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Nice and interesting story, Dayra. ¡Congratulations!. Good job.I have only a couple of recommendations that you should take into account when writing. First, check the correct use of punctuation, transition words, and grammar (Example: She was a very funny and intelligent girl. She liked to dance, listen to music, and study. She had to work hard to pay for her studies because she was poor.). Second, apply a pre-writing strategy before you start writing your paragraph, it will help you organize your ideas (Ex. She sometimes did not have time to finish her homework, and her classmates mocked her bout her skin color - In this case the sequence of ideas is not correct because there is not any relationship between those two ideas).  

# data[].attributes.subject
Nice and interesting story, Dayra. ¡Congratulations!. Good job.I have only a couple of recommendations that you should take into account when writing. First, check the correct use of punctuation, transition words, and grammar (Example: She was a very funny and intelligent girl. She liked to dance, listen to music, and study. She had to work hard to pay for her studies because she was poor.). Second, apply a pre-writing strategy before you start writing your paragraph, it will help you organize your ideas (Ex. She sometimes did not have time to finish her homework, and her classmates mocked her bout her skin color - In this case the sequence of ideas is not correct because there is not any relationship between those two ideas).  