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My strongest intelligence is verbal/linguistic. I started speaking before I was born. If you put your ear on my mother's stomach, you could hear me talking. After I was born, I didn't stop talking. Unfortunately it caused both my parents to go insane. I am still talking, often I talk to my husband until he falls asleep. I love my job which is to talk to young adults and torture them with grammar lessons. I cannot imagine a life without my super verbal abilities.

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My strongest intelligence is Intrapersonal. My friends usually say that I can control myself in difficult circunstances and I always set my goals . My favorite hobby is cooking because I enjoy working by myself, it relax me when I am stressed. Everyday after my english class I am in my room studying with my favorite music. Also my favorite exercise is running,with this activity I spend time at nature alone. I belive that managing our thoughts and emotions are the recipe to be in peace with our lifes.

THIS LOOKS GOOD, ANDY. FOUR LINES DOWN, THERE IS A SUBJECT-VERB AGREEMENT ERROR. "It' IS SINGULAR, SO THE FOLLOWING VERB SHOULD BE SINGULAR TOO.

ALSO, WE CAPITALIZE THE NAMES OF LANGUAGES IN ENGLISH.

THE PREPOSITION BEFORE "nature" IS INCORRECT--SEE IF YOU CAN FIX IT.

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My strongest intelligence is logic/mathematics. Since elementary school I was the best in math class, I'm also good at remembering long numbers like years of historical events and I'm good at making equations in my mind. Currently I have won 3 competitions in high school in first and third place. Thanks to mathematics I have been able to excel in school, I think I'm cut out to be an engineer.

THIS LOOKS VERY GOOD!

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My strongest inteligence is the mathematical and the verbal lingüístic

I have been writing poetry and publishing it on tik tok, I have also been reading more often and thus improve my vocabulary, I am also good at mathematics, since something I like is solving problems to which I can find a solution.

THE VERB "IMPROVE" SHOULD HAVE AN -ING ON THE END. OTHERWISE GOOD, BUT YOU NEED A CONCLUDING SENTENCE, ONE THAT EXPLAINS WHY ALL OF THIS IS IMPORTANT TO YOU

Im Jose Luis

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My strongest intelligence is musical and rhythmic. Since I am a person who knows how to coordinate very well on any instrument, since I was a child I ah loved everything within music, they gave me microphones, guitars, speakers to be playing and singing, and when I grew up they put me in piano, I mastered it very easily and continued ah teach myself the drum, then the ukulele and now I am in singing and electric guitar. These are one of the few gifts I have and the one that ah delighted and dominated me the most, that I have even participated in several music contests, and in two I have won, we are going for more.

EXCELLENT EXAMPLES, BUT CAN YOU BREAK THEM UP INTO DIFFERENT SENTENCES? PUT IN SOME PUNTOS.

ALSO YOU NEED A CONCLUDING SENTENCE, ONE THAT TELLS THE READER WHY THIS IS IMPORTANT TO YOU. SEE THE EXAMPLES ON SLIDE "C"

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My strongest intelligence is musical/ rhythmical. I love to dance and even went to dance competitions, my family and friends say that I dance well, I also enjoy singing a lot I feel that I don't do it so badly I just need to improve a little, all day I'm dancing singing and listening to music since it's something I enjoy doing a lot, I feel that music and dancing are my strong point because it's something I like since I was little and it's my way of expressing myself.

VERY GOOD. NOW LET'S BREAK THIS UP IN TO SEPARATE SENTENCES. SO REPLACE SOME OF THE COMMAS WITH PUNTOS, JUST AS YOU WOULD IN SPANISH.

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My strongest intelligence is visual, when I was little I practiced athletics and I stood out a lot thanks to observing the techniques of classmates older than me.

Furthermore, when I practiced violin I was one of the best in my class, because I always watched carefully how my teacher did it.

Now in high school I learn very well in subjects where I observe and pay full attention.

I think that visual learning is very simple and has helped me a lot all my life, but now I find it a little difficult, because I get distracted easily and sometimes it is very difficult to keep my attention on something for a long time. Plus, I need glasses to see well, so when I forget them, I probably won't understand anything in my classes.

KYTZIA, VERY GOOD PARAGRAPH. HOWEVER, THE THIRD EXAMPLE ISN'T AS STRONG AS THE FIRST TWO, MAYBE YOU COULD PICK ONE OTHER SUBJECT WHERE VISUAL INTELLIGENCE HAS HELPED YOU, SOMETHING MORE SPECIFIC.

AND THEN THE END OF THE PARAGRAPH MENTIONS WEAKNESSES RATHER THAN STRENGTHS. I THINK A BETTER CONCLUSION WOULD BE SOMEWHAT HUMOROUS--ABOUT HOW IT'S IMPORTANT FOR A VISUAL LEARNER NOT TO FORGET HER EYEGLASSES

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My strongest intelligence is logical/mathematical. Since i was in 2nd grade i have participated and won math contests, I have a very good memory, is easy for me to remember series of numbers like phone numbers, dates or math formulas, I also really like physics and I always enjoy solving math and physics problems. I love maths and i think this skill help me and will help me throughout my life.

