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Should university students live away from their parents?

Agree – students should live away

Disagree – students shouldn’t live away

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We need to acknowledge that living away from parents bring a lot of benefits.

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We need to acknowledge that (emphasis lead-in) living away from parents while in university can help students become more independent. This is because when they are all alone, students will have to deal with life’s problems all by themselves, and thus gaining more experience in how to lead a life on their own. (explain argument) As a matter of fact, many Vietnamese students studying in the US have to work part time in order to pay for their living expenses, which allows them to learn how to manage their own financial situations years before graduating from school.

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We need to acknowledge that sharing household chores can endure the marriage and make a couple live together in harmony. This is because when the tasks be shared equally, family member will know the way to help each other and then they can sympathize another person. For instance, in many families in VN, each member takes responsibilities in household tasks such as cleaning or looking after children so that both person can feel how difficult another being. The point I want to emphasize that when marriage couple share household task fairly, it won't be any internal conflict due to gender discrimination.

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It is worth mentioning that men should do the household tasks as equally as women because they are dependent on each other when living together. The basis of this is the fact that both women and men have the same workload, and thus they have to share the same work for their house. As a matter of fact, many families that both women and men work in the same company divide the household tasks, which can balance the works when they are at home or at the workplace. The point I want to emphasize is the fact that the the dependence will give the boost for the work to be more efficient and both women and men have motivation to do all the works.

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We need to admit that these days, the issue of men and women sharing housework is a common thing to improve family happiness. This is because the awareness of gender equality is increasing now, sharing household tasks equally not only shares each other's burdens but also helps to sympathy each other better. For example, when a wife is too busy and has to work overtime, a husband can do the housework for his wife like cooking, cleaning, or looking after children,...  The point I want to emphasize is that instead of giving it all to the women, the husband should consider the housework as his responsibility, then give more motivation for family life

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It is worth mentioning that having online conversations cans allow many companies to reduce their budget effectively. This is because the managers do not have to pay a large amount of money to pay for foreign business trips to meet partners. For instance, when Vietnamese governments want to have American co-vid vaccines to their citizens to avoid the pandemic be expanded, the governments choose to have a networked communication instead of arriving in the USA. The point I want to emphasize is that the companies can still have valuable bonds by using online contact, which helps them save time and reduce the transport cost.

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There is no deny that although women tend to POUR HOURS INTO their work, most of houseworks should be done women since they can do it TREMENDOUSLY better than man do. This is because through our history, women have responded to stay home and do things like cooking, cleaning or looking after chidren; then gradually after millions of year they have PROFFESSIONAL DEVELOPMENT in doing those work. In fact, in our family, although our father can help to take out trash or wash the dishes; it seems to impossible for them to prepare a dinner. What we have to realize that women HAVE MORE APTITUDE FOR HOUSEWORK; thus letting them do it does not showing gender unequality, it just brings better effort and UTILIZE women’ ability.

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We need to acknowledge that when both men and women do the household chores equally, it can reduce the working stress for both of them. This is because when both do the same works, their mind won't feel that they are being discriminated against. For instance, in many US family, the couple cooking or looking after their child together, they feel really happy and comfortable. The point i want to emphasize is that when they can reduce the stress from working both outside and at home, there won't be any conflicts between them due to the gender discrimination problem.

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We need to admit that sharing the household chores in both women and men is still not the common public knowledge due to the kind of job that men and women work. This is because men do the more physical job than the women, and thus men need more time to relax. As a matter of fact, some jobs like driver or construction are the practical work that most the males do, and it takes most time outside the house to do that job. The point I want to emphasize is the fact that the kind of job for males are much heavier than women, so it will bar the men from doing the household tasks.

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We need to admit that when men and women share household chores equally, it allows them to work at their best. The explanation of this could be the fact that sharing chores help both men and women finish their job on time while also be able to finish houseworks, and not only one of them pour the hour into tidying their house and baring themselve from working. For instance, in a family, the wife can do the chores in the morning, and the husband takes turn to do chores in the afternoon, making both of them have their time to catch up on work. Both of them being able to finish their works well means that they have somewhat help reduce each other's financial burden and not stressing them out.

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As far as I’m concerned, online communication does show its UTILITY in working in this covid-19 era that ATTRACTS companies; however, this way of communicating can lead to the stealing of internal information. The explanation for this is the fact that all of the information or results of working will be through the Internet or saved online, which ALLOWS stealer to easily EXPOSURE and reveal it illegally. In fact, information thef is now a TREMENDOUSLY serious problem in over the world, and business information and customer data are mostly be stolen. We need to acknowledge that when those information are leaked out, there would be some ECONOMICAL DISADVANTAGES for the company.

