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stream or classwork, sweet shop description sentence, slow writing, take inspiration, come up with a description, think up 2 sentences, 15 slides, each pair = 1 slide, do me proud!

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tripling

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persoifications

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alliteration

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repetition repetition repetition

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repetition

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WAGOLL

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WAGOLL

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very important

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details are important

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AFOREST

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details

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detail

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detail

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Personifacation

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wagoll

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wagoll

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wagoll

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WAGOLL

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personification

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adjectives

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vocabulary

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WAGOLL

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she spent never-ending hours in front of the glass

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CANCEL

upload

link

search_web

camera

more_horiz

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CANCEL

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camera

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stop

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hoia

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#hi

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who is i

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CANCEL

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AFOREST techniques

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It fael as if Jim was living a nightmare as the door schreached

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There was a little light leaking through the curtains from the street light outside

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Suddenly a scream cut through the house like a bolt of lightning.

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he rubbed his blue eyes and stared at the silent darkness

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wagoll

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It came from Jim in his  room upstairs

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The night sky was as dark as a bat and the weather was terribly cold.

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It was a dark and gloomy night

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My men disgusting lady was the most horrible of them all!!!!

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there was a little light leaking through the damp curtais

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She spent long,dull hours in front of the small,dirty,street facing window.

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it was a gloomy and soggy night

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The song slowly faded away into the distance ...

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She spent hours of her day looking out the dirty window at the disgusting street

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There was a spooky scream suddenly from Jim's room

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Rubbing his tired eyes he gazed into the deep, dull blackness.

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It made parts of the room glow orange like a goldfish

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He rubbed his blue eyes and stared at the silent darkness.  Text B

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she spent ages looking out into the black night sky like a lion waiting to catch it's pray

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She sat there for hours glancing through the street facing window

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My malevolent lady was by far the most unfavourable person in the universe

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Jim froze in terror as the shadow of the handle creaked!

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Suddenly, a loud wailing scream cut strait through the house

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She spent never-ending hours in front of the glass of the street-facing window

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It was a dark, gloomy night and the blusttery wind was howling in the trees.

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In pairs, write your favourite improved sentence (from the flipped homework task) below: