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Glow: You had a strong voice while presenting. You also had good control of the website while recording.
Grow: The video was a bit short. Even though you went through all your tabs maybe you could have infused more transition words to make it flow better.

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Glow: You made the presentation very personal which was cool and engaging
Grow: I might not have so many side comments because then you have speech dysfluencies like "um"s and "uh"s and it detracts from the focus of the presentation.

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Glow: You spoke very clearly and I like how you gave examples of when the digital tools could be used.
Grow: Your video fell a little short on time but you were able to explain everything pretty well so maybe you could have just added one or two more examples.

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Glow: Your voice inflections was really good and kept the video interesting.
Grow: You did really well so there's not much to critique on. The only thing might be that in the beginning of the video your pauses between each topic was kind of long so it felt like the video was paused instead of naturally done.

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Glow: It was a good presentation with thorough explanations.
Grow: I think it would be helpful to introduce yourself and/or do a little introduction for the webpage, this would also help you add time to your video.

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Glow: I like that you decided to show your face during the video. It's an added challenge because you can't distract from the presentation.
Grow: Your voice was very clear/ good inflection but I would work on being a little more concise

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Glow: I liked your introduction and how you explained your lesson plan.
Grow: It was a good presentation but if I needed to give a grow maybe add an example or some more commentary to add a little time to the presentation.

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Glow: You sounded really proud of your work which was nice to hear and I think it helped you give clear examples of what the digital tools were.
Grow: I might add a little more voice inflection as it helps students know when something is more important and to keep them engaged.

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Glow: I really liked your introduction because it gave the audience an understanding of where you add and it made the presentation more effective.
Grow: You had a few "um"s throughout but it was pretty minor.

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Glow: I liked how you introduced yourself and your voice was very engaging/ easy to listen to.
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Glow: You explained the different digital tools very well and had good inflection.
Grow: You had some pauses where you could maybe add transitions to help the video flow and that would also help add a little more time to your video.

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Glow:You spoke very clearly and explained your site very thoroughly.
Grow: I think adding more inflection to your voice at some points would help make the presentation more engaging.

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Glow: I liked how thorough you were in describing the different parts of your website. Your rate of speech was really good too.
Grow: You had a couple of "uh"s in there that made it tough to focus on the content of what you were saying

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Glow: I really liked your video. You explained the benefit of each tool very well and kept it engaging.
Grow: You had some speech dysfluency like "you know" and "uhs" which is ust something to be aware of.

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Glow: Your voice was really clear and you explained everything well
Grow: You were kind of choppy when you took pauses, you sounded confident in your content but the pauses threw me off a little.

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Glow: I liked how you explained your lesson plan, it was very informative and hit all the main points.
Grow: Your video was kind of choppy in the beginning but that's more of a video issue than something you did.

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Glow: You had a very clear and consistent voice and i liked how you had personal experience with your assistive technologies.
Grow: It was a really good presentation. I guess something to add/change might be some of the pauses you had in between pages but it didn't really impact the presentation overall just something to keep in mind.

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Glow: I really liked how you presented the different sites, it was informative and concise.
Grow: I might suggest using more inflection with your words in order to help keep the students engaged.

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Glow: Your presentation was very thorough and clear.
Grow: Your inflection was a little off, there was too much emphasis on "my" and "I".