

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Give some ideas then some important point and them make a prototype and you can change it

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i did

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1) I put more understanding to other people's point of view.

2) Yes, because I put in more details into my elaboration.

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1) List out the 5W1H

2) Give your reasons and examples and make them in point form.

3) Write out the summary of your speech

4) Write some vocab/ related content to make your speech better.

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1) I drew a mind map and after two attempts of watching the video, I wrote different points, reasons/explanation, a point form experience and conclude/summarised all of them into the last few points.

2) I'm satisfied nor dissatisfied. I feel that if I thought and put more work into the planning I would be happy with the plan before practicing the speech.

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I wrote slightly more then in the first attempt and used more uh.. word that I can use to imagine along the way while explaining to the examiner. I'm slightly more please

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I tried to use the point form as mentioned by the teacher and I was more satisfied with the 2nd attempt compared to the 1st one because i had more than 5 mins for the second one than the first one.

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During the 10mins I wrote down my script.

I was satisfied as i wrote down everything i needed to write

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1) I wrote down the answer and points

2) Yes I am satisfied because I wrote down all the points

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my ideal steps will be writing in key points in point form then the remaining time ill write some sentences relating to each point form then at the end ill link as much as possible.

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1) I planned out all the key points that were linked to the question shown in the video before the 10 mins started. During the 10 mins, I immediately wrote down my answer to the question, experience and conclusion.

2) im satisfied with the results because it is perfectly linked and easy logical answers that the examiner can relate too.

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i wrote a whole paragraph on reasons why id rather much prefer about receiving mailed notices.

no. it took too long to memorize what i had to say. i also forgot to mention many points i wanted to point out as it was too long

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1) i wrote in a mindmap format

2)i feel less satisfied as i feel like i could've wrote more points

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For secomd attempt I wrote a base of what I was going to say

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I wrote all the points that I can think and it is relevant. I also wrote about my experience and add some vocab.

I think I am satisfied as I wrote all the details that are important and managed to practice my rehearsal 2-3 times

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ii did everything the same way .

ii felt neutral because ive been using that technique since the start

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i just elaborated more

yes

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1) During the ten minutes I wrote my plan in a sentence

2)I was satisfied with my plan as i wrote down the stuff that was required

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1) I paid attention to the video. Then, I planned it out in my head for 5 minutes. After I am satisfied with my plan, I will start writing for the rest amount of time.

2) Yes, I am satisfied with it as I showed my point of view but understand people's point of view at the same time.

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Look through if you have anything to add on,

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For 2nd attempt rather than writing the response i wrote key points in point form. I am more satisfied with this plan as i had more time to think about my response.

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1) I wrote down relevant points and planned .

2) No, I wrote too short

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5) point forms,, important parts, more expansion, shorter and proper sentences

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i was thinking all possible ways to elaborate my statement.

i was satisfied as it was the most i could elaborate

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1)i wrote a plan on what to say in full sentences and in point form for 2 different questions

2)yes cause i wrote all the important information

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I wrote a base of what I was going to say

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ii planned it out , summarized my key points and put it into a paragraph

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3)For the second practice, I drew out the graphic organizer given out in the google classroom because I felt like it helped me a bit more.

4) I am more satisfied with my plan as it allowed me to be neater and more time efficient, giving me time to improvise my speech.

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3) i made point forms in improper sentences

4) more satisfied as it can help me expand easier and better. It helps me a lot and focuses on the main points to say

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for the second question i wrote multiple explanations on why i would not like to take the tramp

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I tried to use the mind map and wrote it down as a paragraph and it was not satisfying for me because it took too much time and I had no time for speech rehearsal.

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I wrote lesser in shorter sentences that is also easy for me to build sentences on the spot.

Yes, it is like a better version of the first, it works better for me as well.

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i just wrote something short. but im ok can use more time to plan and write

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after watching the video i thought about the plan in my head but i could not think of much

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For the first attempt I just wrote the response. Im not satisfied with it though as i did not manage to finish it during the 10 minute duration

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1) During the 10 mins, I noted out the reasons for my response to the question, but the reasons were very lengthy.

2) I am not satisfied with my plan as it would take up a lot of time and I would not have time to improvise my speech.

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1）i wrote down points and thoughts that i have related to the video.

2) Yes, i didn't think i would manage to write so much within the given time and have so much time left to practice speech.

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1) I wrote out what i would have said without point forms or whatsoever

2) No as it is probably not the proper way and i cannot expand my speech

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I wrote down the answer that sounded right in my head, even if I practiced it I'll forget it so I need to write it down. I'm not that satisfied I'm sure I can wite and think about longer stuff to say to the examiner.

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5) List the ideal steps to take to utilise these 10 mins after 2 practices.

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1) What did you do during the 10 mins? List all the things you did.

2) Are you satisfied with your plan? Why, or why not?

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3) For the 2nd practice, what did you do DIFFERENTLY?

4) Are you more or less satisfied with your plan? Why, or why not?