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Presentation about Albuquerque International Ballon Fiesta

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Presentation about Albuquerque International Ballon Fiesta

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1972
Albuquerque, New Mexico,USA
October
Over 500 balloons
The largest hot air balloon festival in the world
The most photographed event on earth
The largest annual international event in the USA

Dawn Patrol
Before sunrise
Mass Ascensions
All participating balloons launch
Special Shape Rodeo
Many non-traditional, uniquely shaped balloons are launched at the same time.
Balloon Glows
Balloons stand static and do not take off during these events.
The "Glowdeo"
Time-line
1972
First Balloon Fiesta
13 hot air balloons
1993
AIBF also hosted the Gordon Bennett World Championship Gas Balloon Race.
Most photographed special event in the world with
1,708 photo journalists
receiving press credentials

950 balloon pilots
representing
18 countries
and
48 states
, with
1.612 million people
in attendance
(Turco, 1997)
Form
Now / outcomes
Remains as the largest ballooning event on earth
Most photographed event on earth
The largest annual international event held in United States
Size of Balloon Fiesta Park is as big as 54 football fields
FOODS
THE MUSEUM ANDERSON - ABRUZZO
HOTELS

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United States Size of Balloon Fiesta Park

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Albuquerque International Balloon Fiesta-Skill 5

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1972 Albuquerque, New Mexico,USA OctoberOver 500 balloons The largest hot air balloon festival in the world The most photographed event on earth The largest annual international event in the USA Dawn PatrolBefore sunrise Mass AscensionsAll participating balloons launchSpecial Shape RodeoMany non-traditional, uniquely shaped balloons are launched at the same time.

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Albuquerque International Balloon Fiesta

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Hi Diego,
As usual, you prepared yourself and many of your ideas were well structured, I liked a lot that you used present perfect in different opportunities. However, you need to pay attention to the pronunciation of some words: laws, liked, faced. additionally, you need to use connectors to make your ideas more organized when speaking. As well, we really need to work harder on the use of perfect modals and the organisation of ideas. You have been improving compared to the previous course, but still we need to work on using connectors when speaking and using the outline more effectively to sound more organized. Look for two more activities with perfect modals and show them to me before Friday. Additionally, I'd like you to record your voice with your speech of introduction and send it to me.

Task: Good
Platform: Very Good

Regards,
Anderson

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Hi Diego,
You did a very good job with the information you used to report the piece of news.  Additionally you tried to recycle indirect speech and recycled some vocabulary.  However, there were different issues with pronunciation that you need to pay more attention to: for example, you need to work on the pronunciation of numbers (1985= you said "985").  Also you said "sur" America.  The emphasis on the word EVENT.  Also with prepositions "we will talk ABOUT OF" you need just one preposition.  We need to continue working a lot on pronunciation and on the organization of ideas, also fluency.  Let's keep working on the recordings.

Task: GOOD
Workbook: Below (more work on the platform is necessary).

Regards,
Anderson

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On click here:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SQ4Dm6Uhqcg

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We invite you to watch our video, it is very interesting and funny, isn't it?

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Hi Diego,
Your presentation was interesting and the alternative medicine as well.  I liked that you used past perfect on the presentation.  great.
As I told you before, you need to pay more attention to the organization of your ideas, sometimes they  sound too spanglish: you said: "in the world have a debate" "that have homeopathy..." those ideas don't make any sense in English, do not think in Spanish.  additionally, pay attention to your pronunciation: homeopathy, prescribe, created, etc....
Grade: Good minus
We need to continue working on your speaking, especially on the organization of your ideas and your pronunciation.

Action plan: record your voice and send me a two-minute whatsapp message  answering this question: what's your opinion on conventional medicine vs alternative medicine.  send it to me on Thursday July 7.

Platform: very good.

Cordially,
Anderson

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Hi Diego,

I want to congratulate you for your work, you made a good presentation, you kept some principles of public speaking and you led them in a good way with your speech outline. Your pronunciation has improved which allowed understand the topic of your alternative medicine. I want to give some suggestions: When you make your speech, don’t look only to the teacher but keep in touch with the public, if you forget a line of discourse can comment on what you said earlier. Finally try to correct the catchphrase "ehhhhh". And I almost forgot, use tag questions. I’ll see you in class.

Christian Porras

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Homeopathy

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https://youtu.be/SRKrbXEbEvU

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http://vocaroo.com/i/s1b0Rr1CnrAn
Click on link to listen to your feedback.

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Hello Diego, I listened your podcast and it's an interesting story. It's important to improve your fluency when you are speaking. You completed the task correctly, you used the past perfect, tag questions and the order of the outline.  

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Hello Diego, I listened your podcast and it's an interesting story. It's important to improve your fluency when you are speaking. You completed the task correctly, you used the past perfect, tag questions and the order of the outline.  

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Good job Diego, bye

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Hi. Diego.
Your podcast is complete and you used correctly the past perfect.  Howewer, to my mind, you should improve your pronunciation, fluency and intonation especially in tag questions.

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My first podcast-Diego Moreno

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Just are rules or etiquette that apply when communicating over computer, networks, especially the internet.

STEPS

1. Stop:

Do I remember that everything online is potentially viewed by anyone and everyone?

Am I sensitive about what I will say and how?

2. Think:

Is what I'm about to write appropriate?

Is it professional, polite, and respectful?

Does it hurt anyone, intentionally or not?

3. Write:

Have I included a subject in the subject line?

Is my content grammatically correct and coherent?

Is it addressed to the correct person?

Bibliography:
http://edtech2.boisestate.edu/gretelpatch/502/netiquette.html