PERFECT PARAGRAPH! THANK YOU

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Emily

My strongest intelligence is bodily/kinesthetic. Since I was a child I have liked a lot of sports, since my father taught me a lot about soccer, I started practicing it. At school my favorite subject was physical education, thanks to that they took me to participate in a relay race, long jump and 300 meter race, after that in high school I was captain of the women's soccer team and we won some tournaments. I like to be on the move a lot, especially if I'm doing a sport.

WE HAVE A LOT OF LONG SENTENCES, HERE. I SUGGEST A PUNTO AFTER "education," AND AGAIN AFTER "...300 meter race."

OTHERWISE, EXCELLENT PARAGRAPH

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My strongest intelligence

I think that my strongest intelligence is intrapersonal, my friends, family and people who know me usually tell me that I am very good at listening and giving advice. They always come to me if they have any problems, which makes them feel very special and good.

VERY GOOD EXAMPLES, ELSI. CAN YOU GIVE ONE MORE? AND THEN YOU NEED A CONCLUDING SENTENCE THAT TELLS WHY THIS IS IMPORTANT TO YOU. SEE THE EXAMPLE PARAGRAPHS ON SLIDE "C"

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Yuli

My strongest intelligence is verbal because I feel more comfortable and fluid more when it comes to reading or writing, I've never been good at math because I can't learn the formulas but I can usually talk for hours about something I read months ago, this is something that is very useful when you know how to use it to your advantage.

GOOD STRONG PARAGRAPH. I'M NOT SURE ABOUT THAT WORD 'flowed'. TRY SOMETHING ELSE HERE. EXCELLENT CONCLUDING SENTENCE

GOOD JOB, YULI. THANKS FOR MAKING THE CORRECTION. 10/10 (A)

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My strongest intelligence is Intrapersonal. I love learning on my own. When I see topics or things that interest me, I immediately start searching for all the information about them. Then, I create my own study method, and before I even realize it, I already know everything about what I liked. Also, I can create my own environment to study in peace and calm. That's how I started learning English. I think in this way I can learn everything better, on my rythm wihout feel pressured.

EXCELLENT WORK, WITH ONE SMALL EXCEPTION: YOU NEED A CONCLUDING SENTENCE THAT WRAPS IT ALL UP. 'Thats how I started...' DOESN'T REALLY COVER ALL OF IT. TELL THE READER WHY THIS INTELLIGENCE IS IMPORTANT TO YOU.

GOOD PARAGRAPH EDITH, THANK YOU! 10/10 (A)

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Estefany.

My strongest intelligence is visual / spatial. When I was little, what helped me a lot to learn different things were cartoons, since it was difficult for me to understand when they told me, but seeing how they did it helped me a lot. On many occasions I have been noted for my good visual memory, and this has helped me when I don't remember the names of the streets and I am lost, I only remember what the houses looked like and the problem was solved. I feel very happy to have this ability, since it helps me have much more detailed memories and I love that.

PERFECT PARAGRAPH, THANK YOU!

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My strongest inteligence is bodily/kinesthetic. When i was child, I loved dancing and doing active things. My mom says I always wanted to be on the move. , so she put me in ballet classes to help me relax.

This affects how I learn. It's hard for me to remember new info if I'm not moving or doing hands-on activities. I need to use my body to understand and remember.

For example, when studying for a test, I make flashcards and walk around. When learning something new, I need to see demonstrations or do exercises.

I also express myself through movement. I use gestures and like activities like dance, sports, or just walking.

EXCELLENT PARAGRAPH. GOOD STRONG EXAMPLES. BUT YOU DO NEED A CONCLUDING SENTENCE, HOW THIS ABILITY WILL BE IMPORTANT FOR YOUR FUTURE FOR EXAMPLE, OR WHY IT IS SO IMPORTANT TO YOU.

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My strongest intelligence is intrapersonal because I feel more comfortable investigating on my own and I like to use other methods, such as when learning another language I watch a movie in Spanish and then in English and also because I am very curious.

GOOD, CESAR. ALL YOU NEED TO IS 1) ADD AT LEAST ONE MORE SPECIFIC EXAMPLE, ANOTHER WAY YOU USE INTRAPERSONAL INTELLIGENCE IN SCHOOL OR WORK OR SOCIALLY, AND 2) A CONCLUDING SENTENCE, ONE THAT TELLS HOW INTRAPERSONAL INTELLIGENCE WILL HELP YOU OVERALL IN YOUR LIFE OR WHY IT IS MOST IMPORTANT TO YOU.

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My strongest intelligence Karla Valeria.

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My strongest intelligence Karla Valeria.

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My strongest intelligence is interpersonal. Since i was born I like to talk with other people. when I was a child I liked to made a lot of friends and speak with them.

Always I tried to understand the feelings of the people. It is even easy for me to have many topics of conversations with stragers.

