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1. During the producing time, I had lots of disputes with my partner.
2.Finally we had agreement due to the fact that embodies more fashionable T-shirt.
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1. Creativity can offer you a brainstorm to see through the essence of the matter.
2. Painting and archery bring me happiness and are like indicating lights which navigate me in life.
3. I think it makes me connectwith archery ealier than other children.

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1. In my opinion, creativity is a kind of ability to create some new ideas, or invent some new thing.
2. It is not a tiring or boring experience.
3. These abilities could be generating electricity by solar power and tidal energy, purifying water from the ocean or cultivating plants so that human can solve the world population problems, world water crisis and world energy issue.
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1. What will make us be creativity?
2. Brave is a main important reason to make a person be creativity.
3. The fail also is a common event.
4. Nowadays, hard working is not the only reason for success.
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1.In the past creativity bring me a lot of benefits.
2.When I introduce our produce to other group and buyers.
3.I true believe that creativity bring me benefit.

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1.And I want to be a music aficionado.

2.But he does not have enough based knowledge.

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1. I think it means that if you thinking in a logical way.
2. Leaves must be paint with green.
3. I like to making stories and share them with my parents and friends.
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1. So be creative allow me to improve my writhing and take me out of the circle.

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1.This way makes me have a lot friends in a new environment and they really help me either with life in MSU or with my study.

2.I always cook with MSU schoolmates and we exchange our best food.

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1. I can play many kinds of sports, so it allows me to have opportunities to make various friends, and it also applies to the now of my American life.

2. My ideal creativity person is to be able to come up with a good idea, and tell someone this.

3. It made me be more Japanese, it means that to act correctly in formal situations, or how to touch with a superior person, and let me have some knowledge about Japanese culture I hadn't known.

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1.There is a famous theory from the Israel government which is called the Tenth Man Principle.

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1. It will be more thriled than you thought.

2.Having creativity thinking can encourage me to be more confidence.
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1.Any impossible may happen in there.

2.This example makes me realizing that human not built this city, creativity did.

3.However, I think creativity is persistent.

4.People need brave to explore the desert.

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1. So this story tell us, a little bit of change will make a big different deal.

2. I went to Meijer and buy a box with is comprise of iron sticks and strips

3.Creativity is benefitted to anyone.

4. I think this idea is creative and intelligence.

5. This lecture talks about the influent of smartphone to people especially young.

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I believe creative can bring countless possible to me, like helps me to create a great photo.