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Exercise 1

1. Summary always contains only the key information which you want to use rather than every detail.

2. Paraphrasing can let tutor know whether the student understand the ideas exactly.

Exercise 3

the grammar, structure and vocabulary in the summary is not too similar to the original.

Exercise 4

1. Sentence A: sentence structure, synonym

Sentence B: synonym

Sentence C: order, sentence structure, synonym and antonym

2. Sentence D: noun phrase structure, synonym

Sentence E: active voice—> passive voice, synonym

3. Sentence F: synonym

Sentence G: active—> passive

Sentence H: sentence structure, passive voice—> x

Exercise 5

1. In some affected areas, the usage of nets showed an increase from 3% in 2001 to 50% in 2011, but the incidence of fatal malaria decreased by 25% during this period.

2. At the end, widespread has hampered economic development and companies are unwilling to invest in countries in which ill health among worker always.

3. A final point is the impact that malaria has on physical labour. It is difficult for people who have suffered from malaria to do such work as the symptoms of this disease often longer for many years.

Exercise 6

1. In many countries, people has obtained benefits from health-education programs, especially in some areas lack economy and education

2. In some poor regions, expensive treatment lead to high disease rates.

3. In some place in Nigeria, mortality from diarrhea decreased by 82% because the usage of rehydration therapy by local doctors rather than complicated instruments or unaffordable medicine.

4. In developing countries, healthcare budges have soared remarkable attributing to the increasing population and the number of the patient.

Exercise 7

Summary is more shorter than the source text. And summary remove the examples and remain the key point only.

Exercise 10

Language is the main means of communication. Thus, the people speaking the same language would have a better relationship among culture, states and economy.

Exercise 11

More people hold the view that if you want to succeed in today’s competition is mainly through improving the service quality and customer satisfaction.

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1.summary just includes the key information of the essay not the detailed things.

2.Paraphrasing is restatement of the sentence in another way.

E-3
The meaning of the other sentences is different from the original sentence.

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1. “Both2001 and 2011, the use of nets in affected areas increase from 3 percent to 50 percent,during which the number of fatal malaria cases decreased by 25 percent.”

2. “At last , widespread malaria affected all areas of economic increase. Businesses are less unlikely to invest in countries whose employees are likely to be sick.”

3. “What is more, the symptoms of malaria often persist for years and it will do bring effects on peoples life and have a work for a long period of time after recovery.

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1.In many countries , it is beneficial for the people from health-education programs.,especially in some regions lacking of economy and education.

E-6
The summary leave out some key information

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In retailing, even huge hyperstores no longer have the advantage of large price differentials.  Stores have begun to concentrate on other mechanisms for achieving points of difference.  One of the strategic routes seen as an answer by many academics and practitioners has been an increased concentration on customer satisfaction, courting the customer through a focus on service quality.  If successfully applied, the approach has very frequently demonstrated improved profits, increased market share and customer loyalty.  On the other hand poor service has been identified as the primary reason why customers switch to competitors.

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Lots of different languages can be the barrier of understanding among people, so people want a universal language which is simple and obvious. If people spoke the same language, the relationship and ties among countries will be also enhanced.

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The exact length of the summary compared to the original text will depend on the purpose you need it for and how much space you have to write.

For example, a summary could be used as a short citation in an essay or you could even be required to summarise a long text such as a journal article as part of a university assignment. In this case, the summary could run over a few pages.

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1.People were told how to prevent CVD and AIDS in a lot of countries which was proved successfuly.

2.Methods are more realistic because people cannot afford the expense of the treatment in some extremely poor areas. Furthermore, many communicable diseases can be avoided through clean water and sanitation in some areas.

3. one of places in Nigeria, medical people used oral rehydration therapy

Which resulted the death rate form diarrhea dropping by 82.percent. it is a easy way which does not need more tools or rare drugs.

1.    people are surviving into their eighties and nineties. Since older people tend to require the services of the healthcare system more often than the young, healthcare spending has increased.