Actually my friends tell me that I am good at giving advice and help them when they feels sad.

GOOD, KARLA VALERIA. PLEASE CAPITALIZE THE PRONOUN 'i'. 'feels' SHOULD BE 'feelings.' REPLACE 'strager people' WITH 'strangers'. YOU GIVE GOOD EXAMPLES, NOW ALL YOU NEED IS A CONCLUDING SENTENCE. (LOOK AT THE EXAMPLE PARAGRAPHS ON SLIDE 'D'. BASICALLY A SENTENCE THAT WRAPS IT ALL UP, THAT TELLS WHY INTERPERSONAL INTELLIGENCE IS SO IMPORTANT TO YOU, OR HOW IT WILL BE AN ADVANTAGE IN YOUR FUTURE.

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My strongest intelligence is visual. I learn a lot by seeing things. Since I was little I remember that I learned by watching teachers do things or solve exercises and I quickly understood them also in assignments or so observing how they do it works a lot for me since it is like copying you could say but that is why I think it is my strongest intelligence.

GOOD JOB, NAOMI. I THINK YOUR EXAMPLES COULD BE A LITTLE MORE SPECIFIC. SO INSTEAD OF SAYING '...do things...' OR '...solve exercises...' OR '...assignments...' USE EXAMPLES WITH MORE DETAIL. WHAT KIND OF EXERCISES OR ASSIGNMENTS? IN WHAT SUBJECTS? GIVE JUST A LITTLE MORE DETAIL, AND YOU'LL BE GOOD!

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My strongest intelligence.                                 Dafne

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My strongest intelligence.                                 Dafne

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My strongest intelligence is logical/mathematical I really like math exercises, learning how to sacra numbers and rules, there are times when I get very stressed because I can't solve something, but I love the feeling of solving a math problem, my friends tell me that I am good at math and more teaching, I also really like to explain to my friends how to do it.

VERY GOOD, DAFNE, BUT I DON'T KNOW WHAT 'sacra' MEANS. ASIDE FROM THAT ALL YOU NEED IS A CONCLUDING SENTENCE. SEE THE EXAMPLE PARAGRAPHS ON SLIDE 'C'. THE WRITERS EXPLAIN WHY THEIR INTELLIGENCE IS SO IMPORTANT TO THEM. ANOTHER WAY TO WRITE A CONCLUSION IS TO TELL HOW IT WILL HELP YOU IN THE FUTURE. THANK YOU!

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My Strongest Intelligence: Visual/Spatial

My brain is good with pictures and shapes. I like maps, colors, and designs. When I was young, I loved building LEGO. I could make very cool and interesting things with my LEGO blocks.

My brain works like a camera. I remember everything I see. When I look at a room, I can imagine how to change it quickly. My friends ask me to help them with decoration and space planning.

I like to make beautiful pictures and find good visual solutions. My visual skills are special.

EXCELLENT AND INTERESTING PARAGRAPH, CARLA. THANK YOU! 10/10 (A)

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My strongest intelligence is intrapersonal because I feel more comfortable investigating on my own and I like to use other methods, such as when learning another language I watch a movie in Spanish and then in English and also because I am very curious Another example of this is that I review the topics myself without anyone asking me when I am free watching videos on YouTube.

This helps me in my life so that I don't forget any topic I am learning and helps me to be more prepared when taking an exam.

GOOD, CESAR. THANK YOU FOR THE REWRITE. I CAN DEFINITELY SEE HOW THIS IS YOUR STRONGEST INTELLIGENCE! 10/10 (A)

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My greatest strength is interpersonal intelligence. I’ve always had the ability to understand and connect with people on a deeper level. I love listening, supporting, and finding ways to help others feel understood. At school, I’m the friend everyone comes to for advice or just someone to talk to. I also find it easy to work in teams since I know how to mediate conflicts and maintain a positive atmosphere. This skill has allowed me to build meaningful relationships and learn from every interaction. I believe this strength could lead me to a career where I can work directly with people, like psychology, teaching, or any field where I can make a difference in others' lives.

GOOD OVERALL, DANNY, BUT THIS IS A LITTLE GENERAL. REMEMBER (FOR FUTURE WRITING ASSIGNMENTS) THAT SPECIFIC EXAMPLES ENGAGE YOUR READER MORE. SO INSTEAD OF 'helping others feel understood,' ADD AN EXAMPLE OF WHERE YOU HAVE DONE THIS.

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My strongest intelligence is

Bodily/Kynesthetic because when I was 6 years old i started dancing and to learn the dance i have to do it with my body and the same as in the school with my homework, I have to write it to understand and with all the things that i have to keep in my mind is the same

GOOD, MAJO. ONE MORE EXAMPLE WOULD HAVE BEEN GOOD AND ALSO A CONCLUDING SENTENCE. SAVE THIS PARAGRAPH FOR THE FUTURE WHEN YOU MIGHT WRITE A PAPER ON A SIMILAR TOPIC. THANK YOU!