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Transitions and getting started.

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The room was different from the others. Faded green paint along the walls, wood-type doors, chairs lining the room, and at the front, a lady behind a tiny glass window.

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Narrative about a mini evaluation of Parkways lunch

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Transitions

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choosing better words to flow with the piece

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I want to get better at having smoother transitions and staying on topic

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While the cookie itself is chewy, the sugary coating on the outside gives it a crunchy shell, and it adds to the overall sweetness. If they are fresh out of the oven, then the Hershey’s kiss on top should be warm and soft and it melts as soon as it enters your mouth.

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I'm driving on my way to school as I am eating the breakfast she wakes up a little bit earlier in the mornings to make.

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Each intricately crafted bit of snow builds up in order to create the soft surface that I walk on with my favorite black combat boots. The crackling sounds of my boots coming into contact with the floor enter my ears, along with the sniffles from the people surrounding me--due to the frosty weather that we all endure together, even if we don’t want to.

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These words will be edged in my head for all of time, “The pitch ‘knock’ this is going to be a tough play for Bryant, the Cubs, win the world series! Bryant makes the play!” This is the comfort of the torment and comfort in no longer being a lovable loser

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The frying dough and the sweetness of sugar glaze surrounded my head. All I could think about was the smell.

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"The distractions from everyday fears are encapsulating, as I'm emulsified in a ship at sea, thunder claps and lightning strikes throughout the dark clouds camouflaged into the sky"

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I want to have better word choice this semester and spend more time on reviewing my pieces.

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descriptive piece about my mom

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I wrote kind of a review piece about my personal haunted house which basically consisted of my pet peeves, fears, and dislikes

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I struggle with accepting that I’ll never be my dad's princess again, but as I grow older, I try to love and accept my dad more. I’m still a little kid, waiting for my father to pick me up, stroke my hair, and call me his princess. Yet, with that longing, I know I can't go back in time to fix our relationship.

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Working on transitions and structure to make my pieces flow more smoothly

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Transitions

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Increasing my word count in essays

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Connecting evidence and explaining

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Review piece on Kanye West

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Expository essay about personal essentials

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my expository essay on the 2016 Chicago Cubs

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improve transitions and hooks

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Senior year is when you’re just months away from leaving behind everything you’ve ever known—your friends, family, and home—just to move away to some foreign place to live in a foreign box-sized room with a foreign stranger that could be a serial killer.

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"Thanksgiving is the holiday when you are forced to meet with your relatives. Do you have that one uncle that you hate to see cause he creeps you out? Well too bad, you have to talk with him at the dinner table."

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I wan't to get better at my word choice

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"20, 40, 60..." Suddenly, he paused.  After locking eyes with his partner, the car was swept into gear, tires were screeching, and the gas pedal was floored. I

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Descriptive essay about senior year

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There was one show in particular that stuck out to me, Naruto. I never would have thought that something as basic as a cartoon would end up having such a Jurassic impact on me.

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“As much as I want to go back to simpler times or redo past mistakes like a clock's hands, I have to keep moving forward and never backward. It doesn’t mean that you can’t revisit memories like a clock's hands revisiting numbers on its face.”

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Conclusions and details.

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One skill I look to improve on this semester is getting my work in on time.

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Personal essay about my relationship with school

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Evaluation about Strange Donuts

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"Standing in the box. It was a free kick. I was the goalie, nothing mattered except I had to stop this shot or we would lose the game."

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I want to get better at finding new ways to transition into paragraphs/sentences.

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Transitions and adding more detail

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I want to get better at explaining my evidence

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I need to work on transitions and having more fluid throughout the essay.

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Extended metaphor
RM

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I want to get better at expanding on my topics

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My favorite piece was my evaluation essay about at TV show.

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Transitions between paragraphs or topics

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I can't control

What goes on in my life,

Kind of like a basketball can get picked up and played with

Until the sun goes down.

Every action I make has a chain reaction

That I feel that I can't control.

When I look right, the scoreboard shows,

Life is up on me.

Life will throw an unexpected challenge at me

and force me to juggle 18 different things.

Sometimes you have to deal with what you are dealt.

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my favorite piece was probably my expository writing about music - Ava E

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Evaluate about thanksgiving

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writing more and being more complex with my stories

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My favorite piece that I wrote was a one page paper about Christmas cookies

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My final about how literacy impacted my life

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My hero essay about my dad

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One of my college essays about working with kids with disabilities

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specifying examples and evidence

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I wrote an essay about my brother and me. It was a story about a time we ended up in the ER. It also described our relationship.

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Extended Metaphor Piece

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Narrative about a Life Changing Event.

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Favorite piece was narrative about my grandpa.