Healthcare cost is increasing in developed countries because of people’ longevity. These old people are more likely to use the medical services.

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Exercise 7
The summary contains some key information, while the source text is more detailed one and includes an explanation to the main idea. Both of the two convey a same idea, but the summary might be less specific and detailed, while in source text, lots of examples and explanations are provided to support the main idea.
Exercise 10
Language is the main idea of communication among people, which leads to a better development both in culture and economic, once the barriers among language are solved.

Exercise 11
More people hold the view that to succeed in today's competition is mainly through improving service quality and customer satisfactions, rather than pricing advantages

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1. Usually the main idea and some important supporting ideas should be included in the summary, and some detailed information is suggested to ignore.
2. In this way, you can explain the text with you own word and expressions, which means that you actually understand it.

Exercise 3
a. In this sentence, the grammar, sentence structure and vocabulary are quite different to the original one.
b. The main idea remains the same, but some sentence structures and nearly all the words has been changed compared with the formal one.
c. Most of the words remain the same, and the grammar and sentence structures also have no great changes.

Exercise 4
Text 1
A: the order of information; the sentence structure; synonym.
B: synonym added.
C: the order of information; the sentence structure; synonym added.
Text 2
A: noun phrase changed; synonym been used.
B: active voice changed into passive voice.
Text 3
F: synonym; order of words.
G: order of words.
H: order of words; passive voice into active voice; sentence structure; synonym.

Exercise 5
1.The use of nets in affected areas roses from 3% to 50% during 2001-2011, while the number of fatal malaria cases dropped by 25%.
2. Ultimately, widespread malaria depresses all areas of economic development, because business are unlikely to invest in countries where employees are likely to become ill.
3. What's more, the sympotoms of malaria usually linger for years, which result in physical labour difficult long after the patient has recovered.

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1.Because of the nets used increasing from 3 percent to 50 percent, people infected by deadly malaria during 2001 and 2011 reduced by 25 percent.

2.Companies are not willing to give their money to countries in which people are easily ill because malaria spread widely. As a result,  this illness impede the economy.

3.What’s more important, people infected by malaria  would not be cured for years, even if they were cured, it is hard for them to do physical labor.

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1.    Techniques include: alter information order in sentences; transform sentence structure; restructuring noun phrases; switch between the active and passive voice.

2.    Techniques include: alter information order in sentences;transform sentence structure; restructuring noun phrases; switch between the active and passive voice; modify word forms.

3.    Techniques include: alter information order in sentences;transform sentence structure; restructuring noun phrases; switch between the active and passive voice; modify word forms; using synonyms and antonyms.

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a.    the grammar, structure and vocabulary in the summary is not too similar to the original.

b.     The most important ideas are shown and the sentence structure is also different from the original.

c.     he meaning of the key ideas in the summary are the same as they were in the source text.

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1.    The writer should totally understand the main ideas of the original passage, then use different words to rewrite the most important meaning while ignoring the detailed information.

2.    Because paraphrasing can show others that you actually understand what the original text is.

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[A]-transforming sentence structure;

[B]-using synonym ;

[C]-altering information order in paragraphs and sentences ;

[D]-restructuring noun phrases ;

[E]-using synonym;

[F]-using synonym;

[G]- modifying word forms;

[H]-switching between the active and passive voice.

5.1-There was a decline of 25% in the amount of deadly malaria cases from 2001 to 2011, because nets utilized in infectious region increased from 3% to 50% .

5.2-Ultimately,  deep economic recession because of the prevalence of malaria might be a result of that companies and enterprises tend to fund in nations where workers are unlikely to be affected.

5.3-In addition, until the sick has recovered , the symptoms of malaria will be gone and it will be more easier form them to make physical labor long.

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Exercise 1
1. A summary should include main ideas, very small details can be ignored.
2. Paraphrasing can prove how we understand the idea.

