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Hello everyone! Today I'll talk about my trlp to vietham, Hahol,

I came here with my friend

I want to see the Da nong and drink water,

I'm going to the make cookies

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Hello everyone Hi I'm siyoon Today, I'll talk about my trip

I came to londo in Spain with my friend. We can see very so beatiful view. It was very so great.We are going to walk in the trail. We also ate churrossand it was very so yummy. I AM looking forward to eat churross. I am so excited about this trip.

That is all. Thank you for listening. I hope you enjoyed my trip stories.

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Hello everyone Today I'll talk about my trip to San Francisco, USA.

I’m going to San Francisco in the United States with my friend.

Yesterday, we watched the sunset by the bridge and took many pictures. The view was very beautiful.

I will take a long bus ride, and it should be comfortable. I plan to sleep during the trip so I won’t be tired when we arrive.

I want to visit a famous restaurant here. I’m looking forward to enjoying a nice meal with my friend. I really want to try clam chowder, which is popular in San Francisco.

Tomorrow, we will see the Golden Gate Bridge and maybe explore some local museums.

I’m excited to tell you all about my trip when I get back.

Thank you for listening

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Hello, everyone! Today, I'll talk about my trip to Moscow,Russia.

I came to here with my friends

Russia is very big.

We are going to visit Red Square.

Red Square is very big and beautiful.

We will see an opera at the Bolshoi Theater.

The opera is fun and beautiful.

I want to eat shashlik.

After dinner, we will visit Saint Basil's Cathedral.

for listening

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Hello everyone I'm chae yeon. I'll talk about my trip to Osaka,Japan I'm looking at Osaka Castle and shopping.

I will go to Dotonbori to enjoy sushi.

I'm looking forward to try Universal Studios. That's all. Thank you for listening!

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Hello everyone Today, l'll talk about my trip to Paris, France.

I came here with my brother

Thank you for listening!!

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hello everyone!

Hi, I am yulhee. Today I will talk about my trip

I am went to the Philippines in El Nido with my friend Minchae.

I am going to go to Secret Lagoon.

I am going to ride a kayak.

I want to eat alimango.

I am learning new words about El Nido

I am looking forward to have a fun time.

That's all! Thank you for listening

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Hello everyone! I'm Eunju

I traveled to Tokyo in Japan with my friend. It's very exciting here. I'm going to see Tokyo tower. I'm going to photograph Tokyo tower.I want to eat milk pudding and Dango.I'm looking forward to visiting DisneDisneyla.

That's all.Thank you for listening!

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Hi, I'm yuri. I'll talk about my trip

Today My sister and I came to Skytree in Tokyo.

We're going to visit sumida Aquarium, and we're going to take a picture in that place.

Now, I'm playing water activity.

I'm going to go Pork cutlet shop. and I'm eating Pork cutlet.

I'm looking forward to eating Pork cutlet.

That's all. Thank you for listening!

Yuri

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Hello everyone

Today,I'll talk about my trip.

I came to Rome in Italy.

First, I’m going to see pictures in Vatican City.

and I especially want to see The Creation, because it is a world-famous painting.

After that, I’m going to walk in the gardens in Vatican City.

I’m looking forward to tasting many kinds of gelato.

That's all. Than you for listening.

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Hello everyone! I'm Sunjae! Today I'll talk about my trip.

I came to Naples in Italy with my mom. I’m planning to visit the volcano site of Pompeii and see the old city. I’m also going to explore underground Naples. And I will go to a pizzeria and eat pizza. I’m looking forward to going on this trip because Naples is very famous.

Thank you for listening!

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Hello everyone. I'm oreum. Today, I'll talk about my trip

I traveled to Sapporo in Japan with my family. We watched an ice festival and we are going to make snowmen. I want to eat sushi. I’m looking forward to seeing the ice festival.

That's all. Thank you for listening.

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Hello everyone! I'm woohyun l'll talk about my trip.

I came to Paris in France with my SJ.

I'm going to watch Eiffel Tower.

I will ride a bike.

I want to eat Macaron because it tastes good.

