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My essay came a long way

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I need to italicize the title

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I need to add quotes.

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editing more and have better trasitions

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i did well on my conclusion

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I think that I did not give enough evidence to support my claims. I did however use some, but once again I don't think I had enough.

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I think my conclusion was good

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The transitions between my body paragraphs need work

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I think I was able to form a deeper meaning very well, and that I edited thoroughly. I also enjoy how my quotes and examples assisted my thinking and helped the reader understand.

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My paragraphs were a little disorganized and I could have made the topics more clear.

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Q U O T E S.

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I think I used a lot of good evidence from the text

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I would like to use more synonyms, so that I don't repeat the same word too many times.

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My sentences were good but not amazing.

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I thought my body paragraphs were the perfect length and had a lot of background information and flowed really well.

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I liked my main ideas and think I went in detail explaining them.

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I wrote things from the text

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I think I had an opening paragraph

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putting down my ideas fast on paper

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i want to grow on making paragraphs

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I want to improve my hooks, and have better reasoning

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At first I had trouble finding topic sentences

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Something that I found I did will with my essay, is I believed I had a strong opening and beginning. I thought I interested the reader enough to want to know more in my introduction, and I thought I had a bit of a cliff hanger for my conclusion.

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My paragraphs had unique, original, ideas. I liked how I used evidence to describe and support my thoughts.

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Intro. Conclusion.

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I liked my idea of the essay. I think all the paragraphs came out the way  I hoped they would.

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I enjoyed my Introduction and concluding paragraph