Exercise 3
The words have been changed but the the sentence structure and grammar are almost the same as the original. As for choice C, most of the words are still the same and the grammar are still the same.

Exercise 4
A. Altering information order in paragraphs and sentences.
B. Using synonyms.
C. Rearranging word order in sentence, restructuring noun phrases.
D. Restructuring noun phrases
E. Switching between the active and passive voice.
F. Using synonyms/altering information order in paragraphs and sentences.
G. Altering information order in paragraphs and sentences/modifying word forms
H. Switching between the active and passive voice/transforming sentence structure/using synonyms.

Exercise 5
1.In some affected areas, the usage of nets appeared to increase from 3% in 2001 to 50%in 2011, but the incidence of fatal malaria decreased by 25% during this decade.
2. Finally, the economic development of all regions has been discouraged by the spread of malaria. This is because workers in the countries may not have chances to get investments if they get affected by the disease.
3. Moreover, the symptoms of malaria usually persist for years, and it will definitely have effects on peoples life and works even for a long period of time after recovery.

Exercise 6
1. In many countries, people already have benefits from health-education programs, especially in some regions lack economy and education.
2. In some poor regions, the result of expensive treatment is high diseases rates.
3. In some place in Nigera, mortality from diarrhea decreased by 82% because the usage of rehydration therapy by local doctors rather than complicated instruments or unaffordable medicine.
4. In developing countries, healthcare budgets have soared remarkable attributing to increasing population levels and proportional growth in patient amount.

Exercise 10
Language is the main means of communication. Thus, the people speaking the same language would have a better relationship among culture ,states and economy.

Exercise 11
Growing competition between organizations will make them readjust sales strategy. As a fact, raising the service quality would the most effective way to improve customer satisfaction.

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Exercise 1
1. A summary should include main ideas, very small details can be ignored.
2. Paraphrasing can prove how we understand the idea.

Exercise 3
The words have been changed but the the sentence structure and grammar are almost the same as the original. As for choice C, most of the words are still the same and the grammar are still the same.

Exercise 4
A. Altering information order in paragraphs and sentences.
B. Using synonyms.
C. Rearranging word order in sentence, restructuring noun phrases.
D. Restructuring noun phrases
E. Switching between the active and passive voice.
F. Using synonyms/altering information order in paragraphs and sentences.
G. Altering information order in paragraphs and sentences/modifying word forms
H. Switching between the active and passive voice/transforming sentence structure/using synonyms.

Exercise 5
1.In some affected areas, the usage of nets appeared to increase from 3% in 2001 to 50%in 2011, but the incidence of fatal malaria decreased by 25% during this decade.
2. Finally, the economic development of all regions has been discouraged by the spread of malaria. This is because workers in the countries may not have chances to get investments if they get affected by the disease.
3. Moreover, the symptoms of malaria usually persist for years, and it will definitely have effects on peoples life and works even for a long period of time after recovery.

Exercise 6
1. In many countries, people already have benefits from health-education programs, especially in some regions lack economy and education.
2. In some poor regions, the result of expensive treatment is high diseases rates.
3. In some place in Nigera, mortality from diarrhea decreased by 82% because the usage of rehydration therapy by local doctors rather than complicated instruments or unaffordable medicine.
4. In developing countries, healthcare budgets have soared remarkable attributing to increasing population levels and proportional growth in patient amount.

Exercise 10
Language is the main means of communication. Thus, the people speaking the same language would have a better relationship among culture ,states and economy.

Exercise 11
Growing competition between organizations will make them readjust sales strategy. As a fact, raising the service quality would the most effective way to improve customer satisfaction.

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Language is the main approach to communicate. While effective communication needs international,universal language, which can promote both economy and culture.

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Exercise 7
The summary is concise and shorter, including the main points of asthma such as its feature,type,severe consequence and medical method. Furthermore, detailed information and examples about asthma can’t be found.

Exercise 10
Language is the main method to connect people,however,sometimes they can’t understand each other. When people speak universal language,culture and economy tie closer,and good will increase between countries.