I'm looking forward to going to France.

Thank you for listening

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Hello everyone! I'll talk about my trip.

I am in Tokyo Japan with Min.

I am going to see Disneyland.

I enjoy riding roller coasters.

I tried sushi, and it was delicious.

I am looking forward to eating more sushi.

That's all Thank you for listening!

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Hello, everyone! I'm Ayoung. Today, I'll talk about my trip. Now, I'm staying in Paris in France with my sister. I'm going to see the Eiffel Tower. It will be beautiful. I also plan to visit the Louvre Museum. And I will enjoy the exhibitions there. I want to try authentic macarons so I will try them. I'm looking forward to seeing the Eiffel Tower. That's all. Thank you for listening! I hope you enjoyed my trip story.

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Hello everyone! Hi I'm Jung hoon Today I'll talk about this trip

Today,I came to Rome in Italy with my friend.We visited the Colosseum and Trevi Fountain.After that we,had fun on a Kayaking tour. We also ate Italian carbonara,and it was delicious.I'm looking forward to eating carbonara.I'm so excited about this trip

That's all Thank you for listening I hope you enjoyed my trip story

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Hi I'm Heemin. I'll talk about my trip.

I went to Tokyo in Japan with my friend.

I'm going to visit Tokyo tower.

We play arcade games at Tokyo tower and made ramen.

I'm looking forward to seeing a beautiful view.

That's all. Thank you for listening. l hope you enjoyed my trip story.

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Hello everyone,

I came to Honolulu, Hawaii with my family.

I’m going to visit Waikiki Beach.

I’m playing and swimming because I like the ocean.

I want to eat udon because I think Waikiki Beach is good for the soul.

I’m looking forward to swimming.

Thank you for listening!

I’m Seung Hyun Lee.

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Hello everyone, I’m Joohan. today I'll talk about my trip.

I arrived in Rome, Italy.

I saw the Travi Fountain, and I’m going to see a beautiful church.

Next, I’m going to walk around the city of Rome.

Maybe I’ll eat Margherita pizza.

After that, I’m looking forward to attending missa.

That's all.

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Hello everyone! I'm Eunju

I traveled to Tokyo in Japan with my friend. It's very exciting here. I'm going to see Tokyo tower. I'm going to photograph Tokyo tower.I want to eat milk pudding and Dango.I'm looking forward to visiting Disneyland.

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Dear mom

Today,I came to Rome in Italy with my friend.We visited the Colosseum and Trevi Fountain.After that we,had fun on a Kayaking tour.We also ate Italian carbonara, and it was delicious.I'm looking forward to eating carbonara.I'm excited about this trip

Love Jung Hoon

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Hi, Kim min

I am in Japan now.

I’m going to Shibuya soon.

I plan to watch the Yoyogi Park.

I’m going to visit the Mugiwara Store.

I’m going to eat Ramen.

I’m looking forward to watching the Yoyogi Park because I like walk.

Bye.

From Jang sieun

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Dear Mom,

Today My sister and I came to Skytree in Tokyo.

We're going to visit sumida Aquarium, and we're going to take a picture in that place.

Now, I'm playing water activity.

I'm going to go Pork cutlet shop. and I'm eating Pork cutlet.

I'm looking forward to eating Pork cutlet.

Love,

Yuri

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Hi Min,

I am in Tokyo Japan with Min.

I am going to see Disneyland.

I enjoy riding roller coasters.

I tried sushi, and it was delicious.

I am looking forward to eating more sushi.

Bye

Kimmin

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Hello, everyone! Today, I'll take about my trip to Moscow,Russia.

I came to here with my friends

Russia is very big.

We are going to visit Red Square.

Red Square is very big and beautiful.

We will see an opera at the Bolshoi Theater.

The opera is fun and beautiful.

I want to eat shashlik.

After dinner, we will visit Saint Basil's Cathedral.

for listening

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Hi sunjae

Yesterday, my friends and I came to Moscow in Russia.

Russia is very big.

We're going to visit the Red Square.

The Red Square is very beautiful and big.

And we're going see an opera in the Bolshoi theater.