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There is no denying that men is almost the main economic source of the family and women stay home to take care the family and their house but nowaday the parents work to gain money whole day so they have to share household tasks. This is because everyone after a day with full work are very tired so the best way for them is sharing household chores equally. If just only women do housework, they will be more tired and stressed. In fact, nowaday , many families in developed countries share household tasks with all people in family to do together. Finally, what we have to realize is that housework is not only for women, all member in a family should help her, that make her get more motivation and make a happy family.

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Recently online communication is now becoming a trend since it can FACILITATE the business work. From what I can see, by UTILIZING online communication, all of the work will be done easily instead of going to the company, and we also can connect and discuss through the screen- which ALLOWS us to REDUCE time and save money for business. There is an EVIDENCE that before a meeting at company, many staffs have to POUR THE HOURS INTO things like cleaning up the room, preparing water and devices,… which needs time and money paying for labour. We need to admit that this way of communication is ECONOMICALLY ADVANTAGED- it saves time and money for business.

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We need to acknowledge that online communication is more convenient than meeting face-to-face. The explanation for this could be the fact that the coverage of the Internet is gaining fast, the number of people use Internet increase day by day and everywork replaced by using Internet, this make many people can do their work without going out. With the Internet, we just stay home and we can meet other people through a screen,that is easy and comfortable. In fact, in the time the world has pandemic disease COVID-19, the Internet has prove its benefít, it help students to study online, help people meet their friends without going out because in this time people restrict going out.

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We need to admit that online communications allow people to converse in a flexible way by saving their time. The basis of this could be from the fact that when you have an online communication, it gives you a boost in the process of transporting files and documents therefore bar your time from being waste away. For evidence, in a face-to-face communication, you will have to pour hours into just send and achieve documents, but it will be a second with the online one. The point that i want to emphasize is the more time we save the more work is facilitated in order to make a motivation for your occupation

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We need to acknowledge that, when women and men share household task,can make better husband and wife relationship.This is because,when women or men end of the tiring day and go home to relax but he or she going to do homework instead of relax,that can make he or she stress because too much work in one day.As a matter of fact, many couple was an argument about unfair division house work.

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It is an indisputable fact that splitting household chores equally makes both spouses feel understood and gives them a sense of being cared.  In particular, tremendous researches in the USA have advocated the fact that in families which parents are unwilling to participate actively and equitably in housework, the divorce rates as well as negative feelings such as uneasiness, irritation or loneliness tend to be in serious levels. This is because enduring intense pressure at work then being made to do all the housework when come back home, forces both spouses to become hot-tempered and therefore, erects obstacle to open conversation and further understanding between them. What we have to realize is that if there is no barriers between wife and husband, not only family happiness will be given a boost, but children are also allowed to feel more comfortable and welcome at their home.

More appreciably, if both spouses are involved impartially and unbiasedly in household chores, gender equality can be considerably advocated and promoted. This is because when tasks which traditionally were the sole responsibility of women like housework... are now split in an unbiased way in family, the so-called gulf between only men’s work and  women’s work could be bridged, and therefore, sharing chores could strongly implies that women can do men work and vice versa. As a matter of fact, the biggest achievement of feminism was considered to be the continuous increasing number of men taking part in household chores since mid 20th century. Noticeably, gender equality can bring about great enhancement to the well-being of not only the wife, but also girls, women and the whole community.

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We need to acknowledge that both genders contribute their full time work equally, hence household activities should be handle equally as well, I completely agree it with this statement and I belive it develops a better understanding between couple. This is because after working for 8 to 9 hours a day every human being tends to get tired both mentally and physically which need sufficient time for a rest to lighten up your head and relax the body. If only one person is overburdened with household chores, the exertion will harm that person's well being which will affect the whole family eventually whereas if the tasks are divided equally the load will be shared and each of the partners will get their personal time to detox. For instance, a survey in 2018 stated that almost 40% of women who handle household duties alone suffer from back pain and mental stress after the 30s. Besides, if household duties be equally devided, it will contribute to maintain a healthy relationship.

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it cannot be denied that modern women are very busy, so it makes perfect sense for women and men to share housework. The point I want to emphasize is the fact that modern women have to bear a lot of pressure because they have to work, take care of housework and educate children, so receiving the share from men would be a tremendous support for them.The advocate of the men give a boost for the women to do better work. Moreover, having men share the housework will make women feel less discriminated against. As a matter of fact, in a family when there are men who share and help their wives with housework, their families will be happy, helping each other to share housework will bring family members together.