Exercise 11
The price differentials is no longer the advantage in retailing, which is caused by intense competition. Thus, stores turn to other mechanisms. Strategic routes can increase customer satisfaction by improving service quality. When companies providing high service quality, this approach will improve profits,increase market share and customer loyalty. For competitors, poor service in customers is the primary reason.

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Exercise 5
1. The nets using which are influenced ,soared from 3 percent to 50 percent throughout the time from 2001 to 2011. In this past 10 years, the death cases that malaria caused declined by 25 percent.

2. In the end, the development of local economy suffers from severe depression because malaria spreads to various kinds of industries. In addition,employers do not have any workers that they may be infected by malaria. As a result, investment can’t be found in any businesses managing.

3. Several years would be last for the influence of malaria as well. Only when the patients be healthy again can the labour market operate normally.

Exercise 6
1.The health-education programmes are popular in informing people about CVD and AIDS risks, even for those who have never get educated or living in poverty.

2.Prevention is more common for the poor people than the simple medication,which is cheaper. Dirty water and bad health condition is often the source of many widespread diseases.

3.When oral rehydration therapy was learned by local health workers in particular region of Nigeria, the number of people who died diarrhoea declined by 82 percent. And the hospital equipment and expensive drugs do not need to be offered in effective treatment.

4. The average longevity in developed countries is much longer and many people are more than eighty years old. As a result, healthcare equipment uses more frequently in order to take care of the elder people. Thus, healthcare costs have increased dramatically.

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Exercise 1
1. The choice of whether to summarise will depend on how much of the information is useful for your purposes.

2. Paraphrasing is important because it allows students to show that they have understood the ideas which they have read. In addition, it can also prove students are not simply copy the words or sentences of a writer.

Exercise 3
My answer is B.

Paraphrasing is where information from another source is rewritten but in your own words whilst retaining the same meaning of the original. According to this principle, the sentence A is similar to the original sentence generally, although many new words are replaced. As for sentence C, most of the word does not change.Thus it is not a kind of rewritten.

Exercise 4
1. In paraphrase 1, sentence A alters information order in paragraghs and sentences. In addition, some synonyms has been used. In sentence B, some synonyms has been used. Sentence C uses synonyms and antonyms and alters information order in paragraghs and sentences.

2. In paraphrase 2, restructuring noun phrases can be found in sentence D. As for sentence E, switching between the active and passive voice has been used.

3. In paraphrase 3, rearranging word order has been used in sentence F. And modifying word forms can be found in sentence G. In addition, switching between the active and passive voice has been used in sentence H.

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Exercise 1
1. You should include the main ideas and what appear to be the most important supporting ideas. Very small details can be ignored, and usually detailed examples can also be ignored.

2. Paraphrasing is vital because it allows students to show that they have understood the ideas which they have read. By paraphrasing using different words and sentence structures, students are able to clearly show that they have understood any items which they have been asked to read.

Exercise 3

a. The sentence structure and grammatical style are almost exactly the same as the original.

b. In this paraphrase all the words that could be changed have been changed. In addition, the sentence structure and the grammatical style are both very different from those of the original.

c. Most of the words are still the same and the grammatical style of the two halves of the sentence are still the same.

Exercise 4

1.

A：Transforming sentences structure .

B：Using synonyms .

C：Altering information order in paragraph ad sentences .

2.

D：Restructuring noun phrases .

E：Switching between the active and passive voice .

3.

F：Using synonyms .

G：Modifying word forms .

H：Switching between the active and passive voice .

Exercise 5

1. The use of nets in affected areas grew from 3 percent in 2001 to 50 percent in 2011 . During this time, the amount of fatal malaria cases dropped by 25 percent.

2. In the end, economic development in all regions has been limited by widespread malaria . So companies are less likely to invest in countries where employees may get ill.

3. Besides, the symptoms of malaria usually persist for years , and it will affect patients' life and work , even for a long period of time after recovery .