The Opera is very fun and beautiful.

I want to eat a shashlik.

after dinner we looking forward to visiting the Saint Basil's Cathedral.

Your friend,

Minseung

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Dear Mom and Dad,

I went to the Philippines in El Nido with my friend Minchae.

I am going to go to Secret Lagoon.

I am going to ride a kayak.

I want to eat alimango.

I am learning new words about El Nido.

I am going to have a fun time.

Goodbye,

From. Yulhee

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Dear mom and Dad

I’m going to San Francisco in the United States with my friend.

Yesterday, we watched the sunset by the bridge and took many pictures. The view was very beautiful.

I will take a long bus ride, and it should be comfortable. I plan to sleep during the trip so I won’t be tired when we arrive.

I want to visit a famous restaurant here. I’m looking forward to enjoying a nice meal with my friend. I really want to try clam chowder, which is popular in San Francisco.

Tomorrow, we will see the Golden Gate Bridge and maybe explore some local museums.

I’m excited to tell you all about my trip when I get back.

See you tomorrow

KimGiyeon

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Hi my friend,

I came to Dotonbori in Osaka, Japan with my family.

I saw the Glico sign and took a picture.

I went on a cruise on the Dotonbori River and ate takoyaki, a famous food in Dotonbori.

It was so fun, and I'm going to tell you more next time.

I’m looking forward to sharing more with you!

Your friend,

Minseo

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Hi, my friend k.j.y

I came to Madrid in Spain with my family.

I'm going to watch a soccer game.

I will take a rest in Plaza Mayor.

I want to eat paella, because it is a famous Spanish food.

I'm looking forward to watching a soccer game.

See you soon

woobin

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Hi Hyun Soo,

I traveled to Athens, Greece with my family last week.

Yesterday, I visited the Temple of Parthenon. It was very beautiful and old. I enjoyed learning about its history.

Today, I am going to the carnival with my family. It should be very fun because there will be games.

I want to eat souvlaki at the carnival. It is tasty and healthy.

I am looking forward to tomorrow.

See you soon!

Hae kang

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Hi mom,

I am in Ronda in Spain. I can see the nice scenery, and I’m going to take a walk. I’m going to eat churros because they are yummy.

I’m looking forward to the trip.

LOVE

Siyoon

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Hi my friend

I came to OsakaDotonbori in Japan with my family

I saw the Glico sign and took a picture

I went on a cruise on the Dotonbori River and I ate takoyaki the famous food of Dotonbori

I'm going to tell you more next time because it was so fun

I'm looking forward to sharing more with you!

Your friend Minseo

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1) 문법·철자

첫 문장: "Hi,my friend k.j.y" → 인사 후에 쉼표(,) 뒤에 띄어쓰기가 필요해요. → Hi, my friend k.j.y

두 번째 문장: "I came to Madrid in Spain with my" → 마지막이 끊겨 있어요. 누구랑 왔는지(ex. family, friends) 끝까지 써야 완전한 문장이 됩니다.

마지막 이름: "woobin" → 영어 편지에서는 보통 첫 글자를 대문자로 쓰는 게 자연스러워요 → Woobin

2) 글 구조 (시작-중간-끝)

시작: 인사와 받는 사람이 잘 들어가 있어요 👍

중간: 나라, 도시, 랜드마크, 할 거리, 먹거리가 잘 나왔어요.

끝: "See you"로 마무리된 것도 자연스러워요. 다만 끝인사 전에 한 문장 정도 정리하는 말을 넣으면 글이 더 풍성해집니다. (예: "It will be a great trip.")

3) 표현 (부자연스럽거나 반복된 부분)

"I'm going to"가 두 번 반복됨 → 대신 쓸 수 있는 표현:

"I plan to..."

"I will..."

"I want to eat" → 조금 단순해 보여요. 대신:

"I’d like to try..."

"I’m excited to eat..."

