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Make the text more understandable and concise for people who do not know phyjics

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Make the text more understandable and concise for people who do not know phyjics

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I like you're use of slide

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I would say make your slides more engaging so either the text or the color or overall way of formatting everything together

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I would say make your slides more engaging so either the text or the color or overall way of formatting everything together

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There were too many words on the first slide, a picture of a black whole and some text would be just as efficient. 

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There were too many words on the first slide, a picture of a black whole and some text would be just as efficient. 

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establish more context defining different terms to the audience who is unfamiliar by what this means 

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establish more context defining different terms to the audience who is unfamiliar by what this means 

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Have more eye contact and engagement with the audience

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Have more eye contact and engagement with the audience

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I would all more picture and less words to your slides

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I would all more picture and less words to your slides

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more colors, too dark and. dull

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Try to balance out your use of words and images 

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Try to balance out your use of words and images 

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This is a very specialised topic - make sure to use clear, layman's vocab + explain your ideas thoroughly 

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This is a very specialised topic - make sure to use clear, layman's vocab + explain your ideas thoroughly 

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considering not showing us the equation as i still struggle to understand

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considering not showing us the equation as i still struggle to understand

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good job explaining what your formula is to the unfamiliar audience

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good job explaining what your formula is to the unfamiliar audience

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good description of the equation and loud speaking

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How will you be able to measure this and gather the data for an actual black hole.

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How will you be able to measure this and gather the data for an actual black hole.

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Good audience engagement when talking about the equation and why you chose it

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Good audience engagement when talking about the equation and why you chose it

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You clearly have put a lot of time and effort into understanding these concepts

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You clearly have put a lot of time and effort into understanding these concepts

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could you use more engaging visuals? How can you decrease the amount of writing and replace it with visuals? 

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could you use more engaging visuals? How can you decrease the amount of writing and replace it with visuals? 

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It is clear that you understand your topic, but how are you ensuring that you data collection will be feasible considering the fact that this is a complicated topic?

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It is clear that you understand your topic, but how are you ensuring that you data collection will be feasible considering the fact that this is a complicated topic?

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maybe talk faster

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Talking too much to audience about the context, just move on

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Talking too much to audience about the context, just move on

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How do you plan on collecting enough data to research this, especially as a high school student. I like how unique the topic is. 

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How do you plan on collecting enough data to research this, especially as a high school student. I like how unique the topic is. 

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how will you be able to measure the confounding variables?

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how will you be able to measure the confounding variables?

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use citations and make your slides visually appealing

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use citations and make your slides visually appealing

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what is the "so what" of your research, what are you solving or bringing attention to through this?  what is the purpose? 

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what is the "so what" of your research, what are you solving or bringing attention to through this?  what is the purpose? 

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Wouldn't the person that published this equation have to prove it consistently works, are you sure there is a hole in the knowledge that isn't already covered by the individual who created this equation

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Wouldn't the person that published this equation have to prove it consistently works, are you sure there is a hole in the knowledge that isn't already covered by the individual who created this equation

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give us more context for the situation, it may be a it hard to follow along at times since astrophysics isn't a topic we're normally taught unless we want to learn. How do you plan to get your data? Where are you getting it from?

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You have a good idea for the methodology

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You have a good idea for the methodology

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You did a good job explaining a very complicated topic. 

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You did a good job explaining a very complicated topic. 

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How would you actually test this? This RQ is interesting, but how would you actually develop this and use personal studies? 

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How would you actually test this? This RQ is interesting, but how would you actually develop this and use personal studies? 

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you did a good job of breaking down the equation to make it easier to understand

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you did a good job of breaking down the equation to make it easier to understand

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Your audience engagement was great, you used a good variety of gestures and tone

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Your audience engagement was great, you used a good variety of gestures and tone

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Considering that the equation was only found in 2019, is there enough research for a meta analysis?

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Considering that the equation was only found in 2019, is there enough research for a meta analysis?

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You did a really good job at simplifying the complexity of your research. 

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You did a really good job at simplifying the complexity of your research. 

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good job with your topic you clearly understand what your problem is.

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There was too much writing in the slides, place more emphasis on images 

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There was too much writing in the slides, place more emphasis on images 