Exercise 6

1. In many countries, people has obtained benefits from health-education programs, especially in some regions where education and economy is falling behind.

2. Expensive treatment cost leads to high disease rates in some poor regions.

3.In one district of Nigeria,mortality from diarrhoea decreases by 82 percent because the usage of oral rehydration therapy by local doctors rather than complicated instruments or not affordable medicine.

4.In developing countries, healthcare budgets have soared remarkable attributing to increasing population levels and proportional growth in patient amount.

Exercise 7

The summation is pithy , but the source text is verbose .

The summary clearly points out the central point of view , but the source text illustrates a number of examples and explanation .

Exercise 10

Language is the main way that people communicate with others . Therefore, if people speak the same language , there will have a good relationship among culture, economy and states .

Exercise 11

Nowadays, growing competition between organizations , which makes them have to readjust the sales strategy . In fact, by raising the service quality of the company to improve customer satisfaction is one of the most effective strategy route.

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Exercise 1

1.       A summary should contain the key point of the text, point out only the main ideas from what had been explained above.

2.       Paraphrasing is important because it shows that we do really understand the idea of the writer.

Exercise 3

B

Exercise 5

1. From 2001 to 2011, cases of fatal malaria decreases by 25 percent, and nets used got effected which rose from 3 percent to 50 percent.
2. Eventually, the spread of malaria had become lowered in all economic development regions. Enterprises are not willing to spend money on countries that workers would easily become ill.
3. Moreover, malaria’s illness stayed over a year, which this makes the patient have long-term difficulties on physical actions.

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E1

1.The summary means the most vital idea in the text or the article,therefore,any small details or instances could be negelected in the conclution.

2.Once you organised your familiar words and express your own thoughts according to the writer's idea and do not use the similar words simply,it means that you totally understood the writer's purposes.

E3

The original sentence emphsizes the importance of early diagnosis and treatment,despite the fee of the treatment is higher than prevention.The first sentence confuses the usage of "prevent" and "stop",the last sentence obviously stress the significance of treatment'features and totally distinct to the original sentence.

E5

1.The amount of lethal malaria example witnesses a 25% decrease from 2001 to 2011 attributing to the increasing usage of nets from 3% to 50% which was used in infected regions.

2.In the end,the prevelent of malaria became an obstacle in all aspects of economic growth.Investment will not probably arrange in these countries attributing to the workers who susceptible to the sickness.

3.Moreover,although the illness has cured,however,the reaction of malaria retains for many years.For example,manual workers who have contracted malaria still feel uncomfortable after recovery.

E6

1.Boosting the awareness on people who lack the access to the education and struggle under the poverty-line will make a big progress.

2.Therefore,precaution is better than treatment because several contagious illnesses could not be existed without the dirty water and poor health condition in a certain region.

3.In one district of Nigeria,mortality from diarrhoea decreases by 82 percent because the usage of oral rehydration therapy by local docters rather than complicated instruments or unaffordable medicine.

4.In developing countries,healthcare budgts have soared remarkable attributing to increasing population levels and proportional growth in patient amount.

E10

An identical language spoken by people from all over the world could break through the barrier between the  diverse continents and play a significant role on the progression of human being.

E11

With the example of that the approach pay attention on the service quality will make a considerable prgresss on retail industry,the corporations are craving for competitive advantages and exclusive guidelines to become unique.

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Exercise 1

（1）       The main points and information of the article should be included in the summary, and other unnecessary details can be omitted .

（2）       Because it makes the reader more aware of what you're writing or some complicated sentences .

Exercise 3

B

Exercise 4

(Text 1)

A：Transforming sentences structure .

B：Using synonyms .

C：Altering information order in paragraph ad sentences .

(Text 2)

D：Restructuring noun phrases .

E：Switching between the active and passive voice .

(Text 3)

F：Rearranging word order in sentences .

G：Modifying word forms .

H：Switching between the active and passive voice .