4) 체크리스트

나라, 도시, 랜드마크 ✅ (Spain, Madrid, Plaza Mayor)

볼거리 ✅ (soccer game)

할거리 ✅ (watch a game, rest in plaza)

먹거리 ✅ (paella)

'I'm going to' ✅ (두 번 있음)

'I'm looking forward to' ✅ (있음)

and, but, because, so ❌ → 하나 추가하세요. (예: "I want to eat paella and tapas.")

첫인사, 끝인사, 받는사람, 보내는 사람 ✅

✅ 결론: 전반적으로 구조가 잘 잡혀 있고, 내용도 충실합니다.

보완하면 좋은 점은 (1) 미완성 문장 마무리하기, (2) 연결어 and/but/so 하나 추가하기, (3) 반복되는 표현 바꿔 쓰기예요.️

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Hi, Mom!

I am in Osaka, Japan. I am looking at Osaka Castle and shopping.

I will go to Dotonbori to enjoy sushi.

I am looking forward to try Universal Studios.

Goodbye, Mom!

— Chae Yeon —

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Hi Mom,

I came to Rome in Italy.

First, I’m going to see pictures in Vatican City.

I especially want to see The Creation, because it is a world-famous painting.

After that, I’m going to walk in the gardens in Vatican City.

I’m looking forward to tasting many kinds of gelato.

– From Jjwoong –

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Dear Mom and Dad,

I went to the Philippines in El Nido with my friend Minchae.

I am going to go to Secret Lagoon.

I am going to ride a kayak.

I want to eat alimango.

I am learning new words about El Nido.

I am going to have a fun time.

Goodbye,

From. Yulhee

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Hi SJ I came to Paris in France with my SJ.

I'm going to watch Eiffel Tower.

I will ride a bike.

I want to eat Macaron because it tastes good.

I'm looking forward to going to France.

See you soon.

From Woohyun

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Hi,my friend k.j.y

I came to Madrid in Spain with my family.

I'm going to watch a soccer game.

I'm going to take a rest in Plaza Mayor.

I want to eat paella

I'm looking forward to watching a soccer game.

See you

Woobin

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Hi Moon Jung hoon,

I came to Rome in Italy with my family.

I'm going to see the Trevi Fountain, and I will throw coins to make a wish.

I also want to visit the Colosseum because it is very famous.

I want to try Roman pizza, and I'm looking forward to tasting it.

Your friend,

Yang Ye jun

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Hello everyone

l'll talk about my trip to Japan

I have come to Tokyo, Japan with my friend Kimmin.

I plan to visit Tokyo Tower because it is very beautiful.

I am going to go to Disneyland, and I’m excited about all the fun things we’ll do there.

I would love to try sushi since it is a traditional food in Japan.

I’m really looking forward to exploring Tokyo and trying new experiences.

That's all Thankyou for listening

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Hi,Mom

I am in Osaka,Japan look at the Osaka Castle and go shopping.

I'm going to Dotonbori enjoy sushi.

I'm looking forward to trying universal studios

Goodbye mom -chae yeon-

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Hi Bunnybunny,

I went to Tokyo in Japan with my friend.

I'm going to visit Tokyo Tower.

We played arcade games at Tokyo Tower and made ramen.

I'm looking forward to seeing the beautiful view.

Bye,

Heemin

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Hi Dongmin,

I came to Naples in Italy with my mom. I’m planning to visit the volcano site of Pompeii and see the old city. I’m also going to explore underground Naples. And I will go to a pizzeria and eat pizza. I’m looking forward to going on this trip because Naples is very famous.

Bye,bye Dongmin.

From Sunjae

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Hello everyone I'm DongMin

I am in Kyoto, Japan with my family. I am going to visit Kinkakuji Temple and I want to see Mount Fuji. I am going to eat sushi and udon. I’m looking forward to this trip.

See you soon!

Your friend,

DongMin

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Hi, Min

I am in Tokyo in Japan with my Min.

I am going to see Disneyland.

I enjoy riding a roller coaster.

I went to try sushi.

I am looking forward to eating sushi.

Kimmin.

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Dear SJ

Hi SJ I came to Paris in France with my SJ.

I'm going to watch Eiffel tower.

I will ride a bike.

I want to eat Macaron because it tastes good.

