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YOU PEOPLE NEED A SNICKER

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i got better at writing a hook.

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i need to reed the articl more and nothing

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I learned that i needed to dig deeper in the article

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it helped

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it helped me learn to paraphrase

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i learned how to properly site evidence from the

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i got better at writing a hook and i am still struggling with a conclusions

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learned how not to do quotes better.

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i learned how o explain evidence more and fix my mistakes im still having trouble not writing as much

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i learned how o explain evidence more and fix my mistakes im still having trouble not writing as much

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I learned how to make my evidence better and i need more help with conclusions.

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learned how to cite evidence

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i learned that you need to find as much evidence as you can

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As i wrote this TDA i learned how to not plagarise.

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I learned to write my conclusion I need to work on paraphrasing

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I learned to be more wordy, but we couldn't use some words like animals because it's considered "plagerizm", I mean really

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It helped me get better at writing a TDA and putting quotes into an essay. Something that I am still having trouble with is sometimes still Plagarism.

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I learned that i needed to dig deeper in the article and think more on what i write.┌( ಠ‿ಠ)┘

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I learned how to write a claim. What was difficult was that if i had to do all of that my self.

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I learned how easy it is for me to write  and while we are doing this story i have  learned so much about the Burmese Python and how cool it is and while doing this i learned so much about these pythons and this story is really interesting so far.

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Go over my sentences more and fix the problems that i get in my sentences.I need to start writing more towards the end and not rushing to get in done.

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i learned how to site evidence

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I learned how to cite the evidence better and to explain it. I still have trouble how to paraphrase still

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i learned all about the snakes that they can be as wide as a telephone pole and can be

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As I wrote this text dependent analysis I learned how to make a lot better of a body paragraph.

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I learned how to cite my evidence  better  and I need to work in writing enough

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How to paraphrase better and ow to work by myself /:

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i learned how to explain my evidence  better but i think i need more help with my intro more.

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i learned to source my evidence better and to make a good hook ヽ( ͝° ͜ʖ͡°)ﾉ

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This TDA helped me to paraphrase and use more descriptive words. I still struggle with citing evidence and finding evidence.

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i learned a lot while i was writing this like citing eveidence and pharaphrase better and make sure i dont plagerise and lots of other things

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I learned how to cite better and how to write a better essay overall.

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I learned how to write a good intro. One thing that I still need help on is writing a good conclusion.

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I learned how to better improve my writing skills when writing an intro to my article, it was difficult for me to find the properly quote my sources

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I learned how to better improve my writing skills when writing an intro to my article, it was difficult for me to find the properly quote my sources

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As we did this TDA it helped me get better when i paraphrase a quote and I learned how to properly cite my evidence.

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When we started this TDA I learned how to paraphrase better. I still struggle to cite my evidence.

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I learned to cite my evidence more and something that is still difficult for me to do is finding the right evidence to use

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I learned how to cite my evidence. I still need help on how to give background information.

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I learned how to properly cite text and I don't find anything else hard or difficult.

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i learned that instead of plagiarism you can paraphrase  and informative TDA are easy to do eassys on

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I learned to source evidence better and collect evidence  but i'm still bad at siting evidence

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I learned when writing my TDA essay on Burmese pythons that sometimes instead of using a quote paraphrasing is better. I still need help with how to transition from one sentence to another without repeating myself.

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I learned how to paraphrase better.

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I learned to cite evidence better while doing this TDA. I still have trouble with finding evidence.

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I learned that I'm much better at writing at YEA than last year.

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I learned how to how to cite evidence better and I need help with writing.

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I learned how to make research easier by organizing the evidence next to the parts you want to add to your essay in your own words.

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What I learned from the tda is how to cite evidence and how using evidence from the text to support my statement.

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I learned how to collect evidence and how to cite

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I learned to give

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I learn how to use signal word when i'm quoting something.

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During this TDA I learned more about how to quote and paraphrase better.

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I learned that you can be doing plagiarism when you are trying to paraphrase. I am still bad with citing evidence.

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I learned

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I learned to cite the articles used to make this TDA as well as their authors. Finding synonyms for certain words are difficult for me because I cannot use a thesaurus.

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Stephanie De La Cruz-Iniguez ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

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Stephanie De La Cruz-Iniguez ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

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I learned how to get better evidence and write better. Writing paragraphs is still a little difficult though.

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This Burmese Python TDA taught me a multitude of new things that i can show improvement in. The first one of which was how it showed me to create an easier flow in my writing by adding the authors source and by paraphrasing. One of the other things I now know how to do better is how to correctly cite evidence while still keeping the reader informed and entertained. One of the last things I learned from this TDA is how to make it even easier to find evidence.

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just hva e a seaarch

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I learned that to paraphrase better. I am still struggling with writing a good hook.

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i learned how to properly cite evidence

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I learned how to paraphrase and and cite my evidence better.

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I learned how to collect evidence better in this TDA and I am still struggling with what to write for my thesis statement and conclusion.

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I learned to write a better introduction. This was a bit difficult.

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I learned that there needs to be more evidence to support your statement, and that signal words are important. With this I also was taught that multiple paragraphs help get the message out clearer

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I learned to use quotes for any words i took directy from the text

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it helped me find evidence and use quotes.

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I learned to have patience when writing a tda and to use signal words when quoting.

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I learned how to paraphrase better and i learned how  to write better.

Doing the wrighting.

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I learned to use quotes and show where I got it from.

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i learned better transition

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I learned how to find and collect evidence more officiant and find good evidence

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This TDA helped me understand how to cite evidence out of an article and it helped me get a basic understanding of how to write a decent document using text dependent usage. It wasn't hard for me, even though sometimes it took me a while to search for specific evidence in an article, and once i got what i needed i went through this TDA like a breeze. Also, this TDA made an amazing way to help me in the making of how to paraphrase better than before.

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One thing I learned that i should do better is to put in my sources and give credit to the author. It is still difficult to remember to use different words than the author used in the article.

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I learned that you should not just use quotes and to paraphrase.

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I learned how to quote and paraphrase my evidence better

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I learned to close read and how to organize a paper better then I did before.

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I learned how to quote my evidence better and then paraphrase on it. it was still difficult to create a hook/claim.

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I learned to always use the claim at the end of your introduction paragraph. It was a little easier due to us doing the TDA of Burmese Pythons beforehand. But it was difficult to word the first paragraph due to I not having a hook in the first place.

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I learned to use better transition words. What is the most difficult to me is coming up with a good conclusion.