Exercise 5

1、  The use of nets in affected areas rose from 3 percent in 2001 to 50 percent in 2011 . During that time, the number of fatal malaria cases dropped by 25 percent . The reason of that is the net can block mosquitoes and other bugs, so it can effectively prevent fatal malaria .

2、  Finally, economic development in all regions has been curbed by widespread malaria . Because malaria is so harmful to people, and it can even affect their work , so companies are less likely to invest in countries where employees may be ill .

3、  In addition, the symptoms of malaria usually persist for years , and it will affect patients' life and work , even for a long period of time after recovery .

Exercise 7

The summation is pithy , but the source text is verbose .

The summary clearly points out the central point of view , but the source text illustrates a number of examples and explanation .

Exercise 10

Language is the main way that people communicate with others . Therefore, if people speak the same language , there will have a good relationship among culture, economy and states .

Exercise 11

Nowadays, growing competition between organizations , which makes them have to readjust the sales strategy . In fact, by raising the service quality of the company to improve customer satisfaction is one of the most effective strategy route.

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Exercise 1

1.The information in a summary must be important, they are key information. Without those information, people cannot understand the original article.

2.Paraphrasing is a way that we rewrite the information but in our own words while retaining the same meaning of the original. By this way, our tutors can know whether we really understand the information or not.

Exercise 3

B

Exercise4

A: altering information order in paragraphs and sentences.

B: using synonyms

C: rearranging word order in sentence, restructuring noun phrases

D: restructuring noun phrases

E: switching between the active and passive voice

F: using synonyms/altering information order in paragraphs and sentences

G: altering information order in paragraphs and sentences/modifying word forms

H: switching between the active and passive voice/transforming sentence structure/using synonyms

Exercise 5

1.In some affected areas, the nets’ usage appeared to increase from 3 percent in 2001 to 50 percent in 2011, while the incidence of fatal malaria decreased by 25 percent during this decade.

2.Ultimately, the development of all regions’ economy is badly discouraged by the spread of malaria. This is because that countries where workers may be affected by the disease may not have chances to get investments.

3.Besides, although the patient has cured, they still suffer the abnormal conditions of malaria for several years, such as cannot doing physical-demanding works.

Exercise 6

1. In many countries, people has already gained benefits from health-education programmes, especially in some regions where education and economy is not well-developed.

2. Expensive treatment costs leads to high disease rates in some poor regions, so that providing effective prevention is a more realistic way to reduce incidence rates, such as the supply of clean water and sanitation.

3.Many of diseases can be treated with very simple medication, for example, medical staffs who know oral rehydration therapy(ORT) successfully reduce the death rate which results from diarrhoea.

4. The main reason why costs in healthcare increasing in developed nations is, due to the increasing number of order people, high-price equipment and high-quality healthcare system are  demanded.

Exercise 7

The summary only contains the key information, and they are all transformed or rearranged. Besides,the detail information almost deleted.

Exercise 10

Creating a universal language, which everyone can easily use, will not only remove the barriers that hinder people from expressing themselves in different languages, but also will not only promote economic and cultural development.

Exercise 11

Recently, many experts deem that customer satisfaction will be regarded as one of the most important factors in business. Besides, many companies find that high quality service is more competitive than pricing advantage.

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Organizations use some mechanisms for achieving points of difference to search for a competitive such  as providing high service quality as perceived by their customers to get high profits.

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Different languages have become a barrier between people’s communication. Some people think universal language may be a good choice because it can help to make people closer.

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1. The effect of fatal malaria has been effectively controlled from 2001 to 2011, in the areas where nets utilization increased from 3% to 50%.
2. Bad health condition of workers hinder the country from receiving investment. As a consequence, economy can be severely impacted by malaria pop.
3. In addition, even when the patient has recovered, they would still be troubled by the long-lasting problems caused by malaria, feeling tired doing physical work for example.

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1.We should include main ideas and important point.
2.Because  paraphrasing proves  that we have actually understood those ideas.

