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Clever idea, customisation is a very good

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Clever idea, customisation is a very good idea

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Good idea, try to be a little more
engaging

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Good idea, c

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Good but you need to add some thing to stand out and capture the audiences attention a bit more

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Your presentation was engaging but I would have liked to see some solid numbers and statistic in terms of how much it will cost and the profit

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Really well thought out presentation, well researched.
You need to try to engage you audience a bit more but apart from that well done

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Good idea, I thought you gave it a good shot and presented well, I think a few slides were unnesecary and your speech lacked expression however overall I thought it was good and I would invest.

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Really well thought out presentation, well researched

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Good idea, need to be more fluent in your speech and make it more interesting in terms of a louder voice and more interesting slides, more solid statistics would be nice. Overall, well done. However I won't be investing.

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Good idea but presentation of idea could have been better but still I would see some investors in the idea.

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Good stuff

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Good idea
It seems like you have done the research well

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Good idea
It seems like you have done the research well

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Unique

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Good idea, I thought u

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An interesting idea.

Lacking a bit of market knowlege

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Great idea and future planing, but you may have needed to rehearse your speech a bit more

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I like the idea. Maybe you could of done a demonstration or showed it in action. A bit more energy would have been nice but it's a cool idea.

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Very great idea. It is unique and effective, and I myself would certainly buy one 👍🏻

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Interesting idea but not investable as most people dry their hair before going to bed or after a shower so I don't think it would be successful but how you planned and expected to sell the the product was good

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The idea is great and the marketing was exceptional. A point of improvement would be to show confidence as this pillow can work in the real world. Another point of improvement would be to say that you will create these products in a local working area where there aren't sweat shops as many niche buyers are looking for ethical

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Good idea, but it was sooo boring. You need to

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Good idea, but it was sooo bor

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Good idea, but you looked nervous, business plan was good but you spoke rather slow.💯💯

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Was a little to stop/ start needed more flow. But g idea

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Good use of language.
However very monotone voice
Interesting idea

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Good idea very investable
Could work on speaking still to engage the reading more

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Good idea, but a little bit quiet and didn't quite capable urge my mind. Don't know if I would invest

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Well thought out idea, lots of good points

Probably should have practiced a little more to be more confident with what you were saying, leading to less stuttering and more convincing arguments