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There is no denying that using online communication in companies allow them to working at any places. The point i want to emphasize is that the employees don't need to meet face-to-face to exchange, they just need to use smart devices to do that. For example, right now in Viet Nam, Corona virus mades employees can't go to working places, they can still exchange and talking through online communication while staying at home. What we have to realize is that working at any places can help employees do the work more effectively.

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We need  to admit that the almost household tasks should be done by the wife because she can do it more profession than man can. The explanation for this could be the fact that in our history, women have to stay at home and do houseworks while their husband work outside and be the bread-winner, till now, mother usually teach how to do households chore to their daughter with the wish that in the future, their child will be a carefully house-maker. In many Vietnamese house, althought both men and women POUR HOURS INTO their work, women have to do almost houseworks in their family, which it's an "PROFESSIONAL DEVELOPMENT" of wife. Thing I want to emphasize that when the household tasks be shared equally, maybe the husband can do it like their wife want,it makes women angry and easily cause domentic violence.

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We need to admit that sharing household tasks equally allow the wife and the husband to reduce a tremendous amount of stresses.The basis of this could be from the fact that nowaday mens and women are pouring hours into a exhausting nine to five job every single day and thus sharing the housework become and motivation and helping each other to reduce the exposure of daily pressure. For evidence , sharing housework keep the family in harmony and bar couple from divorce  in or der to give a boost for family happiness. The point that I want to emphasize is the stresses in family reduced which will faccilitate the process of solving other problems of family life.

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There is no denying that online communication in company ALLOW PEOPLE TO communicate when they are far from others easier than face-to-face. This is because there are some situations that people can't stay nearly in the company, that's why there are a lot way for people to communicate in the Internet. For instance, nowadays, many company in the world choose the way work from home due to Covid-19, people still working so productivity. To summarize, online communication is now being popular than face-to-face because of its convenient.

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It is worth mentioning that although Covid-19 are so dangerous, there are a lot of company in the world still choose the face-to-face communication because of it's advantage-the tasks will be given clearly. The basis of this is the fact that sometime when the agent don't understand the work that their boss give, they will do it wrong- which make their boss don't sastified. My sister is a excellent agent in her company because she never make her manager dissapointed, but now she must work from home due to Covid-19, and in one time that she didn't understand the task so that she do it not like her manager want. The point I want to emphasize that working by face-to-face is the best way for people to be a good agent more over they can get a "PROFESSIONAL DEVELOPMENT" in their career.

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As far as I know, household chores were almost done by women from the past and that is right because the men still are economic pillar in families now, women have to do all housework. The explantion for this could be the fact that almost families in the world  have husband get out to make money and wife stay home to do the housework and take after their children, the men are very busy and tired after a day for work so they do not have any strength to help their wife. The wife should understand for him and take care of him, help him to relax after working. As the matter of fact, many women still stay home to be housewife, take care their families thoughtfully. What we have to realize that we do not need to share housework equally, instead let men rest after his hard work.

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It is worth mentioning that sharing household tasks will facilitate women to have more employment opportunities – which gives a boost for gender equality. For evidence, in Vietnam, the employment rate of women in 2020 is 68.7%, while 45.8% is the rate achieved in 2010. This is because having advocation in housework allows women to have more time to work like husbands, instead of according to the old concept of pouring the hours into cleaning and cooking. The point I want to emphasize is the fact that if the family has gender equality, it will be motivated to dedicate a better society.

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It cannot be denied that the fact that women often pour the hours into their work than on household chores. The basis of this is the fact that women complete the housework better than men. The most concrete evidence for this is that since ancient times, women will take on the role of housewife, take care of and educate children, and men will be the breadwinners of the family and earn money to support the family. So women have unreachable to knowledge but obviously at the present time those customs have been broken and then with professional development the women have gradually neglected the family.  As a matter of fact, the fact that women do housework does not represent discrimination but rather the importance and utility of women.

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We need to admit that online communication is a obstacle between people communicating. The point that I want to emphasize is online communicating allows people to facilitate their work however it also bars them from communicating to each other. For evidence, we forget about our social sayings which is the basic in a communication and replaced it by focusing on self work and thus lead to the communication detention. What we have to relize is that lack of communication will give a drawback for you work and reduce the exposure of efectiveness of work.

