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i need to work on putting periods in my essays

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Learned about good and bad essays

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i need to work on my transitons in paragraph

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i needto make scene of what im writing and to stay on topic

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i need to stay on topic when im writing and make scene of things

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I learnt what to put in a good essay or what to put in a good essay to make it  a great essay.
I need to work on my formation of my writing and to not keep repeating myself.

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staying on topic and not running out of things to say

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There are good and bad essays

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I learned that good essays consist of long sentences, they need to flow correctly, and need to have correct punctuation. #2 My area of weakness is making my essays make since and making them long enough.

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1) I learned that there are certain formats for essays and if you don´t follow those instructions then you essay wont be that good.
2)I always repeat myself and it seems like i

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comment #1
Good essays consist of long sentences, they need to flow properly and need to have correct punctuation.
Comment #2
My area of weakness making my essay long enough and thinking of what to write.

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my weaknesses are typing essays because i dont really now what to say

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1) I learned that some people are better writers than others.
2) I need to work on transition sentences for the beginning of a paragraph.

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comment #1 are that we need to make good grades comment #2 my weakness is saying the same thing over and over again in my essay.

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1) I learned that a good essay consist of good sentence structure
2) I need to work on my punctuation at the end of my sentences

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that we need to make good scene of what we are talking about and make sure we stay on topic.

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my weaknesses are typing long essays because i run out of things to say.

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I learned that my essays need to be long and make since  and go with what the question says.