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Hi YongZhuo- a valid point! Nicely and aptly phrased reasons and the implications as well

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MS Veena: You have a v v important example concerning post-retired teachers coming back to work as adjunct teachers and a valid point about how they are a valued resource. Here is an article talking more about it!

https://www.straitstimes.com/singapore/education/retired-but-theyre-back-to-full-time-teaching

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MS Veena: You have a v v important example concerning post-retired teachers coming back to work as adjunct teachers and a valid point about how they are a valued resource. Here is an article talking more about it!

https://www.straitstimes.com/singapore/education/retired-but-theyre-back-to-full-time-teaching

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Ms Veena: You are right on the fact that they take up less vital jobs: do you have an example of that? A nice start

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MS Veena: WHOSE IS THIS?
SOme valid points but full sentences will help you see the progression of thoughts/ideas. Also points about implication seem disjointed

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Ms Veena: Hi Ansel- I like the way you thought about the implications of this on different segments of Sg society- 

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Ms Veena: Hi Ansel- I like the way you thought about the implications of this on different segments of Sg society- 

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Hi Natalie- reasons are valid- i.e The elderly are not technologically savvy- So is the government doing anything about this?

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Hi Natalie- reasons are valid- i.e The elderly are not technologically savvy- So is the government doing anything about this?

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All apt observations and logically presented. Next question: time to back it up with some good examples.

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Ms Veena: I like the logical progression of your reasoning:) Nicely said. 

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Ms Veena: I like the logical progression of your reasoning:) Nicely said. 

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Hi Shaun: a point to note: It's 'the elderly' not 'elderlys'. While you have a valid point- we need a bit more explanation and reasons to make it more persuasive and less of an assumption...
This is a good article 

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Hi Shaun: a point to note: It's 'the elderly' not 'elderlys'. While you have a valid point- we need a bit more explanation and reasons to make it more persuasive and less of an assumption...
This is a good article 

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Ms Veena: Hi this is a v astute point made about their lack of 'tech' skills. You explain and reason it well too. You can perhaps spend sometime thinking about the implications of this on diff segments- But a great start

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Ms Veena: Hi this is a v astute point made about their lack of 'tech' skills. You explain and reason it well too. You can perhaps spend sometime thinking about the implications of this on diff segments- But a great start

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Hi Wallace- to make this more coherent, u need to find a way/ways to connect the reason to the implication- Pick one aspect ( i.e boosting productivity- how does it link to healthcare costs?

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Hi Wallace- to make this more coherent, u need to find a way/ways to connect the reason to the implication- Pick one aspect ( i.e boosting productivity- how does it link to healthcare costs?

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natalie

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Ms Veena: I like your reason- that we are experiencing a changing culture  and say the elderly are more conservative hence not as valued. Can you give me more detail on our 'changing culture and wild ideas' interesting idea... mine it more:)

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Ms Veena: I like your reason- that we are experiencing a changing culture  and say the elderly are more conservative hence not as valued. Can you give me more detail on our 'changing culture and wild ideas' interesting idea... mine it more:)

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Ms Veena: Interesting ideas- why do you think they face discrimination in the workplace in Sg? ( there is usually a reason) i.e why would they prefer a younger worker vs the elderly?
Re implication: so they are criticised but.... aren't they acting on the criticism ? what criticism- aren't there many schemes ( i don't disagree, but we need more explanation.

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Ms Veena: Interesting ideas- why do you think they face discrimination in the workplace in Sg? ( there is usually a reason) i.e why would they prefer a younger worker vs the elderly?
Re implication: so they are criticised but.... aren't they acting on the criticism ? what criticism- aren't there many schemes ( i don't disagree, but we need more explanation.

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Ms Veena: A good start to the reasons! you give some deeper explanation. But what you can work on ( in this case) is how does demand for manpower impact the elderly? make that link clearer. So employers are looking for the elderly? Nicely done f

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Hi Dylan: A good start. Interesting how you changed the meaning of contribution to taking care of family instead of just 'working'.

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Hi Dylan: A good start. Interesting how you changed the meaning of contribution to taking care of family instead of just 'working'.

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Shaun

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Hi Elise- good point:) But doesn't seem fair right?
But I found this: https://www.channelnewsasia.com/news/singapore/old-and-retired-we-want-them-say-age-friendly-companies-10189698

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Hi Barry: SOrry:( Can barely read but can you clarify the dementia part ( you are right it is an issue but I can't follow your argument... Can re-explain to me here or come chat with me ya?
Here's more: https://www.todayonline.com/singapore/dementia-affecting-more-people-under-age-65

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Hi Barry: SOrry:( Can barely read but can you clarify the dementia part ( you are right it is an issue but I can't follow your argument... Can re-explain to me here or come chat with me ya?
Here's more: https://www.todayonline.com/singapore/dementia-affecting-more-people-under-age-65

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kaijie

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Ms Veena: Hi Calista: I like how you say the argument is not applicable in Singapore because the government works to help them get retraining. An imp point.

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Ms Veena: Hi Calista: I like how you say the argument is not applicable in Singapore because the government works to help them get retraining. An imp point.

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Ms Veena: You are right- The govt is concerned about their ability to work  and cost of living is a huge concern- It is unsettling to see old people working in difficult conditions to support themselves. There is an issue of the elderly poor in Sg:
Read this:)
https://www.channelnewsasia.com/news/cnainsider/ploughing-on-the-faces-and-insecurities-of-singapore-s-elderly-8824490

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Hi Eric- A valid point, it is an issue: You can now work on providing more explanation etc to solidify your point:) A great start!

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Hi Eric- A valid point, it is an issue: You can now work on providing more explanation etc to solidify your point:) A great start!

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Hi Joel: A good start! ANd I agree- so who do employers prefer?

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Hi Joel: A good start! ANd I agree- so who do employers prefer?

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Hi Kailin: That's right! Their pay is generally cut once they hit retirement ..

here's something for your reading pleasure: https://www.channelnewsasia.com/news/singapore/old-and-retired-we-want-them-say-age-friendly-companies-10189698

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Hi Anthea: Good reasons provided and what I especially think is important is you using the terms from the passage (leaching on resources and burden) and you explain this by saying there are more healthcare costs involved and what the government is actually doing about this- clear:)

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Hi Anthea: Good reasons provided and what I especially think is important is you using the terms from the passage (leaching on resources and burden) and you explain this by saying there are more healthcare costs involved and what the government is actually doing about this- clear:)

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