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Situation: The Daily Tribune, a well-known newspaper in Bahrain, seeks young writers for an upcoming kids' magazine. To audition, compose a suspenseful narrative.

Pair Work: Write a gripping 30 to 50-word introduction that sets the tone for your suspense story. Make sure to apply effective techniques to build suspense in your introduction. Submit your work in Padlet and be ready to present.

Time Allotment: 10 minutes

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Copy this in your notebooks.

Date: 05 November 2024

Entry: _________________________________

Classmate's Name: _____________________

Task: Writing an Opening to a Suspense Story

Score:

Relevance: ___ out of 1

Character/Setting: ___ out of 1

Establishing suspense: ___ out of 1

Reader's Engagement: ___ out of 1

General Feedback: _____________ (short reason why you did not give full mark or what you really liked about the output.)

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once upon a time there was a koala on a tree it herd a hissssssss it saw the ground and did not see anything then boom a snake in the koala face

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There was a boy in the small village that always wanted to go to the forest, but the elders of the village forbade him from going into the forest. But one day he went into the forest.

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When I was at another place went to a lake that we can put our legs in and feel the cold water I kept playing and then I realised that I'm alone in the dark and no one is with me I kept looking for anyone to help me then I felt somebody was behind me I rushed out of there and called my sister to pick me up

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When I was at another place went to a lake that we can put our legs in and feel the cold water I kept playing and then I realised that I'm alone in the dark and no one is with me I kept looking for anyone to help me then I felt somebody was behind me I rushed out of there and called my sister to pick me up

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The storm raged outside, thunder echoing like a warning. In the dim light of her flickering candle, Clara’s heart raced as she found the old journal, its pages stained and torn. One entry stood out: “They’re watching.” She felt a chill crawl up her spine.

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It was a cold, dark night. We had just arrived at our destination, and we walked to the old cabin. . . the cabin door opened on it's own, but nobody was inside it

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I was walking in the forest and suddenly I heard something running to ward me suddenly I was in front of a scary mansion

it was scary creepy

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Last week٫I went to a huge cliff and on the cliff there was a huge Mansion. Suddenly the door open the place was quiet and not anyone there I was scared for my life. It was dark. It was scary so I went inside .

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i reached the abandoned house and i heard people running behind me so i entered and locked the door and went running to hide upstairs , and somebody entered from the window i was scared

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one day i was walking in the forest suddenly i heard somebody following me, i was scared, i saw a haunted house and i ran inside he started running after me with a knife in his hand then i fell the ground.

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One day, I went to a scary haunted mansion, I had never been so scared in my life! I started jumping from nervousness and scaredness. I went alone and suddenly...............

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one day a in a maestros castle their was a maestros man named saroow he was living in the castle whit. his boss when first recruited him he told him the basics and places of the castle but more important was the black ether room saroow was pulled to it sense he heard about it he was waiting for the best time to approach the room and he was being good so he doesn't get caught and finely he got in to the ro..................om.

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I was home alone when creepy things were happening. When I tried to sleep, I saw things surrounding me, so I couldn’t take it anymore and rushed outside the house but they followed me, while running outside, I thought of, “ a curse, hallucination, or ghost !?”.

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The old house write by Ali Hassan Alsaffar

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The old house write by Ali Hassan Alsaffar

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Once upon a time in a small quiet village up in the mountain, there was an old house . The people in the village heard about it , that a ghost kind old women lived in . Children were scared and tried to go near to the house but nobody ever went inside.

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In the dim glow of a flickering streetlight, Maya clutched her backpack, glancing nervously over her shoulder. Shadows seemed to stretch and shift, swallowing the path behind her. Footsteps echoed in the silence-a slow, steady rhythm that matched her pounding heart. She wasn't alone.

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In a dark haunted house shadows are deep lights are low me and my friend wanted to explore the house we went to the toilet and......... KABOOM!! one of the rooms exploded.

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In a Haunted town there were a man ho was running , When he stopped to drink Water he saw the door opened it self and the place was dark so he went inside to see what is there.

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In a Haunted town there were a man ho was running , When he stopped to drink Water he saw the door opened it self and the place was dark so he went inside to see what is there.

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Once deep night in scary Castle there was kid he see a big door it’s open automatically he cam in then the big door closed he see spiders and bats and insects then the rain cam and the storm he trying to get out but a huge man catch him and the story finished        # Please do hart 

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Once deep night in scary Castle there was kid he see a big door it’s open automatically he cam in then the big door closed he see spiders and bats and insects then the rain cam and the storm he trying to get out but a huge man catch him and the story finished        # Please do hart 

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In a forgotten town, a chilling fog rolled in at midnight. Whispers echoed, calling her name. Drawn outside, Sarah saw her reflection in the pond, but the eyes staring back weren't hers. They smiled wickedly, beckoning her closer. As she leaned in, the surface rippled, swallowing her scream forever.

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In a forgotten town, a chilling fog rolled in at midnight. Whispers echoed, calling her name. Drawn outside, Sarah saw her reflection in the pond, but the eyes staring back weren't hers. They smiled wickedly, beckoning her closer. As she leaned in, the surface rippled, swallowing her scream forever.

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one night a small boy went to the darkness of the forest and walking on the grass with fear and stumbling upon a scary black lion with red eyes and white claws, he started to run but it was as fast as 10 ferrari engines loaded up together so he had no other choice, so he punched it in its eyes and climbed up the branches of the tree and tried to not breath for 10 seconds before it ran into the darkness again

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once upon a time in a small quiet village up in the mountain there was an old house . The people in the village head about it