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it makes it feel a lot more fun and sometimes even humorous

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the tone changes to mad/sad and then it gets intresting

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The tone changed from a smart to serious tone to being a happy tone

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It changes it by being normal and then once we add some Figurative Language it changed the mood

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It changes the tone by adding a fun twist to a dull of serious story or article.

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The language impact affects the tone because there are different emotions when it comes to writing. What I am saying is that sometime the language can be angry or sad or even melancholy. So there is a impact.

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I think before I added the figurative language, the text was formal and serious. Adding the figurative language made the text more interesting to read. It gave the text a lighter tone.

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The change of language impacts the tone by making it more friendly, and makes the tone sound much more funny, interesting, capturing and generally happy.

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The changes of language impact the tone because it’s makes it more serious to making to more exciting and happy

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Adding figurative language can make your writing have more feelings or change the mood in your writing.

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Adding figurative language make the writing more happy.

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The toned changed from a serious tone to a fun tone with a lots of figurative language

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The simile and hyperbole added to the text changed the tone from serious to more of a successful tone.

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When I made changes in the paragraph it made it more chill & relaxed, rather than serious. I did this by adding a little laugh during the video.

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The tone changed from a regular tone to a more sarcastic tone to emphasize how earth friendly Doe is.

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the tone changed from a serious tone to a smart tone.

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The tone changed from a serious tone to a more playful tone.

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The language changed it from a serious confusing tone to a fun playful tone

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The tone was changed from a serious not funny tone, to a text full of figurative language

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The tone changed from a serious tone to a funny and less serious because of the use of hyperboles.

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The language change makes it less serious seeming. Before it was all just talking and stuff happening and now its like "He was as serious as a chipmunk"(I don't know what that means, I made it up on the spot), which makes it funnier.

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It impacts it because if you use a tone, "like good on you mister", is more sarcastic, while "good on you mister!"

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The tone changed from an informal tone to a more playful tone because I added similes and metaphors that made it a little more fun.

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The added figurative language turned the tone from a straight serious tone to a serious yet more meaningful and impactful meaning.

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The tone changed from serious to a more playful tone because of all the hyperboles and other figurative language.

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The tone didn't really change that much for me but it showed how hard Kelvin worked.

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the tone went from boring and plain, to fun and enjoyable to read

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The tone changed because it gives the story a more understandable text.

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The tone changed because it was a powerful and serious text and I made it intresting and playful

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The tone changes the text because it goes from a informal tone, to a more positive, more happy tone.

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The tone changes the text by making it more exiting and interesting.

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the tone of the paragraph wen from serious to casual or playful depending how you look at it

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the tone changed from a serious and boring into a more interesting and funny way of tone spoken

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The tone changed from casual to impressed.

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The tone changed from a serious and boring tone to a more casual and interesting tone because I added some hyperbole and similes to make it less realistic.

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The language makes it go from a serious tone to a more unformal tone, this is because the language is not s descriptive.

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The tone changed from a very serious non-humorous text to a text full of hyperbole and other pieces of figurative language.

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The tone changes from using a regular sentence to a more relatable sentence.

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The tone changed from a fun, happy tone to a serouis tone.

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The tone changed it to a comparison of the person and a radio station. It changed because I used a simile for one of them and it compared the person and his friends as if they were working in a radio station.

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The tone changed from telling about the generator to being descriptive of how it was made.

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The tone of my rewrite changed the passage by making it more energetic and funny/happy.

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The tone changed from a very Smart or serous tone to being very happy of a tone.

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the tone changes the text because it tells when the author is being playfull or serious

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The tone changed by making it normal and formal to more poetic.

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It shows how the author was feeling while writing a text.

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it changed the mood because it changed how nothing else would have he was able to make history unlike anyone else could

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Me and Giselle N put a simile which started out serious than got to the hooking point.

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The tone started serious but when me and Emilee added similes it got more interesting

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The tone changed because it was serious and formal but then we added figuritive lanuage and it made it happy and adds expression

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it can show how simple something is or if something is a big deal

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The tone changed because it made readers know that DJ was really smart and intelligent.

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before the tone was serious then when I added the figurative language the text got more happy and funny

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The tone impacts on the rewrite because it adds more understandment onto what the writer said

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When I added my figurative language it made the tome of the narrator more determined.

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the tone changes by changing to more fun tone . i chose simile because it imagines stuff.

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The tone change from a happy tone to like a serious or a smart tone.

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The tone changed from a serious tone to a playful tone because we used an onomatopoeia to make sounds.

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The tone changed from a formal tone to a more casual tone. This is because I chose to use an idiom to show just how difficult it was to find the right electronics.

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The tone changed from a formal tone to a more casual tone. This is because I chose to use an idiom to show just how difficult it was to find the right electronics.