I'm looking forward to going to france.

Thank you .

By. Woohyun

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Dear Seunghyeon Lee,

I arrived in Rome, Italy.

I saw the Travi Fountain, and I’m going to see a beautiful church.

Next, I’m going to walk around the city of Rome.

Maybe I’ll eat Margherita pizza.

After that, I’m looking forward to attending missa.

See you later, my friend!

From Joohan Yi

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Hi Bunnybunny.

I went to Tokyo in Japan with my friend.

I'm going to visit Tokyo tower.

We play arcade games at Tokyo tower and made ramen.

I'm looking forward to seeing a beautiful view.

Bye.

Heemin

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Dear Mom

I am in Paris with Dad.

We will visit the Louvre Museum and the Eiffel Tower.

I'm very happy.

I want to swim a lot.

We will eat Escargot and Ratatouille.

Paris is nice and fun city!

I like Paris a lot.

Bye, Mom

From, Do Gahyeon

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Hi, Kimbokyung.
I am in Tokyo, Japan with Kim Yeh Hu.
We saw the Skytree.
We went shopping and to the aquarium.
We are going to eat hotpot at Kumachan Onsen.
I am looking forward to eating the hotpot there.
Best wishes,
Lee Hae Ju

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Hi, Kim min

I am in Japan now.

I’m going to Shibuya soon.

I plan to watch a Yoyogi Park.

I’m going to visit the Mugiwara Store.

I’m going to eat Ramen.

I’m looking forward to watch a Yoyogi Park because i like work.

Bye.

From Jang sieun

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Hello, Mom.

Now, I'm staying in Paris in France with my sister. I'm going to see the Eiffel Tower. I also plan to visit the Louvre Museum. And I will enjoy the exhibitions there. I want to try authentic macarons so I will try them. I'm looking forward to seeing the Eiffel Tower.

Love,

Ayoung.

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Hi i'm kim ji won

I came go in to Washington D.C. with my friend.

I want to see the city Experience

I want to visit the Lincoln Museum.

I like Coke and fast food.

I am excited!

That's all

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Hi seonjae,

I’m in Kyoto, Japan now with my family.

I’m going to visit the Kinkakuji Temple, and I want to climb Mount Fuji because it is the highest mountain in Japan.

I would like to eat sushi and udon, and I plan to try some Japanese snacks too.

I’m looking forward to this trip because everything is so exciting.

see you soon!

Your friend,

DongMin

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Hi,family, friend

I came to Honolulu in Hawaii with my family

I'm going to visit Waikiki Beach

I'm playing swimming, because I like ocean

I want to eat Udon because I look Waikiki Beach is good for the soul

I'm looking forward to swimming

Good-bye sent Seung Hyun Lee

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Dear my brother

I am in Paris in France with my brother

I am going to see The Eiffel Tower

because it is famous

I going to visit a Arc de Triomphe

I want to eat macaroon

I am looking forward to seeing

The Eiffel Tower

Bye

Your brother

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Hi Soyeon,

I traveled to Sapporo in Japan with my family. We watched an ice festival and we are going to make snowmen. I want to eat sushi. I’m looking forward to seeing the ice festival.

Your friend,

Oreum

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Dear Mom

I came to Paris in France with my dad!

We are going to visit the Louvre Museum and the Eiffel Tower.

I'm going to swimming pool.

I'm looking forward to swimming!

We are going to try Escargot and Ratatouille.

I like Paris because it is beautiful.

Bye Mom

From, Do Gahyeon

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Dear mom

Today,I came to Rome in Italy with my friend.We visited the Colosseum and Trevi Fountain.After that we,had fun on a Kayaking tour. We also ate Italian carbonara,and it was delicious.I'm looking forward to eating carbonara.I'm so excited about this trip

Love,Jung Hoon

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I went to pilipines in El Nidon with my friend minchae

I am going to go secret Lagoon. I went to see the beautiful scenery

I am going to ride a kayak

I want to eat Alimao

I am looking for word to El Nidon

goodbye

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hi,mom

I cometo Roma in italy

First I' m going to watch pictures of in vatican city.

most to "the creation" raneun watch pictures.

because I want to see this painting because it is a world famous painting

After, I'm going to walk fiardin in vaticanicity

I'm looking forword mangogelato to taste

- from jjwoong-

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ChatGPT의 말:

좋은 시도예요 👍 글을 직접 고쳐주지는 않고, 요청하신 대로 힌트만 드릴게요!