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It is worth mentioning that online communication can cause misunderstandings because of reducing the exposure of people. The basis of this is the fact that written communication such as emails, letters, … does not allow the receiver to know attitude, emotions, gestures, body language - which are signs of advocation or opposition when meeting face to face. For evidence, in a business meeting, investor expressions will facilitate the continuation of the discussion, while online communication is unreachable. The point I want to emphasize is that these misunderstandings can make many professional development opportunities encounter an obstacle.

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we need to acknowledge that equal sharing of household chores between women and men makes families happier. The basis of this is the fact that women tend to be more psychologically sensitive than men so it is easier for them to think and feel sad over little things. In addition, sharing household chores equally will make women feel happier, which also makes them not feel discriminated against in the family. And finally, the fact that the men help the women with the housework and teaching makes the children watch and learn.

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We need to acknowledge that although both women and men have to work full time, women who have aptitude for doing housework should do it more than men. The point I want to emphasize is the fact that wives are often in charge of housework in the past endured to the present day due to their skillful, careful, and meticulousness. For instance, after having an exhausting day, the wife can cook, clean, look after children,... while the husband who has better health can do physical work like carrying, repairing,... What we have to realize is that women pour the hours into doing household chores will bring more effective utilities and don't let housework be an obstacle to family happiness

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We need to acknowledge that even nowadays men and women are pouring hours into an exhausting nine to five jobs, women still facilitate the household work for the reason that they having aptitude for housework. The basis of this is the fact that women are rigorously educated about these work, which give them a professional development in housekeeping technique in order to allow wives to give a boost in every housework. At the other hand, men – those are not gifted in housekeeping- are nearly unreachable in doing housework which need skills like cooking and laundering. In fact, women spend averagely spend time in housework more than men twice which make them suitable for such an important job.

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We need to admit that online communication allows employees to work in a more comfortable environment than face to face. The explanation could be from the fact that when we work online, we are more flexible in time and place to work, which was rigorously focused when having a face-to-face communication in order to make a professional developing environment. For evidence, normally in a company, we must stick with an exhausting full-time schedule and stuck with uncomfortable suit and ties however by online communicating, we can get rid of those obstacles. The point that I want to emphasize is a comfortable work environment give a boost for our effectiveness which will facilitate our work and create a professional development.

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It is worth mentioning that virtual communication is becoming more and more well-received because it allows people to exchange with each other at any time, especially in many companies. The explanation for this could be the fact that with the development of technology, online socializing presented in many forms such as chat, call, text,... has tremendous utility like saving a lot of time working. In fact, although people hardly go outside and have to work from home during the Covid-19 pandemic, they still can discuss or have a meeting frequently. What we have to realize is that the renovation of online communication facilitates people easier to connect and will attract lots of users in the future.

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There is no denying that being different from face-to-face communication, virtual communication not only has tremendous benefits but also makes people more distant. The basis of this is the fact that pouring the hours into online socializing can reduce the exposure of people connection, limit the vocabulary and make people gradually become afraid to communicate with strangers. As a matter of fact, this issue has emerged a lot in companies and affects badly on people communication skills leading to low work efficiency. What we have to realize is that it is antieducational when virtual socializing can be an obstacle in human communication and bar people from professional development.

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There is no denying that online communication facilitates your work during quarantine however since digital communication become popular, the privacy problems emerged. The explanation for this could be the fact that internet is an open space which allow hackers to achieve your personal information while communicating online. For evidence, 21% of online users are the victim of hacking which mean a tremendous amount of people that had lost their personal information while using digital communication. The point that I want to emphasise is that the privacy problem shows us how insecure and unsafe online communication are, which make online communication an obstacle.

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We need to acknowledge that men and women sharing household work give a tremendous boost for family happiness. The basis of this is the fact that by sharing chores, family members have opportunities to understand each other pressure in order to reduce the exposure of stresses in everyone therefore allow husbands and wives to share their tension and overcoming obstacle together which will result in a long-lasting relationship. For evidence, statics show us that just by sharing housework, the divorce rate is decreased by ninety-seven percent. The point that I want to emphasize is that, facilitating family happiness mean prevail many other problems like gender discrimination and be a motivation for a happy society.

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We need to acknowledge that sharing chores tremendously increase the exposure of pressure of men. The explanation is the fact that nowadays men and women are pouring hour into an exhausting work however men are the breadwinner therefore making their work by a lot stressed while sharing housework (the work that men have no aptitude for) after their shift will bar husbands from relaxation. For evidence, nowadays men endure stresses frequently because of life problems both from works and the lack of relaxation. The point that I want to emphasize is that stresses cause many health problems in order to weakening health and mental.