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Olá, Preciso que corrija alguns pontos na sua short history.
- Sugiro que coloque um título para sua Historia no inicio da sua página
- Sinto falta da voz passiva no seu texto. Peco que reveja e insira essa estrutura na partes que forem necessárias.
- Sugiro que reestruture seu mural, talvez escolher uma outro formato.
Atribuirei a nota : 5,00
Obs: Sua nota pode mudar se fizer as alteracoes sugeridas até a data 24/10.
Cheers!

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On a trip was a monkey and a fox.

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The non-surprising fox (with his selfishness) was doing very well during this trip, while the poor monkey carried things for them to keep.

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Until at some point in the story the monkey wondered why he carried things on his own

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At this moment a dispute began, dispute to see who would be more noble ...
The fox exposed its beauty as an argument, while the monkey used its "past" to give it power, saying that its ancestors were gods.

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The monkey called itself superior, for its interior was noble, while the fox possessed a superficial beauty.

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But at a certain moment they arrived in a kind of cemetery with several monuments of gods, who put the monkey in its place, saying that it would not be possible to know if the gods were really ancestors of him, because all were dead, and dead do not speak.

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Moral of the story: NOT THE EVIL THAT LAST FOREVER, AND NOR WELL THAT NEVER ENDED.