1) 문법·철자 힌트

대문자: 나라 이름(예: Japan), 도시 이름(예: Tokyo), 랜드마크 이름(예: Tokyo Tower)은 항상 첫 글자를 대문자로 써야 해요.

시제 확인: "We play aquarium" → 과거에 한 일이니까 시제를 확인해야 해요.

관사/어휘 확인: "a Tokyo tower" → 특정 장소이니까 관사 사용을 다시 생각해 보세요.

어휘 선택: "play aquarium"은 어색하니, 다른 동사를 떠올려 보세요(예: visit, go to, see).

2) 글 구조 힌트

시작: 인사와 여행지를 밝히는 부분이 있어요 → 좋음!

중간: 할 일, 본 것, 먹은 것 등이 짧게 나와 있어요 → 조금 더 자세히 쓰면 좋아요.

끝: "Bye"로 끝냈지만, 조금 더 정리된 마무리 문장이 있으면 더 자연스러워요.

3) 표현 반복 힌트

"I'm going to"는 잘 들어갔어요.

"visit" 같은 표현이 반복될 수 있으니, 대신 쓸 수 있는 간단한 표현:

go to

see

check out

4) 체크리스트 확인

나라, 도시, 랜드마크 → 있음 (Japan, Tokyo, Tokyo Tower ✅)

볼거리 → 있음 (aquarium, Tokyo Tower ✅)

할거리 → 있음 (made ramen ✅)

먹거리 → 있음 (ramen ✅)

"I'm going to" → 있음 (✅)

"I'm looking forward to" → 있음 (✅)

and/but/because/so → 있음

첫인사, 끝인사, 받는사람, 보내는사람 → 있음 (Hi ~ / Bye ~ / Bunnybunny / Heemin ✅)

👉 정리:

시제, 대문자, 관사 부분을 고치면 더 좋아져요.

끝인사에 조금 더 따뜻한 마무리 문장을 넣으면 완벽해요.

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나의 말:

내가 쓴 영어 글을 붙여넣을게.

직접 고치지 말고, 힌트만 주세요.

1) 문법·철자: 틀린 부분이 있으면 어떤 점을 고쳐야 하는지 힌트 주세요. (예: 시제 확인, 복수형 확인)

2) 글 구조: 시작-중간-끝이 잘 되어 있는지 알려주고, 부족한 부분이 있으면 힌트 주세요.

3) 표현: 같은 표현을 너무 반복했다면, 대신 쓸 수 있는 간단한 표현을 2~3개 알려 주세요.

4) 체크리스트: 내 글에 아래 항목이 다 들어갔는지 확인해 주세요. 빠진 게 있으면 "○○ 부분을 추가하세요"라고 힌트 주세요.

- 나라, 도시, 랜드마크

- 볼거리

- 할거리

- 먹거리

- 'I'm going to' 1번 이상

- 'I'm looking forward to' 1번 이상

-and, but, because, so 중 한개 이상

-첫인사,끝인사,받는사람,보내는 사람

ChatGPT의 말:

네! 영어 글을 붙여넣어 주세요. 힌트 중심으로 꼼꼼히 살펴볼게요.

나의 말:

Dear my brother

Now, I am Paris in France with my brother

I am going to see The Eiffel Tower

I am going to visit a Arc de Triorphe

I want to eat macaroon

I am especially looking forward to see The Eiffel Tower

Bye, your brother

ChatGPT의 말:

좋아요! 힌트로 하나씩 알려드릴게요.

