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Area of Strength: strong hook, vocabulary, and organization

Area of Improvement: incorporating more imagery and dialogue

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Area of Strength: strong hook(all I wrote so far basically)

Area of Improvement:
organization, details, imagery, vocabulary; etc. (just about everything else besides hook)

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Area of Strength: Language conventions, narrative, point of view, and partially the storyline

Area of Improvement: Character development, hook, imagery, plot development, and the storyline.

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Area of strength: spelling, punctuation, and capitalization

Area of Improvement: dialogue, imagry, and hook

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Area of Strength: grammar, spelling, punctuation.

Area of Improvement: hook, imagery, dialogue, length.

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Area of Strength: I feel that I am quite good at writing the hook as well as telling the story in general.

Area of Improvement: I think that I could improve on my spelling, use of commas, and a little bit on imagery.

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Area of strength- good hook and good imagery.

Area of weakness- Establishing characters

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Area of strength: Imagery

Area of improvement: Hook, wording choices, and detail

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Area of strength: Imagery

Area of improvement: Hook, dialogue, getting started, and grammer.

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My area of strength is having good grammar

My area that needs improvemnet is my hook and imagery

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Strength:Grammar and spelling

Weakness: Dialogue and Imagery

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Area of Strength: spelling, and use of imagery.

Area of improvement: better hook, improvement in dialogue.

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Area of strength: Punctuation, spelling and capitalization.

Area of improvement: Hook and imagery

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Area of strength- Organization, and spelling.
Area of improvement- Dialogue, and imagery

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Area of Strength: Emotions

Area of Improvement: strong hook, organization, details, vocabulary

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Area of strength: I like organizing and creating imagery when I feel creative

Area of improvement: Need to add more vocabulary and dialogue, along with characters.

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Area of Strength: Strong hook, good word choice, and good flow

Area of Improvement: Spelling and organization

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Area of Strength: Grammar, Organization

Area of Improvement: Needs more details and imagery, no strong hook

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Area of strengths:grammar,spelling, and organization
Areas of weakness: my hook,imagery, and storyline

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Area of strength: Vocabulary, Establishing a POV, Imagery

Area of improvement: Hook

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Area of Strength: strong hook, grammer, and POV

Area of Improvement: organization, imagery, and dialoge

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Area of Strength: Capitalization, imagery

Area of Improvement: Organization, hook, character development

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Area of Strength: I think I am doing a good job at re-telling details and adding some imagery.
Area of Weakness: Hook, and organization.

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Area of Strength: Organized

Area of Improvement: hook, imagery

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Area of Strength: Punctuation and spelling

Area of Weakness: Hook and Imagery

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Area of Strength: grammar and spelling

Area of Weakness: Hook, Dialogue, and storyline

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Area of Strength: Dialogue, Spelling

Area of Improvement: Establishing a Strong Hook, Imagery, Organization

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Area of strength: Grammar

Area of Improvement: Dialogue, Hook, Details, and Imagery

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area of strength: Grammar, imagery, point of view, organization

Area of improvement: hook, closing out a story

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Area of strength: spelling and staying organized

Area of improvement: working on hooks, and imagery

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Area of strength: Language conventions, organization, and hook

Area of improvement: imagery and dialogue

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Areas of Strength: vocabulary, capitalization, punctuation, spelling

Areas of Improvement: creating a good hook and dialogue

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Area of Strength: emotions, grammar, point of view, and organization.

Area of improvement: stronger hook, dialogue, and conclusions.

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Strength- I'm good at showing emotional thoughts hooks.

Weakness- vocabulary grammar details the ending

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Area of strength: Organization, grammar, and spelling

Area of weakness: amount of dialogue and imagery

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Areas of strength: dialogue & organization
Areas Of improvement: imagery and getting started.

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Areas of Strength: Hook and Spelling.
Areas of Improvement: Closing out of story and Organization.

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Area of strength: Description and punctuation

Area of improvement: Imagery, Dialogue, and Hook

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Area of strength: Good organization, being descriptive, and spelling
Area of improvement: Using more imagery and using more dialogue

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Area of strength: Imagery

Area of improvement: Hook and dialouge

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Area of Strength: I established a strong progression of events, and I used good description.
Area of Improvement: I did not have a great hook, use well developed dialogue or use figurative language well.

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Area of strength: Grammar, Hook

Are of improvement: Dialogue, development

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Area of strength: Good hook, and transition from intro to body.

Area of improvement: Spelling and language.

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Area of Strength: Imagery and storytelling
Area of Weakness: Developing characters and punctuation

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Area of strength: Good use of imagery and description

Area of Improvement: A more interesting hook and adding more dialogue

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The Divine Areas of Strength- Spelling, Organization, Imagery, Point of View,Vocabulary,Punctuation,Capitalization, Storyline, and my beloved Hook,

The Incompetent Mortal Weaknesses-Scenery and Dialogue

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Area of strength- Grammar, organization, and spelling.

Area of improvement- Dialogue and imagery

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Area of strength: capitalization, punctuation, and spelling, imagery and pov as well as organzation

Area of improvement: lacks a hook, dialogue,

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Area of strength: good hook and good use of dialogue

Area of improvement: imagery, plot development, storyline

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Area of Strength: imagery and emotions.

Area of Improvement: dialogue and hook.

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Area of strength: Grammar, organized dialogue

Area of improvement: a strong hook and imagery

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Area of strength: Hook , Clear pov , and grammar

Areas of Improvement: dialogue , more details , and imagery

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Area of strength: Hook/introduction, and vocabulary.

Area of Improvement: Dialogue, imagery, and grammar.

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Area of strength:Hook,Describing,Dialogue

Area Of Improvement:organization,spelling and grammar

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my area of strength is setting the scene of the story
my area that needs improvement is imagery

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Area of strength: Grammer, Punctuation, Point of View.

Area of Improvement: Hook, Imagery, and dialogue.

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Area of strength: I am good at using figurative language in my story, and my story does not have any grammar errors.

Area of improvement: My area of improvement is the organization of the story and writing an interesting hook.

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Area of strength: point of view, spelling, grammar, and punctuation

Area of improvement: Hook, imagery, and organization

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Areas of strength: Introduction, grammar, capitalization, and spelling

Areas of improvement: Dialogue, imagery, details, feelings

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area of strength: grammar, imagery, pov.

area of improvement: capitalization , taking a long time to make a hook

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Area of strength: Imagery, hook, and telling the story

Area of improvement: Incoporating more dialogue, and figuratice language

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Areas of Strength: If feel that my hook, POV clarity, and pacing is good.
Areas of Improvement:Some things that I could add/better are more dialogue, more figurative language, and concluding. I have some dialogue, but it does not feel equal. The same is happening with figurative language. I was not able to finish, so I need a conclusion.

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Area of strength: POV, Grammar, Spelling and Hook
Weakness: Dialogue, pacing of events and too short to develop a storyline

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Strength: Hook,detail and point off view

Improvement : Grammer, dialogue and Imagery

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area of strength: organization imagery
area of improvement: hook