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What is a barcode? Look on the  bottom of a cereal box .Do you see  a group of black lines and white spaces ?that is a barcode !A barcode identifys a products in a store .The thin lines , thick lines , and  white spaces are used in a driffent  pattern on every single product .It is like a fingerprint for an item in a store.

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January is a fun month. It snows a lot where I live. I like to play in the snow.
My brother likes to play in the snow too. We make snowballs and snow houses. I once made a snowman that was five feet tall! When it gets dark,we go inside,but we know when we can go back out until the next day.

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What is a barcode? Look on the bottom of a cereal box. Do you see  a group of black lines and spaces? That is a barcode !  A barcode identifies a product in a store. The thin lines, thick lines, and white spaces are used in a different pattern on every single product. It is like a fingerprint for item in a store.

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What is a barcode? Look on the bottom of a cereal box . Do you see a group of black lines and spaces? That is a barcode ! A barcode identifies a product in a store . The thin lines, thick lines,and white spaces are used in a different pattern on every single product . It is like a fingerprint for an item in a store.

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Walt Disney lived on a farm when he was a young boy. From an early age, Walt liked to draw animals. He watched the farm animals carefully and made drawings of them. Walt's family did not have money for paper, but Walt was clever. He drew a pig on the wall of his house. Walt's parents were not happy. Then Walt's aunt gave him drawing paper.

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What is a city bird like? Many birds that live in cities are pigeons. These birds are usually found on city sidewalks and on building rooftops. A pigeon weighs about half a pound. It can fly up to 60 miles per hour. Most pigeons live for 10 to 15 years.

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January is a fun month. It snows where I live. I like to play in the snow. My brother likes to play in the snow. We make snowballs and snow houses,I once made a snowman hats was five feet tall! When it gets dark, we go inside , but we know we can go out again the next day

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You are  in the car, you come to a big lake, and there is no bridge. How do you get across? In some places, you can take a boat called a ferry. A car ferry has ramps so you can drive onto the boat. Some ferries are for trains; these boats have tracks on them. Both kinds of ferries are over 300 feet long.

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You are in a car. You come to a big lake. There is no bridge. How do you get across? In some places, you can take a boat called a ferry. A car ferry has ramps so you can drive on to the boat. Saome ferries are for trains. These boats have tracks on them. Both kinds of ferries are over 300 feet long.

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What is a barcode? Look on the bottom of a cereal  box. Do you see a group of black lines and spaces? That is a barcode! A barcode identifies a product in a store. The thin lines, thick lines, and white spaces are used in a different pattern on every single product. It is like a fingerprint for an item in a store.

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January is a fun month. It snows a lot where I live. I like to play in the snow. My brother likes to play in the snow.  We make snowballs and snow houses. I once made a snowman that was five feet  tall  !  When it gets dark , we go inside. We know we can go out again the next day.

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What's a city bird like? Many birds that live in cities are pigeons. These birds are usually found on city sidewalks and on building rooftops. A pigeon weighs about half a pound! It can fly up to 60 miles per hour. Most pigeons live for 10 to 15 years.

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Walt Disney lived on a farm when he was a young boy. From an early age , Walt liked to draw animals. He watched the farm animals carefully and made drawings of them. Walt's family did not have enough money for paper, but Walt was clever. He drew a pig on the wall of his house. Walt's parents were not happy. Then, Walt's aunt gave him drawing paper.

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January is a fun month.
It snows a lot where I live.
I like to play in the snow.
My brother also likes to play in the snow .
We make snowballs and snow houses .I once made a snowman that was five feet tall !
When it gets dark we go inside .
We know we can go out again the next day.

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What is a city bird like ? Many birds  are pigeons . These birds are usually found on city sidewalks and on building rooftops . A pigeon weighs about half a pound ! It can fly up to 60 miles per hour ; most pigeons live for 10 to 15 years.

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January is a fun month. It snows a lot where I live. I like to play in the snow . My brother likes to play in snow,too .We make snowballs and snow houses. I once made a snow man that was five feet tell ! When it gets dark, we go inside , but we know we can go out again the next day.

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What is a city bird like? Many bird that live in Cities are pigeons. These birds are usually found on City sidewalks and on building rooftops A Pigeon weighs about half a pound! it can fly up to 60 miles per hour. most pigeons live for 10 to 15 years.

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Walt Disney lived on a farm when he was a young boy. From an early age, Walt liked to draw animals. He watched the farm animals carefully and made drawings of them. Walt's family did not have money for paper, but Walt was clever. He drew a pig on the wall of his house. Walt's parents were not happy! Then Walt's aunt gave him drawing paper.

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