1) 문법·철자 힌트

전치사/시제: "I am Paris" → "I am in Paris" (위치는 전치사 in 필요)

관사: "a Arc de Triorphe" → "an Arc de Triomphe" (첫 글자가 모음이라 an, 그리고 철자 확인)

동사 형태: "looking forward to see" → "looking forward to seeing" (to 뒤에는 동명사)

복수형·명사: "macaroon" → "macarons" (복수형 확인, 그리고 'macaroon'은 코코넛 과자, 프랑스 과자는 'macaron')

2) 글 구조 힌트

글이 짧고 문장들이 단순히 나열된 느낌이에요.

인사말과 마무리가 있지만 중간 내용이 연결되지 않고 끊겨서 좀 더 자연스러운 흐름이 필요해요.

예를 들어, "I am in Paris with my brother. We are going to see famous landmarks." 같은 연결 문장 추가해 보세요.

3) 표현 힌트

'I am going to'가 반복되었어요.

대신 쓸 수 있는 표현:

"I plan to…"

"I will…"

"My plan is to…"

4) 체크리스트

나라: 있음 (France)

도시: 있음 (Paris)

랜드마크: 있음 (Eiffel Tower, Arc de Triomphe)

볼거리: 있음 (랜드마크들)

할거리: 있음 ("see", "visit")

먹거리: 있음 (macarons)

'I'm going to': 있음

'I'm looking forward to': 있음

and, but, because, so 중 하나: 없음 → 문장 연결할 때 꼭 넣어보세요!

첫인사, 끝인사, 받는 사람, 보내는 사람: 있음 (Dear my brother / Bye, your brother)

필요하면 고쳐볼 문장 예시도 줄 수 있어요! 어떻게 할까요?

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1) 문법·철자

Da nong → 도시 이름 철자 확인하세요. (대문자·소문자, 실제 영어 표기 확인 필요)

I want to see → 미래 계획이라면 시제를 조정하는 게 좋습니다.

I enjoyed making bread → 시제가 "과거"인데, 한국어 해석은 "앞으로 할 일"이라 맞지 않습니다. (시제 확인)

Let's order fried chicken → 영어는 "지금 같이 하자" 의미인데, 한국어 해석은 "과거 시제"라 불일치합니다. (시제 확인)

2) 글 구조

문장이 따로따로라서 "시작–중간–끝" 흐름이 부족합니다.

👉 힌트: "인사 → 여행 계획 설명(볼거리·할거리·먹거리) → 기대 표현 → 끝 인사" 순서로 정리해보세요.

3) 표현

"I want to" 같은 단순 표현이 반복될 수 있습니다.

👉 대신 쓸 수 있는 표현 예시:

I plan to…

I would like to…

I’m excited to…

4) 체크리스트

나라, 도시, 랜드마크: ❌ (도시만 나옴, 나라와 랜드마크 추가 필요)

볼거리: ❌ (없음)

할거리: ⭕ (bread 만들기, chicken 먹기 비슷하게 표현됨)

먹거리: ⭕ (bread, fried chicken 언급)

"I'm going to" 1번 이상: ❌

"I'm looking forward to" 1번 이상: ❌

and, but, because, so: ❌

첫인사, 끝인사, 받는사람, 보내는사람: ❌

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Hi Hyun Soo

I traveled to Athens in Greece with my family.

Yesterday, I visited the Temple of Parthenon. It's very beautiful. I enjoy learning about history

And I'm going to carnival. This should be interesting. Because will be game.

I want to eat souvlaki. It's very delicious and healthy.

I'm looking forward to tomorrow.

See you soon

Hae Kang

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1) 문법·철자 힌트

"I looking forward" → 시제/형태 확인 필요 → "be 동사 + looking forward" 형태가 되어야 해요.

"Piazza di Trevi" → 원래는 "Trevi Fountain"이라고 더 많이 불려요. 이름 확인하면 좋아요.

"I will throw coins" → 다른 문장과 시제가 잘 맞는지 점검해 보세요. (I'm going to / I will 혼용 확인 필요)

2) 글 구조 힌트

시작(인사) → 중간(여행 소개, 하고 싶은 것) → 끝(마무리 인사) 구조는 있습니다.

