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Didactic
cool piece, a good bit of theatre to show parents to understand LGBT+

i would have liked to see a dance or maybe some comedic moments, the whole thing was sat down and almost inert
overall good piece
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Finley Castle

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You chose a good topic for didactic, felt very personal and everyone connected to the piece. You really thought about the intended audience and made the layout accessible and engaging, felt very professional. Also showed how well you all adapted to being online.

To make the piece feel more realistic, the backgrounds could be changed and thought more, maybe posters and colours could me used to make the characters more 3 dimensional and realistic.

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the stop motion was engaging, comedic. nice use of voice! must’ve  taken a very long time. enjoyed watching it.

‘heathers’: well put together. nice switching from clip to clip-editing was superb. good acting. nice special effects, props, scenery.
being picky, would’ve liked to see more tone matching. some clips were very different  tones (ie warm vs cold backlight.) this was distracting and could be edited-probably would’ve taken a long time though.

overall well done! keep up the good work.
-sam

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ED2
I really enjoyed the trailers and the movies awesome acting and great use of the camera position to shoot the scenes and you all showed that you used your time with maturity. You all did well with the situation you are in with COVID and it was incredible.

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ED2
There was good use of editing throughout as well as good use of the resources that were available.
The only thing that could be improved is the use of the lighting as well the background of the scenes

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Didactic
From what I saw I really liked how thought-out the idea was, I could tell that the idea shown was something a lot of you was very passionate about making the idea really clear and well presented, the story line was very interesting and engaging from an audition point of view.
Feedback I would give would be to link all assets of the task together from lighting or set everything will look more professional if all is linked in some manner

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The didactic performance was really good you got your point across, it was really well thought out. The only issue I had was that I could not hear some of you as at point the audio would cut out. I understood the story line and the facts that you was trying to get across.

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The ED2's trailers and movie was really good, the characterisation was very clear and for me it was very obvious who your characters were. The story line was very interesting and also very clear.
For feedback, i was say to use different forms of lighting throughout as the lighting was almost the same through-out :) good job guys i really liked it

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I really liked the stop motion, it looked like it took a very long time to make and was well done.

The Heathers movies were well filmed to make it look like they were talking to each other, the only problem I found was sometimes audio goes up and down, sometimes you can hear people other times people are talking quietly and you can't hear them as well. It was a good piece and you can tell a lot of work has gone into it.

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I think the didactic piece was very informative, well put together and easy to access. The story was creative and realistic and well thought out. I really like the statistics and facts included, to show us the reality of the problems that people in the LGBT+ community face.

Addition: You wrote a nice story, you added celebrities in LGBTQ+, however I think you could have added in experiences from people who aren't celebrities.. people share their stories all over the internet and it would be nice to see those.

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ED2
The piece was very well edited and the angles were well thought out. They made the most out of a difficult situation they made good use of costume to differentiate character's and the lighting was fairly similar within scenes which is good considering the circumstances, though there were continuity errors with props but that's almost a given. The relationships were well shown through the interactions and the expressions used were very expressive and felt cohesive with what was being said.

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Didactic (bit of a long one):

Having it through powerpoint and having a mix of videos and written information is really good, it looks pleasing to the eye. It's easy to navigate

The character work was really well done, I could see developed characters, it was consistent.

The use of signs with the facts is really good too, I can see you used practitioners to influence your work.
The surveys at the end was very good too, since the point of didactic is to educate you can see if you've done well judging by the survey results.

I'd like to see more on the dynamics with each character, you can briefly tell what the relationships are but it'd be nicer to see some more elaboration.

Did you have any other filming options aside than zoom? Some parts were hard to make out due to lag and connection. Could you film your monologues differently through your phones?

But it was a really informative piece with a clear structure (it made more sense once I finished it)

Good job guys :)