E3
Prevention is A cheaper and easier method than treatment.

E5

1.From 2001 to 2011, the usage rate of net has increased by 43 percent. At the same time , the the usage rate of fatal malaria falled by 25 percent.”

2. At the end, widespread malaria has hampered economic development. Companies are

unwilling to invest in countries where employees are ill.

3. In addition, malaria will have sequela and  manual labor is not as good as before

E10

The different languages hindered the exchange of different
countries. For many years, people want to have the common language of the world to promote cultural exchange and integration.

E11
The organization is looking for a unique competitive advantage. Many scholars believe that it is to improve customer satisfaction and focus on the quality of service. Good service companies make the most money, and poor service has been identified as the primary reason why customers switch to competitors.

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1.During the period of 2001 to 2011, the quantity of fatal malaria cases experienced  a decrease of 25 percent because  the usage of nets in affected areas saw a rise from 3 percent to 50 percent.

2.Eventually, all areas of economic development were affected by widespread malaria .To some extent ,enterprises may not choose to invest in those areas where workers are likely to become ill.

3.What’s more, it costs a long time for the symptoms of malaria to exist, which makes some patients  who take physical labor feel difficult to work even after they has recovered.

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1.Because of the increasing usage  rate of nets during rhe time period between 2001 and 2011 in affected areas,the fatality of malaria decreased by 25 percent.
2.In the end, many companies refuse to invest in develpes countries where the staff may infected by severe malaria.
3.what's more, the patient who recoverd from malaria can hardly do the physical work sinse the sequela of the illness would still for a very long time.

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Exercise 5

There is a significant asent regarding to nets using from 3 percent to 50 percent  from 2001 to 2011. At the same ,is has helped to reduce the death toll affected by malaria by 25 percent.

As a result,malaria which spead everywhere hold the development of local economy. Since the labour force there are susceptible to disease,few businesses are willingly to invest.

What is more, the sequela often exsits for a long time,which would cause physical inconvenience for the people who have already recovered .

Exercise 10

Languages is a way of commuciation.But too many languages lead to a barrier rather than an aid . So people hope to set up universal language which is simple and obvious to make relations between countries closer.

Exercise 11

Nowadays ,organisations are searching for a competitive edge to make them stand out from other competitors .Because of intense competiton ,they lost the pricing advantage.So they turn to other stragetic routes ,such as consumer satisfaction measured by service quality.And The result was positive correlation between the two.

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Exercise 1

1. Abstracts should generally describe the purpose of the study, the experimental method, the results and the final conclusions. While focusing on results and conclusions.

2. This is a key skill in academic writing as it allows you to integrate information from other sources into your work in order  to support and strengthen your arguments. And it allows students to show that they have understood the ideas which they have read.

Exercise 3

Choose B

A. The sentence structure is as same as the original.

C.The main meaning has been changed.

Exercise 4

1.

A. Altering information order in paragraphs and sentences. / Transforming sentence structure. / Using synonyms and antonyms.

B. Using synonyms and antonyms.

C. Altering information order in paragraphs and sentences. / Rearranging word order in sentences. / Transforming sentence structure. / Using synonyms and antonyms.

2.

D. Restructuring noun phrases. / Using synonyms and antonyms.

E. Switching between the active and passive voice. /  Using synonyms and antonyms.

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F. Using synonyms and antonyms. / Rearranging word order in sentences.

G. Modifying word forms. / Rearranging word order in sentences.

H. Rearranging word order in sentences. / Transforming sentence structure. / Using synonyms and antonyms. / Switching between the active and passive voice.

Exercise 5
1. Some places which are influenced by Internet up to 50 percent in 2011 though decade, while the cases of fatal malaria rapid decline to about 25 percent.

2. Because of the lack of investment from businesses, the economic was obstructed by widespread malaria,
3. Besides, physical workers need a long time to recover themselves, due to the persistent symptoms of malaria.