하지만 도시 소개(왜 왔는지, 어떤 분위기인지) 한두 문장이 있으면 더 자연스러워요.

끝인사에서 받는 사람 이름을 다시 언급하면 정리가 더 잘 됩니다.

3) 표현 반복 힌트

"I want to eat pizza" / "I looking forward to eating pizza" → eat pizza 반복됨.

대신: "try pizza," "taste pizza," "enjoy pizza"

"I came to Rome" / "I'm going to see" → 시작 다양화 가능

대신: "I arrived in Rome," "I’m visiting Rome," "I plan to see"

4) 체크리스트 힌트

[✔] 나라, 도시, 랜드마크: Italy, Rome, Trevi Fountain 있음

[△] 볼거리: Trevi Fountain만 있음 → 다른 랜드마크(Colosseum 등)도 살짝 언급해도 좋아요

[✔] 할거리: 동전 던지기 있음

[✔] 먹거리: 피자 있음

[✔] 'I'm going to' 있음

[△] 'I'm looking forward to' 있음 (형태만 고치면 됨)

[✘] and, but, because, so → 없음 → 문장 연결할 때 하나 넣으세요

[△] 첫인사 있음

[✘] 끝인사 있음, 하지만 받는 사람 이름 빠짐 → "Bye, Moon Jung hoon" 같은 마무리 필요

[✔] 보내는 사람 있음

👉 정리하면:

문법: "I looking forward" → "I'm looking forward"로 형태 확인

구조: 중간에 도시 소개 한 문장, 끝에 받는 사람 이름 추가

표현: eat pizza 반복 → try/taste/enjoy pizza로 바꿀 수 있음

체크리스트: and/but/so/because 하나 추가, 볼거리 하나 더 추가

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좋은 시도예요 👍 지금 쓴 글을 기준으로

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좋은 시도예요 👍 지금 쓴 글을 기준으로 요청하신 4가지 기준에 맞춰 피드백 드릴게요.

1) 문법·철자 체크

"I came to Ronda in spain"

Spain은 대문자로 시작해야 합니다.

여행 계획이므로 I’m going to Ronda in Spain이 더 자연스럽습니다.

"Look at the scenery"

철자: scenery가 맞습니다. (sce nery → scenery)

"I’m going to take a walk"

잘 썼습니다 👍 (미래 계획 → 맞음).

"I want to eat churros"

맞습니다. (다만, 통일성 있게 “I’m going to eat churros”라고 해도 좋아요).

"I’m looking for forward to scenery"

표현 오류: look forward to + 명사/동명사가 맞습니다.

고치기: I’m looking forward to the scenery

2) 글 구조 체크

시작: 인사 + 도착 표현 있음 (Hi mom, I came to Ronda in Spain).

중간: 볼거리 / 할거리 / 먹거리 나열되어 있음 → 구조 OK.

끝: 끝인사(예: See you soon, Love…)와 보내는 사람 이름이 없음 → 추가 필요.

3) 표현 반복 대체어

"I’m going to" → I plan to / I will / I want to

"I want to" → I’d like to / I’d love to / I feel like

"I’m looking forward to" → I can’t wait to / I’m excited about

4) 체크리스트 확인

✅ 나라, 도시, 랜드마크 → 있음 (Spain, Ronda)
✅ 볼거리 → 있음 (scenery)
✅ 할거리 → 있음 (take a walk)
✅ 먹거리 → 있음 (churros)
✅ I'm going to → 있음
✅ I'm looking forward to → 있음
✅ and/but/because/so 중 → ❌ 없음 (추가해야 함)
✅ 첫인사, 끝인사, 받는사람, 보내는사람 → 시작은 있음, 끝인사·보내는사람 없음

👉 따라서:

and/but/because/so 중 하나 넣기

끝인사 + 보내는 사람 이름 추가하기

📌 힌트 예시로 문장 보완하면 이렇게 돼요:

Hi mom,
I’m going to Ronda in Spain. I want to look at the scenery, and I’m going to take a walk. I’m going to eat churros because they are very delicious. I’m looking forward to the scenery.
See you soon.
From, [Your Name]

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