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Notes for the first roughs.                        

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Notes for the first roughs.                        

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The first of the roughs came out well and as mentioned the main concerns I had were to do with the pages already addressed in the meeting.

Some ideas that were working well:
~The little addition of the girl in the dress from the original roughs was a great little add on.
~The look of despair as the helicopter approaches work well along with the ominous shadow of the helicopter.
~The main approach with the helicopters taking on the birdlike element worked well with the shaping.
~Also the small callback to the first montage of Kai and Riley gardening, to the end being all three gardening the old fashion way.

So far great job if you guys have any questions don't hesitate to reach out.

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Hi,I looked through the roughs a bit more and found they were going well at the moment I don’t have any particular notes as it is still in that process and after the next meeting I would have a more detail on the final outlook, since it may be better to focus on completing as I don’t have currently have any drastic changes that could impact your current outlook. So far it looks good if there is anything you would like me to note and see if you’re unsure feel free to reach out and let me know.

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Hi,I looked through the roughs a bit more and found they were going well at the moment I don’t have any particular notes as it is still in that process and after the next meeting I would have a more detail on the final outlook, since it may be better to focus on completing as I don’t have currently have any drastic changes that could impact your current outlook. So far it looks good if there is anything you would like me to note and see if you’re unsure feel free to reach out and let me know.

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Environments: The apartment building design is fine and won’t affect the final draft at any point.It would also add more into regards of diversity.Along with the idea of using chrome to discuss design language and the reflection also acting as a lead into the issue with the reflection of red potentially meaning chaos and the green reflection for the garden flourishing.Also the block for the helicopter design works and the likeness to birds works well.If any clarification is needed feel free to reach out.	Téa

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Environments: The apartment building design is fine and won’t affect the final draft at any point.It would also add more into regards of diversity.Along with the idea of using chrome to discuss design language and the reflection also acting as a lead into the issue with the reflection of red potentially meaning chaos and the green reflection for the garden flourishing.Also the block for the helicopter design works and the likeness to birds works well.If any clarification is needed feel free to reach out.	Téa

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Character Design:  The addition of the characters with the cultural background works I found that the research aspect was great and if you wanted to continue with that idea I can support by looking at different plants we can use for other characters in the background from the stock images .I believe the character description may be used in the final if not they would also work as background characters.  

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Character Design:  The addition of the characters with the cultural background works I found that the research aspect was great and if you wanted to continue with that idea I can support by looking at different plants we can use for other characters in the background from the stock images .I believe the character description may be used in the final if not they would also work as background characters.  

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Environments                                                                         The current environmental backgrounds work for the Nevada background we were looking for.Keeping with the block look shown in the sketches involving the day and night desert look works alongside elisars character style. If  you need any clarification or concerns feel free to email me at anytime - Téa

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Environments                                                                         The current environmental backgrounds work for the Nevada background we were looking for.Keeping with the block look shown in the sketches involving the day and night desert look works alongside elisars character style. If  you need any clarification or concerns feel free to email me at anytime - Téa

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Notes on Illustrations.                                               Character Design                                                         Each group having differing body types is a great start to the body positive angle discussed earlier. Also having each group diverse in a sense.The current characters work as backgrounds if not chosen for the original and the other cast of characters would serve well.Along with the idea of each child possibly growing something relating to their culture.                  

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Notes on Illustrations.                                               Character Design                                                         Each group having differing body types is a great start to the body positive angle discussed earlier. Also having each group diverse in a sense.The current characters work as backgrounds if not chosen for the original and the other cast of characters would serve well.Along with the idea of each child possibly growing something relating to their culture.                  

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Environment should prompt the need for a community garden. In a desert climate, people would have to come together to use the fertile soil to grow plants together. This location also provides the opportunity for cultural diversity + beautiful colour palette/colour contrast between the garden and the environment.

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coming up w more today/over the weekend as well! goal to have at least five trios to choose from :)

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Thin sleek reflective (would be awesome to paint with desert colours)

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Thin sleek reflective (would be awesome to paint with desert colours)

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- more clarity of cultural diversity in clothing/colour

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- More body diversity in characters!!
- Sets of threes for the main characters - old new smth in between

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Pixelated still life

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each garden section should match the character in some way

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quick sketches