Exercise 10

The establishment of universal language can narrow the distance of cultural and economic relations between various countries, so as to promote the development of globalization.

Exercise 11

Many academics and practitioners think that the competition in today's market is mainly in improving service quality and customer satisfaction, rather than pricing advantages.

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E1

1. Summary is much shorter than the original and contains only the key information which you want to use from the text rather than every detail.

2. Paraphrasing is vital because it allows students to show that they have understood the ideas which they have read.

E3

a.Some words have been changed, but the structure and grammatical style are almost exactly the same as the original.

All the words are changed. What’s more, the structure and the grammatical style are both changed.

Most of the words and the grammatical style are same.

E5

1.Due to the use of nets in affected areas rose from 3 percent to 50 percent from 2001 to 2011, the number of fatal malaria cases dropped by 25 percent.”

2. With the spread of malaria which depresses all areas of economic development , businesses don’t like to invest in countries where employees are likely to become ill.

3. Furthermore, the symptoms of malaria often linger for years .It is difficult to make physical labour before the patient has recovered.

E10

There will be a barrier that people can’t understand different languages. So setting up an international language which is simple can tie the cultural and economic closer.

E11

Today, even huge hyperstores no longer have the advantage of large price differentials. Stores have begun to concentrate on other mechanisms for achieving points of difference such as service quality. Increasing concentration on customer satisfaction is a rout which can be the most profitable.

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a.The sentence structure are very similar to the original , only simple words replacement were done.
c.This paraphrase changed the order of sentence ,and some words are still same as the original one.

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E5
1. Because of the increasing of the use of nets in affected areas, the amount of fatal malaria cases decreased by 25% from 2001 to 2011.
2. Definitively, the countries where employees are affected by malaria will not be invested by businesses because the common malaria has a bad impact on the economy of all areas.
3. In addition, the patient who recovered from the malaria cannot do the physical work well because the symptoms of the illness will last for long time.
E10
People have dreamt of speaking the same language which will make us be much closer for long times because of the barrier caused by different languages.
E11
Organisations are searching for competitions to distinguish them from that today. However, they found that the keen competition had gnawed the pricing advantage and the companies which provide high service quality to customers would be the most profitable.

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1,Due to the increasing of the use of nets in affected areas by 47 percent from 2001s to 2011s,the number of fatal malaria cases decreased by 25 percent.

2,Admittedly,businesses will not invest in the countries where employees have more incidents to be affected by malaria which was widespread and caused side effect all areas of economic development.

3,Even after patient recovered from the malaria,he can’t afford the hard physical working for a long time because the symptoms will still linger you.
Exercise 10

Due to the barrier caused by different languages,people dreamed the international language which is simple and obvious and has 2 advantages.
Exercise11

Now,due to the hard competitions between different organizations,they are  searching for new ways.They will not only concentrate on lower price,instead,they improve the service quality.Now,we still wait for the response from the market.

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People use language as a main approach to communicate. However, many different languages have a barrier in communication. People want to contribute an international language. Using universal language is beneficial for culture, economy and goods selling among nations.

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1.Due to the increasing using of nets (3% to 50%) in affected areas,the amount of fatal malaria decreased by 25% from 2001 to 2011.
2.Companies will not give money to those who are likely to suffer from the illness because global malaria have caused bad impact on economics.
3.The sick can not do manual labor even if they get recovered. It means that the influence of malaria will last for a long time.

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1. The use of Internet in related areas increased nearly 20 times from 3 percent to 50 percent during 2001 and 2011. In the same decade, the number of fatal malaria cases dipped to 25 percent.

2. In the end, widespread malaria engendered bad impacts on economics. Because employees were easy to suffer from this disease, business are unlikely to invest in these areas.

3. Moreover, the symptoms of malaria often stays for years, that means it is difficult for physical labour to long after the patient has recovered.

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If treatment can be provided very soon after the patient has contracted malaria, this greatly increases the likelihood that they will recover, although prevention is still the cheaper and easier method.